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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG !!!

shehnaz di this is something really amazing

pehle toh the lenght was fabulous...

mujhe aadhi khushi lenght dekh ke hi mil jati hain 😆😆

now the OS

i dnt have wors

sacchi..

this was really mind-blowing

if i would say anything it wont be up tot he mark

so i would just give you a salute..

and thanks for the PM

please come back soon

and PM me

i'm waiitng

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

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Posted: 11 years ago

Supab os
love each n every bit of it

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ArYa/Ash

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Posted: 11 years ago

it wass along onee but.i enjoyed reading...

hayeee aap aise hi bol rahe the.. I'll sleeep...

bt itttsss amziiinnn oneee... <3

thanxx fr pm

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was a Superb OS 😃...

Everything about this was Amazing 👍🏼...

Rey's character , then Kria's secret wala character , they were great ...

Rey's Possessiveness , Kria's feelings evrything was described very well...

I didn't have the slightest idea k Kria Crime Officer nikle gi 😆...

This ws a really great wal OS 👍🏼...

Me loved it ❤️...

N thanks for the pm 😊

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

woww u r back🤗

even though it s longgg i loveedd ittt⭐️

beautifully penned down👍🏼

rey's possessiveness was soopeerrr

so kria s d officer and gautam s her brother😉

totally loved ittt❤️

totally an amazinggg one😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG...that was one explosive piece of writing...Loved it would be an understatement...u have a very urban style of writing which fitted to the subject so aptly...loved the flow of events ...there was never a point to wait and think ...it was smartly layered ...

From the unknow attraction to the twist of stripping bar and the happenings which followed...

Rey's feeling ..his emotional outburst..Kria's sudden deadly move came as a shocker...

It had a Crime drama feel to it...loved the flow and stylish way of portraying an undercover officer and her affair...

Keep writing dear😊...that was an amazing write up 👏👏👏

Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Naina..
Opened

Thanks! 😊

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