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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice story...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
NT ne maan ko sach bata diya. but

maan ko kya hogaya??
hope he is fine..
cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update, my blog links do not work so it is ok I get your pm's and read whatever is there on if.
This Naintara is always creating trouble for everyone, hopefully Maan will not get too carried away and get angry with Dev and Geet.
Thnx
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG!! maan ko kya huya...Achchha hoga ki in sab mein maan ki yaad dash wapas aa jaye
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Posted: 10 years ago
dear i dont know how to open ur blog and and i also dont know comnt on blog.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Surbhivarun001

Nice story...!!
Plzz add me to...!!
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i added you ...after exams i hope u comment regularly
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Posted: 10 years ago


PART 13


Tara : yhi sch hai

.

Aapki zid ne

Aapke ego ne

.

Geet ki zindagi barbaad kr di hai

Maan : ek aur sbd mt kehna tum

Tara : kyun veer ji

Sch se darr lag raha hai

Nhi sun paa rhe hai

.

Par aap toh humesha sch ka hi sath dete hai na

Ab kya huya

.

Maan : naintara tum apni had mein raho

Nhi toh

Tara : nhi toh kya

Hume jaise phle is ghar se nikala tha

Waise firse nikal denge

.

Hum maante hai veerji

Humne bhut galatiya ki hai

Paise ki kimaat ko kbhi nhi smjha

Par ye smjhane ke liye

Aapne hume , dev ko , apni behn, apni choti maa ko

Ghar se bahar kr diya

.

Aap jaante bhi hai

Waha hum sbne Canada mein kaise guzara kiya hai

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Aapke bhai ki buri adaato ne

Hum sbko paise- paise ke liye mohtaaz kr diya

.

Jinse aapke bhai ne karza liya tha na

Wo har dusre din

Hum sbko dmkate

Maarne ki damaki dete

.

Aapne ek baar mudke nhi dekha

Veerji

Maan : ye problem tum dono ki khadi ki huyi thi

Maine kitni baar smjhaya tha

.

Aur waise bhi in sbme geet ka naam beech mein kaha se aa gya

.

Tara : wo kya hai na veer ji

Aapke bhai ko khurana naam ki jyada fikr thi

Isliye unhone

Ek ladki ki zindagi se khelna jyada thik smjha

.

Are jyada pareshaan mt hoye

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Hum aapko batate hai

.

Jb dev paise ko intzaam nhi kr paa rhe the

Aur aap humari koi help nhi krna chahte the

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Tb paiso ke liye

Dev ne geet se shaadi ki

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Maan : shaadi

Tara : shaadi veer ji

Ye plan toh hum sbka tha

.

Par is plan mein khi bhi

Geet ke sath raat guzarna nhi tha

Usse chuna nhi tha

.

Par aapke bhai kaha apni harkato se baaz aate

He spends night with her...

.

Maan : naintara

Asi gatiya soch bs tumhari hi ho sakti hai

.

Itna niche sirf tum hi gir sakti ho

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Tara : girna pda veerji

Apni jaan jo bachani thi

Aap aur aapke asool

.

His head spinning, but he tries to control this anger...

.

kaha tha aapke bhai se share sell krde

.

Par unke liye khurana naam jyada pyaar tha

Aur ek ladki izzat kuch nhi

.

He raised the hand, but stop own self...

Maan : sukr kro mein aurat pe hath nhi uthata

Nhi toh tum aaj

.

Par kuch bhi ho

Tum sbko tumhare gunaah ki sza milengi

.

Tara : kaise sabhit karenge veerji

.

Aur waise bhi

Geet dev ko maaf kr chuki hai

.

Kaise naraaz rhti wo apne phle pyaar se

Aur kb tak

.

Aur dev uske bache ka pita bhi toh tha

He caught her neck tightly, pressing her throat...

Maan : ek aur sbd nhi

He pushes her and left...

*******

Daadi : dev aapne maan ko khi dekha hai

Dev : nhi daadi

Daadi : maan sayad gussa hai aapse

Aapko kafi awaaz bhi lagayi thi

Dev : bro kyun gussa honge mujhpe

Koi kaam honga

.

Daadi : hmm

Pata nhi ab kaha gye

Dev : daadi yhi honge

.

Ho sakta hai geet ke pass gye ho

Daadi : hum puchte hai

.

.

Daadi : geet beta

Maan aaye hai kya waha pe

Geet : nhi daadi

Daadi : pata nhi kaha chale gye

.

Geet : mein dekhti hu daadi

Daadi : hmm

********

Geet call him,

Geet : ring ki voice toh aas pass hi aa rhi hai

She going towards the door, and see his phone lays here...

Geet : maan yaha aaye the

Toh mujhse mile kyun nhi

.

Aur phone yaha kyun ase pda hai

.

She picks his phone and goes outside from outhouse...

She fears from unknown fear...

Maan bs thik ho

.

Geet : kaka

Aapne maan ko dekha hai kya

Kaka : sahib toh garden mein baithe hai kbse

.

She runs & feel relax to see him sitting on bench... She faces his back ...

Geet : maan

Aap yaha baithe hai

Aur mein aapko bahar dund rhi thi

.

Pata hai aapne toh mujhe dra hi diya tha

She placed her hand on his shoulder, and feels his body start fall on left with the sudden touch... she came in front of him, and sees his face fully sweated... his clothes also wet ...

Geet cupped his face and try to wake him...

Maan please aankho kholo

.

Maan

.

He not responds to her...

Maan please

She hugged him tightly and calls dev...


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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update. i want kill nt. my poor geet. i feel sad for her
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow awesome part
Hope maan Jaldi thik ho aur Tara ki baato ka zyada Asar na ho
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