Random Shot -*The Burning Desire*[Completed]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey all 😃
This is Misnomer aka Preksha⭐️ .. I am new to this forum 😳and this is my first story on this forum.. i hope u all like it

A/N : This is a Random Shot, It was no fixed number of parts And Pls do comment and like. Criticism also accepted😆


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THE BURNING DESIRE
Part 1

Location : KKN Party

He stood leaning at the bar counter clad in a black Armani three piece suit, gelled hairs, thin lips, strong jaw line and muscular shoulders .Looking not less than a Greek god. He took a sip from his drink not losing focus from the dance floor.

Watching him gulping down his drink at the bar counter I felt my throat dry. His personality screamed of Perfection. He was a man of few words but his chocolate brown eyes spoke volumes. Whenever I looked in this eyes I find myself drowning in them. All the female staff was delighted at his arrival and Why not?, This man was perfect in every sense.

Editor-in-Chef KKN Channel, Mr. Kabir Sharma was every girl's dream guy. Our equation is very different today, after that Madhavnath baghi interview our conversations had meet the dead end. Whenever we come across all whose moments come up alive, Me getting shot, Sir taking care of me, Our Rescue. It had brought us closer but yet we were far away from each other. I chewed my lower lip to control the desire for this man .

Watching her dancing was a delight for him. She was looking ravishing in a black short dress with hairs opened covering her back and those plumy lips always inviting him. He let out a moan seeing her biting her lower lip, Blood rushed to the lower anatomy of this body. He gulped the drink hard to let go the desire building inside him. After that Madhavnath fiasco we both had come closer but still something inside me is not letting me to go free -The fear of losing her.

DJ's voice disturbed his thoughts. With a frown on his face is shifted his gaze from her to the disturbing source.

"All the couples out there this romantic track for you"..

"Miss Ananya Kashyap would you like to dance with me" said Manav Gupta, His clan mate cum rival

Kabir's POV

She glanced at me once and them back at him and refused his offer. Which cooled me down a bit. But that moron was no less he dragged her on the dance floor. This made my Blood boil. Seeing her comfortable with him added fuel to the already burning fire. He pulled her towards him and gripped her waist tightly. I wanted to tear them apart and beat him till he is lifeless but I had to control myself. Gulping the rest of my drink I moved towards the dance floor.

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Should I continue ?

Edited by Misnomer - 9 years ago


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Misnomer thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX

Edited by Misnomer - 9 years ago
paradigm thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You have to continue! Don;t leave us hanging
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Posted: 10 years ago
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first things first,
thanks for the pm preksha
loved the storyline
please do continue it or else my thoughts will go frenzy
kabir looks hawt when jealous
update soon
continue to pm me please
Edited by pd786 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: paradigm

You have to continue! Don;t leave us hanging

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Dont worry I ll continue
Thanku for the comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pd786

first things first,

thanks for the pm preksha
loved the storyline
please do continue it or else my thoughts will go frenzy
kabir looks hawt when jealous
update soon
continue to pm me please

Anytime dear
Thanku for reading n for such a lovely comment⭐️😲😳
Edited by Misnomer - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great effort. Ofcourse you have to continue dear :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd

Great effort. Ofcourse you have to continue dear :)

Thanku so much
Still learning to write 😆
And glad to see someone from ipkknd forum 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please please continue :) would love to know what happened next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rashnayak

Please please continue :) would love to know what happened next


Thanku for reading 😃

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