MG FF : A SECOND LIFE #5 Discontinued Note page 110 , May 1st, 2018 - Page 30

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PART 56

Maan was having his coffee while having the file of documents in his hands.. His wife had been a headache today and after geet went to get coffee for him, maan cleaned the room.. He can't stand mess In his life but he forget that she was his messy queen.. geet was making coffee and that too was messed twice and after good half an hour maan was having coffee in his hand and his wify was pouting and looking at him with the frown..

Geet handed him the cup and took the documents from his hands.. She had already been stressed about the whole entrance fiasco and when she saw her documents in his hands, she just snatched it and went to put them in the cupboard ...

Maan was highly confused by this act of hers and thought that she was just mad at something , he didn't understand that it was him , who was making her mad.. geet was about to move away from maan when he immediately kept the coffee away and pulled her .. She was in her own world when she felt the hard tug on her wrist and the next moment he pulled her towards him.. She was already mad and in her sheer baby anger maan felt her pushing him away from her.. she was feeling like a prey who was caged and she innocently conveyed her thought too..

Geet : chodiye mujhe.. mujhe lag raha hai I am inside any trap and you are the hunter .. She said and moved to go but this time maan pulled her more caging her along his body..She could feel his breaths on her neck as he embraced her tying the dori of her kurti that has been loosened.. maan felt her going tensed in his arms and to ease her he whisper in her ears ..

Maan : I am not caging anyone but my lioness/sherni , wo kya hai na she always get mad and this time I am not aware of the reason too.. His voice was sending shivers down her spine and his words finally when registered in her mind she blurted out not before snuggling close to him keeping her hand on his chest and molding herself according to him.. , for a second she was numb and out of words but he always makes her do this.. she slowly made herself free from her lion's cage and asked him in her cute anger that always makes him feel wordless..

Geet : I am not any sherni aur aap kit oh bilkul bhi nahi.. She said giving him his coffee and was left..

Geet : aapki coffee thandi hogayi she said and left the room...

Meanwhile arjun was trying hard to make up for the time they had lost, actually he had lost..His arohi was giving him a hard time and he was trying to make up with her..arohi just went passed arjun and gave him a glare and he just followed her , well she was a bit difficult to melt..

Arjun : aru listen to me please .. dekho I am saying truth the meeting was really important and if I haven't attended to loss jyada hota sweetheart , try to understand .. arohi stopped for a second she was seriously thinking to let go of the matter but then hearing arjun she knew that he was definitely going to make her mad..

Arjun st : lagta hai maan gai.. he gave her a simple smile and came towards her but she ducked him leaving arjun in a high confusion.. arjun looked at his wife for two three seconds , she was doing something or other and then came towards him as she too wanted him now.. and mainly to straight his brains that don't work on time..

Arohi : you really think that I am mad just because you were attending your meeting Mr. ARJUN SINGH KHURANA , she asked folding her hands across her chest .. arjun poor was having no clue just nodded and then was ready to listen to his wife..

Arohi in a slightly baffled mood

Arohi : I knew it , you don't even know me arjun even after two years of dating .. how I am supposed to live with you..then she looked at arjun with a look that was not at all pleasant and murmured ..

Arohi : aap badal gaye ho arjun.. She left him and that was the indication for arjun to know that something was wrong...

MEANWHILE

Geet was coming towards the kitchen when she bumped with arjun , leaving both of their partners to see them and made the face..Well for maan this was not at all new and he had followed her to know what was wrong with her.. and arohi she knew that she was getting too senti today but when arjun didn't replied to her continuous calls and messages she was getting worried , as he was supposed to come early but see her husband just doesn't care for her.. maan pulled geet away from arjun and earned a glare from his wife while arjun was confused seeing maan pulling geet away..

Maan : bhai , there she is..he pointed towards arohi who was at the distance and arjun left maaneet and ran behind his wife.. he was now getting the meaning of getting married and maan followed geet towards the kitchen..

Maan : are ruko sherni.. he said in a flow and she just gave him a look stating you say this again and I will make you land in the jungle..

Geet looking up and started talking to her babaji after grabbing the pan for his coffee maan in his little romance has spoiled the coffee and geet being a considerate wife knew that how he is used to coffee..

Geet : babaji , sherni.. aap ne inhe basic sense nahi di bilkul , he is saying me sherni..khud ko dekha hai kahin inhone aaiyne mein..sher jaise dikhte hai khud and he is saying me a sherni..ek aur baar kaha na mujhe toh me.. toh me.. maan who was listening to her talks came behind her and took the coffee powder from her hands making the coffee for himself..And simultaneously talking to her..

Maan : unhe kinhe geet..pura bolo warna babaji samjhenge kaise what are you trying to say aur agar mein apni sherni ko sherni nahi kahungatoh kise bolunga batao.. Geet snapped back..

Geet : babaji samaj jayenge aap mat hi bolo.. aur sherni bola na toh mein sabse pehle aapko jungle bhej dungi.. babaji dekhiye kaise mera mazaak uda rahen hain..

Maan : are compliment hain meri jaan.. He said pulling her closer and taking away from the gas, aur lao..meri coffee mein khud bana lunga ..He said taking the sugar cubes from her hands..And she pouted giving him glares..

Geet came closer and asked him..

Geet : compliment kaise hua..You know I am not that strong ... she asked with a cute frown making him to kiss her red angry cheeks before he does something else..

Maan : jitni strong hona I will tell you.. he said making her confuse and maan offered her a cup of coffee that he first give her and then took for himself...

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Next : maan and his jaan.. aur jaan ka nakra

i will post rest of the part tomorrow

tired now


my new ss : longing for love

anyone if interested can check

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4385418/mg-ss-longing-for-love-updates-are-on-if-on-this-thread-june-17


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Posted: 10 years ago
Hurray.. Tks fr update yaar. Missing your stories...Hope you are doing well... Poor maan hv to deal with his Sherni wife without knowing his mistake plus cleaning the messed up room. The other side arjun facing his own turmoil to mnfy his wife. Big task await fr both brothers...
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Amazing update...poor maan has to bear his tantrum sherni and still he dint know the reason for her anger...poor soul cleaning the mess in the room ...loved maneet nok jhok and maan trying to pamper his sherni...both the brothers are in trouble and trying to manofy their shernis...loved geets baby anger against maan and cribbing to her babaji about him... shes really cute and naive ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved theie nock - jhok jiski wagah bi nahi pata dono ko 😆
geet is getting irritated with SHERNI word

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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update...geet is angry on maan and he doesn't know the reason... maan calling geet sherni and she doesn't like that... here arohi is also mad at arjun and he is unable to melt her... he doesn't know the reason of her anger... both maan and arjun are behind their wives to manofy them...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
thats funny
poor hubby log
their wives are mad at them
and they dont know why
this is so cute
love this nok jhok of theirs
maan stop calling her sherni
she doesnt get it mate
but hopefully she will
dude you are in big sushi
as is his brother with aru
this keeps on getting more and more fun
geet and her baby anger with patidev
and aru with her worry for her pati dev
patidev ki watt lag rahi hai
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Fab part really like the nok jok between maan geet and waiting to read more...so update soon
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Bichare maan ND Arjun dono ko ab shaadi ka matlab samajh aa Gaya hoga. 😆
Geet is angry for making fun of her nd again nd again calling her sherni.
Maaneet relationship has moved a step ahead.
They r very comfortable with each other.
Maan is flirting with her.
Arohi is angry on Arjun for neglecting her calls.

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