Rishabala OS : Dewar-Bhabhi Duology 1 : No Choice But Seduction

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks fir the incomparable OS dear.
really really really really really really loved,felt,enjoyed even cried wen i read armaan letter to madhu and rk too.a lot.
rk madhu bith r equally good in dialogue.
no words to appreciate 👏 👏

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LazyJane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

It was outstanding. I enjoyed reading the story.RK was too bold. Did he really asked his parents to get morning after pills for madhu.

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k.atrina75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Read it i dont know which time and still it has the same effect..
Naughty Story

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Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Incredible story Kuku di.👏👏

To be honest, as many say this was hot. I say this was one comedial OS.😆

From the very start to the very end. Where you disclose that Sultan was a dead beat not worthy of Madhu. To RK deciding on seducing Madhu in different ways and her attempts to counteract his seduction.😆

To be honest you had me fooled there for a moment at the beginning when Madhu was divorcing someone, and you didn't write who. I was hoping it wasn't RK, but then thought if it was him they will get together again somehow.😆 Luckily it wasn't him but Sultan. Oh the way you described Sultan's charcater.🤣 One of my favorite parts. And how Rishbala agreeing and talk about what kind of a loser he was.🤣

One comedial OS. Well from my point of view, anyway.😆

And like others wrote they blushed, well I do not blush I laugh.🤣

What a surprise there.😆

Anyway one incredible and comedial story Kuku di.👏😆