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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishra_Sona

Hey buddy...

It was a super duper update...
Loved Ishra scene...
But how come Raman suddenly changed...
And y no precap...
And the forehead kiss was...😳
Continue soon...


Thanks dear... 😊
RKB ko change hone ka man kar raha dha toh... 😆 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sarsyed

Gayathreee update jaldiii😃


Haan... Dear... I'll try... 😃
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Yeah sure...but wait some more... 😊
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finally lust kumar change awww he started falling for her i loved this update
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Aaj pakka cutie... 😊
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Hi Kutties... 😊

Here goes the next part...

BOLD writing 🤬

Ignore typos and other errors

Not proofread

Enjoy reading...😃




Chapter-12

RHAPSODY OF LOVE




ISHITA'S POV


He intently looked at me expecting me to ask about his sudden plan. I was hell nervous. So kept mum. But he probed me to ask him.


What's wrong with him?


After a lot of mental practice, I asked him on the same. Apart from replying me he sighed a relief for not calling him mama. His face was worth watching when I said that I'll think on whether to call him mama or not. He seemed so cute today. At the same time I felt him so disturbed by something. I so wanted to console him. But I was afraid.


Is admi ka Horny Mode kab activate hoga yeh kisi ko nahi pata...Arrghhh...!"

(No one can say when his Horny Mode gets activated)


He himself told me about him going to visit his papa. Somehow he made me feel guilty. He is slowly opening up to me whilst I'm not even disclosing my real identity to him. I looked at him blankly and asked the reason for the sudden decision. I don't know what made him so fragile? Is it my question or the mention of his father?


Sitting near him I let him hold my hands. When he told me that he never met his father, my heart skipped a bit. Then his revelation that HE IS LIKE HIM...HE IS LIKE HIS FATHER which makes him bitter, was a threshold for me to enter his HEART.


Yes...I do want to enter his heart


His playboy attitude, rudeness towards women are all the result of his gene; his father.


I so hate that man for making my Raman like him!


Even after having so much bitterness, I tried to pacify him by purifying fatherhood. I cupped one of his cheeks and tenderly adviced him. His eyes welled up when he said that his papa is not wonderful as I said to him.


Oh...his cute pout! I really wanted to taste his lips He made me randy...!


I couldn't help but say that I LOVE MY RAVAN KUMAR MORE. Thank God he didn't notice. Otherwise, what would have happened to me Murugan...!


He said it is HARD TO BE HARD! What does that mean? Does he mean that he is acting to be a hard-bone person? Or does he mean that he want to be soft at times? I didn't get him at all.


I covered him in a warm hug while he clung on to me as if I'm his everything. Patting his back I kept on saying sweet things on fatherhood. He hummed on hearing each and every word of mine. His head still embedded in my chest. I asked him if he is ok when I felt him breathing normally IN ME, for which he responded with another hum. I stroked his hair and called him again to hear him faintly saying something, "I Lo...I...I'm gonna miss you..."


OMG...did he just...Oh God...Murugan...He was about to say it...This man...! Why did he stop? It was near!


He must gave heard my drumming heart beat. Parting from me, he kissed my forehead sooo...gently (lovingly *Blush*). I was flying high. I felt like I got wings and a batch of maidens carried me away to heaven to relish the moment. My feet was not touching the ground at all. *Sigh* I didn't realise him leaving me to go.


This man is crazy! When I don't want him to do something...He will do the unexpected and when I want him to go on...He is ignoring me!


I called him from behind to stop him. His steps halted but he didn't turn to me. So I pulled him softly (Lovingly *Blush*) towards me.Wounding my hands around his neck, I examined his reaction. Such a dramebaz...he is showing indifference! But I was not the one to leave him so easily. I took his left hand in mine and made him clutch my waist.


Well...I know I'm becoming bold. I too never thought that I will do it. Moreover, it was ticklish *Blush* His hands were doing wonders to me. Awee...!!!


His free hand volunteered itself to lock my waist and he pulled me fondly (Lovingly *blush*) to him. I raised my heels to match his height, thereby pressing my soft flesh on to his hard torso.


Ayyo amma...gudgudi ho rahi hai mujhe...! Whether he can feel my hmm...!

(I'm feeling ticklish)


I shrugged off the thoughts and focused on his cheeks.


His clean shaven cheeks will be so yummy!


After pleasing my hands by caressing his cheek, I gave the pleasure to my lips. I whispered in his ears that I'll be waiting for him. Am I gone made. So much of his intimacies never made me go this wild. Just a forehead kiss...just an effort to open up...made me act as if HE IS MINE AND I ONLY HAVE THE RIGHT TO SEE HIM IN HIS VULNERABILITIES!


He pulled me to another bone crushing embrace when I freed from him. He was also in the same state. CONFUSION!


I was in cloud nine as if I conquered the world in a kiss. I wanted to share my happiness to someone. Mku is the only one handy. But I now curse myself for choosing her for sharing such a matter. Especially about her nemesis kissing me. I should have been careful. A small slip of tongue made everithing upside down!


"But Miku... He never kissed me on my forehead..."


Any fool can guess the inner meaning I've unintentionally added to it.

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Mihika: Frowning in shock, "That clearly means that he kissed you somewhere... Don't tell me that I'm right akka..."


Ishita began to stammer in front of her little sister while Mihika stared at her as if she is a most wanted criminal.


Mihika:In disbelief, "Akka...how could you let him touch you?"


Ishita: Miserably, "He is not that bad...!"


Mihika: Throwing her hands either side indicating there is nothing to talk, "You're gone case. You proved to be like other girls akka...That Jerk Bhalla will take advantage of you...!"


Ishita: Feeling offended, "No he won't"


Mihika: "How...how can you say that?"


Ishita: "Becauae...because I want him not to..."


Mihika: Calming down, "Do you LOVE him akka?"


Ishita nods in affirmative bending her head down. Mihika takes her in her embrace and mumbles, "He's not worth you...not worth you akka..."


Ishita: After breaking the hug, "But...I LOVE him...I know he is bad...No the worst person I've ever seen. I hate...I hate myself for falling for him. But Miku...I can't help LOVING him. I tried my best not to do it...my heart is no more with me. I'm sorry I disappointed you."


Mihika: "Don't be akka...LOVE...it's not in our hands...But you would have choose someone better...!"


Ishita: Pouting cutely, "I failed!"


Mihika: Furrowing her eyebrows, "So what's next? You wanna give him a chance?"


Ishita: "Yes...but I'm afraid..."


Mihika: "Enna achu?"

(What happened?)


Ishita: "My name..."


Mihika: "Oh..it is simple...! We'll tell him before he goes from here."


Ishita: "That is not the big deal Miku..."


Mihika: "Then what is the big deal akka?"


Ishita: In a shivering tone, "He may leave me..."


Mihika: Bemused, "Why...? Why would he leave you?"


Ishita: "Abhimanyu Raghav!"


Mihika: Smacking her head, "Ada aathaadi...I've forgot about that Clingu."


Ishita: "Raman may sacrifice me for Mani and may hate me for lying to him...cheating him..."


Mihika: "Don't cry akka...Nothing will go wrong. I'll see to it. I'll do anything for your happiness..."


Ishita: "Will Raman understand me?"


Mihika: "Yeah he will..."


Mihika to herself: "As far as I know him...Raman Bhalla is gonna stangle both of us for making fun of him...lying to him...!!!"



NEXT MORNING

BHALLA HOUSE



The Iyers arrived so early to see off Raman from his place. Abhi was an unexpected extra-fitting there to make the Iyer sisters feel awkward. Raman was not at all enjoying the presence of Abhi and Ishita together. He was feeling jealous, which he admitted inwardly. They were not standing together but far way. But he felt so insecure about them, because he wasn't sure about Ishita's feeling for him. Moreover, she had roared on top of her voice that she loves that Mani of hers. Albeit, he counted it as a momentary outburst. Although, he badly needed a reassurance.


He wanted to prolong the moments in anyway or to stop going away so that he can be with HIS LAXMI. He excused nicely to the elders to let him talk to her. After a teasing session from his mothers, he got to spend some time with her. Mihika eyebrowed her to carry on while Abhi fisted his hands thinking that Ishita is doing it out of helplessness.


RAMAN'S BEDROOM


He closed the door behind him after making sure that she is inside. She didn't mind asking him about it, but looked on in awe at the interior of the room and spit out uknowingly, "WOW Raman...this is going to be our bedroom...!"


He smiled at her excitement and of course on the realisation of her accepting him as her future. What more he need as an assurance?


Raman: To lighten the moment, "But we'll be spending mostly in Mumbai."


He failed big time to lighten it. On the other hand made it out of control. His thick voice was that made her jerk-off from her stupor. She was talking her heart out just the way she did to Mihika last night. Nervousness is a ghost. It catches hold so fast!


She was vibrating like anything when he began to close the distance. She walked backwards not facing him or the floor. He fastened his arms around her waist to pull her closer. But she wriggled out making both of them fall on the bed.


He watched each and every movement of her beneath him. Her darted eyes; looking for something to focus on other than him. Her restless lips; trying to engage in something other than to let him engage them. Her apple cheeks; quivering and boiling under his fire-like eyes. Her hands; pulling and patting on the bed and duvet to kill her urge to hug him tight.


Raman: Drawing patterns on her cheek with the back of his palm, "Look at me.."


She just hummed but didn't dare to do it. So he pulled her cheek softly making her look at him with a pout.


Raman: "I want a kiss...of life"


Ishita: Confusedly, "You'd did it earlier also..."


Raman: Burly, "No I never..."


He began to rub her luscious lips with his thumb. She just let him do it. After making her drown in the pleasure, he took her hand and began to make her stroke his lips.


She chewed her lips when she felt his softness touching her finger. She couldn't ignore his need to be pleasued by her. So she opened her eyes slightly and stroked his lips along the way to his jawline. Her hands traversed to his neck while her lips found their destiny in his eyes.


Giving the most heavenly angel kiss on his eyes, she fell back on the bed with him in her arms. The rhapsodic beat of their heart was the only thing resonated in the room.


There he again did it!


Kissing her forehead ever so tenderly (Lovingly *Blush*) he whispered against there, "YOU WON...!"




TO BE CONTINUED...


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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly thanks for pm kanna:-)

I dnt no y..im getting negative vibration ...when im reading this update..%-)%-)%-)

ISHITA POV:
when i said that i'll think on whether to call him MAMA or NOT..

HE SEEMED SO CUTE TODAY...YEH LINES KIS KALIYE AUTHOR SAIBA%-)%-)%-)

NO ONE CAN SAY WHEN HIS HORNY MODE GETS ACTIVATED...HMM EXPERIENCE:-P:-P:-P:-PKAAM ARAHA HAI BETI:-P:-P:-P

HIS ATTITUDE,RUDNESS ALL ARE COME FROM HIS GENE...
ha ha ha we know that%-)%-)%-):-P:-P

yes...I DO WANT TO ENTER HIS HEART...NOW SHE ACCEPTING HIM COMPLETELY;-);-);-)

OH!HIS CUTE POUT!U REALLY WANTED TO TASTE HIS LIPS...:-*:-*:-*

OYE AMMA...YEH BOLD KUMARI KAB BAN GAYA'%-):-P:-OB-):-P:-OB-)

hey she heared him faintly saying I LOV...I..
o shut y did he stop!

THIS LINES CRACKING ME:

This man is crazy,when i dnt WANT HIM TO DO SOMETHING...HE WILL DO THE UNEXPECTED AND WHEN I WANT HIM TO GO ON...HE IS IGNORING ME...:-O:-O:-O

AYYO SHE IS READY FOR THAT...BABY DIS APPOINTED BADLY:-P:-P:-P:-P:-P

JUST FORHEAD KISS...MAKE HER OPEN UP HER FEELINGS...;-);-);-)
SHE OPEN HER HEART TO GIVE ENTRY TICKET TO HIM:->:->%-)%-)%-):-O:-O

she share with mihika everything...
BUT SHE SCARE TO LOST RAMAN BCOZ OF MANI AND HER IDENTITY...

I ALSO FEEL THE SAME..HOW RAMAN WILL REACT...SACRIFICE KUMAR BAN GAYA TOH:-(:-(:-(

ALL iyears went to bhallas house...Yeh abhi GAY kya kar raha hai..kabab mai haadi:-P:-P:-P
mani not easily give up ishita...

RAMAN BEDROOM:

WOW RAMAN ...THIS IS GOING TO BE OUR BED ROOM...
YIPEE PUTTAR KA MAAN MAI LADDU PUUT RAHA HAI...:-O:-O;-);-);-)

SHE ACCEPTED HIM AS HER FUTURE;-)

I LOVE THIS LINES:

I WANT A KISS...OF LIFE%-):-O:-OB-)
U DID IT EARLIER ALSO:-O:-OB-):-O
NO I NEVER...%-)%-)%-)

SO he never accepted a women till now except ishita...he just want to satisfy his manhood he did xxx with women...it is not LOVE MAKING:-P:-O:-P:-P:-P

He want to lead his life with ishita...opps laxmi:-P:-P:-O:-O

THERE HE AGAIN DID IT...:->:-/:-OB-):-*%-):-P;-):-D:-)
KISSING HER FORHEAD EVER SO TENDERY...

YOU WON...I THINK IT IS INCOMPLETE...CONVERSATION.

..



YOU WON..IT MEANS ISHITA WON RAMANS LOVE..;-);-);-)
SHE WINS RAMAN HEART...
FINALLY RAMAN LOST IN HER LOVE...;-);-);-);-)


waiting for next part...BUT I MISSED MY LUST KUMAR...
Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
so ishu finally said she loves him nd want nly fr him...

ishu fear can b understood...bcoz raman is impulsive...

y raman said ishu won..?/

bcoz he finally knw tht he is loving her or want to gve her freedom frm the relation...

updte soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow she said to mihika she love him even knowing how he is wow

she said he is not bad too that call love is blind


n he like how she love their room fall on bed in his arms too just feel his lips wow

gaya you are brillant dear love this part n love you too thx for pm too
Edited by pretty_h - 10 years ago
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Finally love is in the air...
Ittu pyaara update Gaya3 di...
Pyaar pyaar pyaar... *blush*
Literally blushing and all smiling...

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