MG FF - Tum Mille #2 updt last pt on pg 35 june 16 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago


wow lovely superb update...te way te my naughty maan want to spend time with his teasing with his gesture but u bechari geet was distracted by his look..maan babu u dont need to do anything u r one look is enough..opps my maaneet ki move but waiting for her exams to over was lovely..opps geet struggling for dressing but my maan love his baby geet..i love te update yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic Update

Geet's exams are also over now and both she and Maan are going out
and yet again she takes a long time getting ready but Maan comes to the outhouse and hears her talks and tells her the way she looks she is perfect she does feel disappointed but again Maan tells her that she looks good

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 84

Geet freezes...she closes her eyes and forgets herself in his warmth...as she struggles to resist Maan and gets ready for the next step Maan puts a check to his feelings at the right time for he knows that it would be impossible for even the MSK to stop after this...

Maan whispers in his husky tone...

Maan: aaj ke liye yahi khafi hogi, haina Geet?

Geet doesn't know what to say...

Maan: par tum chaho toh mein

Maan pulls her closer...

Geet looks at him puzzled...

Maan keeps drooling and her shyness and innocence make him more and more attracted towards her...he keeps drowning in the moment unable to restrain himself from the fragrance of her that's intoxicating him like anything...

Geet: sir

Maan: hmm

Maan is still reeling in his intoxications...

Geet: woh mein

Maan stops her from saying anything...he doesn't want any disturbance...

Maan: sshhh chup bilkul chup

Geet finds it hard to handle the drugged MSK...all thanks to her 2 hour beautification session...

Geet: Maaan sir

Geet tries to get him back to reality...

Maan: haan

Geet: humme dher ho rahi haina?

Maan: haan

Geet: toh chalein?

Maan: hmm

Geet takes him out almost forcefully from OH...

In the car...

Geet: Maan sir

Maan is still under the influence of that beautiful moment he shared with his Mishty for the first time without thinking about any kind of pressure, he forgot everything, for him Geet is his most presious possession and he is not bothered about their half- marriage, child marriage or whatever it is, he knows that now Geet is Maan's, Maan ki Geet and nothing else mattered even if they are not bound by any relationship...their love is more than enough to sustain their union for eternity...

Maan: hmm

Geet: hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Maan doesn't know where they are going...

He has totally forgot about the dinner he booked at the best start hotel in Delhi and is now driving towards nowhere as he didn't care about the route as long as he is travelling with his Mishty...

Maan: woh hum kahan hai?

Geet is shocked...ye kaise sawaal hai?

Geet: hum dinner ke liye nahi jaa rahe?

Geet is a little disappointed but still she won't complain as long as Maan is with her...

Maan: haan Geet

Maan then looks where they are...and they have come far away from the city...

And that 5 star dinner looks impossible for their time slot has expired...

Maan is very upset for spoiling the date again...

But Geet is lookind very happy...

Geet: mujhe patha hai sir, aap mujhe kahan lekhe jaa rahe ho

Maan looks confused...

They have just passed Noida where Geet's college is and they are nearing her favourite dabha...

Actually Geet too has only heard about it and had never gone there before, she has heard many of her friends talking about this new dabha that is so good...

Geet had only tasted the food that once Adi brought for her and Pinky and form that day she had been waiting for her chance to dine at that place...

Adi promised to take them one day but he never had a chance...

So, it's Maan who has finally fulfilled her wish...ye toh babaji ka kamaal hi hai...haina?

Maan: woh Geet, actually hum bahut dhoor aagaye, aur khafi late bhi ho gaye

Geet: nahi nahi , sir yahan toh party abhi shuru hothi, hum sahi time pe aaye hai sir

Maan: par Geet

Geet: mein toh kab se yahan aana chahthi thi, par ye Pinky toh college ke bahar katam hi nahi rakhthi

Maan has put this rule not to go out of the campus without Adi...Maan knows Geet is still nave and she thinks that Delhi is just another city with all the sofistications and women have all the freedom and safety that they desire...

Only Maan knows how her innocence could easily deceive her and she could get into trouble...

It at all Maan ordered her she would have dared to break his rules...

Geet is more than happy for she gets everything she needs at KM, and Dadi is always there for her whenever she wanted to go out...

Maan wonders what a woman she is! Always happy with whatever she gets and makes it look like she is the princess of whales with all the luxuries of the world...

That's what Maan loves about her, she only cribs when it comes to MSK and never cares about anything else...Maan has learnt to look at life in a different angle after he met Geet, always look at the positive side, as they say every cloud has a silver lining...

You can say that all her expectations are from MSK , and in that matter you may say she is greedy wanting to be loved more and more...who doesn't wish to be loved and cared for if there is someone like MSK ready to serve you anytime...haina?

Geet's excitement catches on Maan too and Maan forgets that he is the MSK, with all those self imposed rules upom himself, for a change he wants to be like Geet, without any added baggages, just MSK, without any tags, business tycoon, perfectionist, impeccable, head strong and stone hearted, to sum it all, inhumane...

As Maan slows down and stops for a moment to look for a parking space as there is no parking lot as such here, Geet jumps out of the car atonce...

Maan: Geeet Geeet

Maan didn't want her to get down as he is not ready to leave her alone waiting...

Geet: kya dekh rahe ho sir? Bahar aao

Maan: par Geet, mujhe park bhi toh karna hai

Geet bursts out laughing...

Maan: tum aaise kyun has rahi ho?

Geet: sir, yahan aap kahin pe bhi park kar sakthe ho, chalo yahi park kardho

Maan: what? yahi?

Maan is not ready to take any risk...

Geet: sir, aap ki gadhi ko kuch nahi hogi, aap bhi na? insaan se zyada gadhi se pyaar karthe ho

That's true for all the men, they love their car more than their wives...haina?

I mean they drop us at some nasty spot, ask us to get down and go in search of a safe place to park their lovely cars...

Geet doesn't wait for him and she starts walking...

Maan had to run after her like a protective father running after his daughter...

Maan: Geet Geeet rukh jao

Maan then finds a corner table which offered atleast some privacy that he wanted...

Geet finds it not so appealing but settles there for Maan...she thinks that the corner tables are not attended properly and are mostly ignored as no one occupies them when the other tables are free...

Geet calls the man who is serving the other table aloud...

Geet: bhaiya bhaiyaaa

Maan is embarrassed...

Maan: Geet, ye kya kar rahi ho tum?

Geet: sir, mein order karna chahthi thi, hum toh yahan khane ke liye hi aaye haina?

Maan: can't you just wait for a moment, woh aatha hi hoga

Geet: nahi sir, ussko kaise patha chalega ki hum yahan hai, bechare ko kya patha hoga ki koi yahan pe phi baittega? Haina?

Geet teases Maan's choice of table...

Maan: kyun? Yahan service nahi hai kya?

Geet smiles...

Geet: yahan toh aaise koi conditions nahi hothe jaise ke aapke faltu ke multi-cuisine 5 6 7 star Restaurants mein hothe hai sir, yahan toh sab kuch hummarein marzi pe chalthi hai, abhi dekho

Geet whistles to call him again...

Maan just feels that he is out of place...

Maan: Geet, tameez se bhula sakthi

Waiter comes immediately...

Waiter is also in a good mood as Geet...

Waiter: haan ji, bolo kya loge?

Geet: Maan sir, aap ko kya chahiye?

Maan: pehle ye toh bathao ki yahan kya milthi?

Waiter: aloo paratha, gobi paratha, lacha paratha, roti, kulcha, chicken masala, anda bhurjee, butter chicken, tandoori chicken, lassi aur pani bottle, kaho aap ko kya chahiye?

Maan stares him and he becomes silent...he avoids looking at Maan and waits for Geet to order...

He knows very well who is going to order...

Geet: bhaiya, aap na jaldhi do aam ki lassi lekhe aao, teek hai

Waiter: teek hai

He leaves...

Maan: Geet, tum lassi se shuru karogi?

Geet: sir, ye aap ke liye hai, woh kya haina sir? aap itna garam jho ho gaya ho toh meinne se socha lassi se aap ka garmi thoda tand ho jaye

Maan: Geeet

Geet: sir, thoda intrezaar karo lassi abhi aathi hogi, bhaiya thoda jaldhi karo na

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Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
marvellous update! Well written! different date 4 MSK! Geet style! Man fells out of place! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update dear, loved the way thy talk to each other😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
ab aayega mazzaa
MSK in dhabha ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 84 - maan so much engrossed in her that he forgot to take her to the restaurant and geet decides to take him to the dhaba...lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice
he spoiled his another date
he was lost in geet and forget wat he
have decide and he drives clueless
wen he got his sense he was out of city
geet didn't mind and prefer to go dabba
and maan just feel out of place

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Posted: 10 years ago


Wow lovely cute superb update..te way my maan lost in his geet ,melting her and geet was nervous and to make excuse she breaking my maan ki trance was lovely ..opps in his geet's though my maan lost te track where he is going and wen geet said he cursed himself but geet baby planned some thing and took my maan to dabbha and te way geet ki excitement and happiness but bechare my maan was frowning to see te place and te way she behaving was lovely cute..i love te update yar
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago

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