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megha bansal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

awsume part Aayu jaan..
loved it yaar.. splly the way AR sat in the car and took a round of the city n came back.. and then padma welcomed AR as armaan's mom...

that was the best ...

and phir AR talk in riddhima's room...that was too natural.. and superbly wrote...

really loved the whole part yasr...

and yaa thank god yeh emotional part ni tha...agar hota naa... I would have killed u for making Me cry again... ;)

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Nazzz16

@Nazzz16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Amazing ss !!
Loved all parts <3
U hv written beautifully Ayushi :)
Thnk god armaan ko zyada rulaya nahi !!
Sid is such a pervert...he was with ridz justfor a bet...but acha hua he left !!
AR married ... :D
Armaan is soo sweet and suportive !!
Waiting for next update eagerly !!
Continue asap ..!!
N if possible pls do pm me !!

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Aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Part 8

After What Riddhima have offered their friendship back to Armaan he was too happy. And the old
Armaan was back defeating this new silent Armaan within him.
Armaan moved in And saw Riddhima wearing saree.
Armaan - arye Riddhima ye kya pehna hain.
Riddhima - kya hua... saree toh pehni hain...
Armaan - vo toh mujhe bhi dikh raha hai hain...
Riddhima - toh phir puch kyun rahe ho.
Armaan - arye yaar aisa lag raha hain jaise kisi dAndi par cloth rap kar diya ho.
Riddhima mouth left open
Riddhima - kya.. kya kaha tumne..
Armaan - arye aab tumhe sunai bhi nahi deta.. Tchhh aab mera kya hoga.
Riddhima - rukho jara aAbhi batati hun kya hoga tumhara...
And Riddhima run after Armaan all around the room.
Both were now very very tiered running around And laughing that both sat on the bed catching on to
there breadth. both have a wide smile on there face.
Armaan - waise Riddhima..
Riddhima looked at him still smiling...
Armaan - ek baat bolun...
Riddhima - hmm *trying to catch her breadth*
Armaan - tum na... bilkul...
Riddhima - mein kya..
Armaan - tum na bilkul...
Riddhima - bolo bhi aab.
Armaan - puri Miss.Skeleton ho...
And saying this Armaan ran from there saving himself from Riddhima's beating And Riddhima cam out of
the shock as Armaan passed by her laughing. Riddhima got up from her bed And ran behind him And
catch hold over him before he can leave the room.
As Riddhima have caught him in her grip Riddhima started to beat him with her fist on his chest And
Armaan was just laughing hat her... calling her name again And again...
Armaan - arye Riddhima... Riddhima... kya kar rahi ho yaar Riddhima...
Riddhima - tumhe mein batati hun ki mein kya hun...
Armaan - arye yaar Riddhima tum bhi na...
In an instance Armaan took hold over hAnds. And looked at Riddhima pouting seeing she can't beat him
any more as he have catch hold her both hAnds. Armaan too laughed seeing this.
Armaan - kuch khati piti nahi ho kya tum. tch tch Riddhima tum maa ka naam kharab kar rahi ho...
Riddhima - mera khane pine se maa ka kya lena dena
Armaan - tum nahi khaogi toh sab ye hi bolenge na ki dekho saas ne aapni bahu par kitne atyachar kiya
hain...
Riddhima - saas ne.. *confused.
Armaan - hain.. Padma maa tumhari saas... Remember.
Riddhima - oh hello.. tum bhul rahe ho vo meri nahi tumhari saas hain...
Armaan - ji bilkul nahi vo tumhari saas hain meri toh maa hain ...
Riddhima - hump.. meri maa hain vo...
Armaan - hain maa toh hain par maa-in-law wali maa hain...
Riddhima - dekho Armaan ...
Armaan - mein nahi tum dekho..
Riddhima - jao jaa kar maa se khud puch lo ki kiski saas hain vo..
Armaan - chalo tum bhi sun lena nahi toh mera par vishwas nahi karogi tum...
Riddhima - hain na chalo... Abhi galat fami dur ho jaeygi tumhari...
Armaan - hain hain chalo...
Armaan Riddhima moved out of there room And crossed the living room saying to each other that
Padma is their maa not saasu maa. The gang And Shashank sitting in the living room saw Armaan
Riddhima talking And moving towards Padma's room. Shashank was initially surprise seeing Armaan
smiling all of sudden as since a week time Shashank haven't seen Armaan smiling. leave alone smiling he
haven't saw Armaan talking to. But never the less he was happy to see Armaan smiling his original smile.
Armaan Riddhima enter the room And saw Padma arranging the bed properly.
Armaan/Riddhima - maa...
then both exchange a look with each other hearing their addressing way to Padma..
Armaan Riddhima spoke up together. pointing their fingure towards each other.
Armaan - vo meri maa hain...
Riddhima - vo meri maa hain...
Padma looked at them.
Padma - arye kya hua tum dono ko.
Armaan - maa dekho na aapki bahu mujhe pareshan kar rahi hain
Riddhima - dekho Armaan mein bol rahi hun maa meri maa hain saasu maa nahi...
Armaan - toh mien bhi bol raha hun na ki vo meri maa hain
Padma - arye tum dono lad kyun rahe ho...
Riddhima - maa dekho na mujhe kab se cheeda raha hain Armaan...
Armaan - mein ne kab...
Padma - Armaan ek min...
Riddhima showed her tongue to Armaan And continued with her talk
Riddhima - maa dekho Armaan bol raha hain ki vo apka beta hain.
Padma - hain toh is mein galat kya bola usne
Armaan - dekha Riddhima meri maa hain.
Armaan hugged Padma from Sideways making Padma swing with him a little.
Riddhima - maa...
Armaan - maa nahi saasu maa.
Riddhima - dekho maa phir se ye...
Padma - waise dekha jaye toh Armaan sahi bol raha hain...
Riddhima - maa aap bhi.
Padma - dekho Armaan mera beta hain aur tum uski biwi toh meri bahu hui na...
Riddhima - matlab Armaan hi apka beta hain mein aapki beti nahi.. *fake anger
Armaan *mischievously - nahi...bilkul nahi ...
Shashank enter the room
Shashank - arye kya ho raha hain bhai.
Riddhima moved towards her father.
Riddhima - papa dekho na Armaan kab se mujhe chida raha hain... kab se bol raha hain ki maa meri
saasu maa hai...
Shashank *questioning look - toh galat kya bola...
Riddhima - papa aap bhi...
Shashank was confused And Armaan laughed.
Armaan - I love u papa...
Shashank smiled at Armaan.
Riddhima - meri toh kisi ko padi hi nahi hain...
Shashank - arye bhai hua kya hain...
Padma - kuch nahi bacho ki tarah lad rahe hain dono..
Riddhima went from their in huff... And Armaan smiled And moved after Riddhima...
Armaan moved behind Riddhima And whispered in her ears.
Armaan - dekha mein jeet gaya...
Riddhima - hunh... toh kya hua... saasu maa mein bhi maa hi hain saasu hata do toh maa hi bachega...
jayada kudne ki jarurat nahi hain...
Armaan - hain aab toh kuch alternative dhundhna hi padega.. hahahahha
On other Side...
Padma - aaj Armaan ko itne dino baad haste dekha hain...
Shashank - hain... Riddhima ke saath hamesha hi khush rahta hain Armaan... aur Armaan ke sath
Riddhima...
Padma - dono ki dosti hain hi aise... bachpan se saath hain ek dusre ko itne ache se jante hain ki koi nahi
jaanta unko...
Shashank - hain bhai ye toh hain... mein sochta tha ki Riddhima aur Armaan ki shaadi ho jaye toh dono
khush rahenga..
Padma - hain socha toh humne ye hi tha par Riddhima Sid se pyaar karne lagi toh humein ne uski khushi
ke liya ye khayal chod diya tha...
Shashank - hain par shayad bhagwan ko bhi ye hi manjur tha.. ki Armaan aur Riddhima ki hi shaadi ho ...
Padma - hain tAbhi toh ye sab hua hain.. isse Armaan bhi aapna dard bhul gaya hain aur Riddhima bhi...
inki dosti hi inko iss relation mein aage bhadne ka aur ek dusre ka saath nibhane ka raasta dikhayegi...
Shashank - bus aab toh ye dua hain ki aab in dono ki jindagi mein koi dukh na aaye.. dono khushi khushi
rahe ek saath...
Padma - aaj NAndani aur karan bhaisab hote toh kitne khush hote dono... sab ka ye h sapna tha ki
Armaan Riddhima ki shaadi ho jaye... jaise bachpan mein inhone karai thi aapne toys ki... yaad hain
aapko kaise dono ek dusre ke pasAnd ke game khelte the... aur pura sath dete the ek dusre ka...
Shashank - hain kaise bhul sakta hun.. dono hi pagal the....
*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-Flashback*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-
Baby Armaan as armi And baby Riddhima as ridhi. what they both prefer to call each other in childhood
armi - kya hua ridhi.. tum lo(ro) kyun lai(rahi) ho...
Ridhi - almi(armi) koi mela shaat(sath) nahi khel laha(raha) hain.
armi - bas inni si baat...
ridhi looked confused at armi And stopped her crying in confusion with soo cute face.
armi - chalo mein khelunga ridhi ke sath...
Ridhi - sachi tum kheloge mela sath
armi - hain mein tela besht flAnd(tera best frnd) hun na..
ridhi nodded her head And both got engrossed in their play.
armi - almi... dhula ghole(ghode-horse) pal(par) aata hain chal kal(kar) nahi... ushe(use) ghole pal
bithao...
armi - par ghode se utal kal toh chalega na... isliya mein ghode ko paidal la laha(raha) hun..
ridhi start thinking And then nodded with smile...
Ridhi - theek hain...
armi - lo tumhale toys ki shaadi ho gai... aab toh nahi loyegi meli lidhi(roye gi meri ridhi)...
ridhi was too happy And with big smile shook her head Side ways...
Ridhi - thank u armi...
armi - fliendship mein no cholly no tanku(thank u)
Ridhi - u ale my besht flAnd almi
armi smiled to ridhi...
Same days
In evening..
Armi was sitting in gardern And Riddhima came up to Armaan And saw armi sad...
Ridhi - ka hua almi...
armi - kuch nai...
ridhi - almi bolo na tum shad(sad) ache nahi lagte...
armi - mela sath koi bashketBall(basket ball) nahi khel la(raha) hain
ridhi - mein khelu...tumhale sath...
armi - tumhe bashketball aata hain...
ridhi shook her head in no...
armi - toh kasie khelogi ridhi...
ridhi - toh tum mujhe chikha dena almi... mein chikhungi(sikhungi) tumhale liya... phil hum dono
khelenga...
Armaan nodded his head in enthusiasm...
And then Armaan teaches Riddhima basketball as much as he can.. after all he too was baby that time...
ridhi - almi hum loj(roj) baskhetball khelenga...
armi - kyun...
ridhi - alye(arye) phil mein bhi chik jaungi na.. phil hum dono loj khelenga...
Armaan was too happy And nodded his head...
And this made their friendship more stronger.. they played daily with each other ... each others game...
with all smiling faces.. never complained for each other choice...
But with time And age Riddhima's game changes but Armaan's game remain constant And Riddhima
And Armaan were now champion in basketball...
*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-Flashback Ends*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-

Luv u all
Aayushi

PS - Thank u all for the comment that u post on the updates i provide u appreciating my work and writting even after no of mistakes i make..
thank u all soo much ...
I know i m not suppose to thank to many pagals out here. As if i say then tamatar and chapals will come flying my way. hahah.
So just want to say Luv u people for appreciating it and supporting me..
LOVE U GUYS

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Nazzz16

@Nazzz16

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Amazing update ...
AR are able to talk and be a friends :)
Armaan won and now padma mom is ridz's sasu maa :p
Chotu armi and ridhi are tooo cute <3
Armi taught ridhi basket ball :)
Continue next part soon !!

Thnxx for pm :)

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1000175

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

aww really a cute update
loved this chirpy nd happy self of armaan
loved ar cute banter nd fights
lol that was funny when armaan tease ridhz saying padma is her mother in law not mother
nd shanky nd padma also support him
loved the part
its awesome
love u bye tc

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Pakeez Muqadas

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Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

I hope U R Not Angry ..
Mai cmnt karna Bhul jati hoon... :(

upar Se My Ntwrk Mann karta hai Mobile Tower Udha Doon >_<

update deekhe Actually I am Shocked..
I nvr Thought AR like diz wo B Is FF mai.. Wo B Itni jaldi.. Lol

Jaese dono Ladh rahe thay Lag hi nahi raha tha Dono Ki Shadi ho gayi aur Itna sab Kuch huwa hai...

Ridhima Ko Bahu Bana Diya Beti se... Aese Armaan Malik hi kar skta hai..
Is FF mai Shanky se Pyaar ho gaya.. Itna Sweet Shanky deekh Ke Kabhi kabhii Doubt B hota hai kahi ya dream to nahii.. Lol

i am Loving Diz FF ..

Thank U soo much for Diz Amazing FF..

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Hiyyaaa Aayooo...

Dekho dekho koan aayi haiii hehehe...

Chalo idar udar k baate nehi karte... Comment karte haiii...

Wohooo, finally AR is being back in their normal self...

It was super awesome part aayooo... Love it...

Starting mein hahaha, Armaan when asked Ridz what she wore...

Awww Ridz is so innocent na hahaha...

Hahaaha pura nautanki hai yeh Armaan...

He was making her irritate and Ridz was getting irritate by him...

Phir dono ne catch me if you can wala game shuru kardiii...

Bhaag ke bhaag ke rukh gaye hehehe...

Aur phirse Armaan call her mss skeleton hahaha...

Ridz was so shocked that she took her time to realized what exactly Armaan said...

Before Armaan could leave, Ridz got hold off him and started to beat him hehee...

Armaan was in so good mood that he couldn't help but tease her seeing how helpless she was under his hold...

Awww, Ridz is making those cute expressions hehehe...

Yeh saas kaha se aaya abb hahaa...

Awww, Armaan is calling Padma ma so in relation woh Ridz ke saas huvi hehehe...

Ab dono is baat pe ladenge ufff...

Shashank was surprise to see Armaan smiling and seeing Riddhima and him arguing about who ma is Padma hahaha...

hahaha yeh dono toh bacchon se kam nehi hai...

Ab toh Padma hi phas gaye in dono ke wajahse...

Ek ke side lenge toh dusro koh bbura lagega...

Love AR conversation with Padma hahaha...

Armaan was just not leaving a second to irritate Ridz hehehe...

Phir Shashank joins them, Ridz thought he would take her side...

But yaha toh Shashank ne bhi Armaan ka side le liya hahaha...

Awww, Ridz left with anger and Armaan uske peeche peeche jaakhe bhi usko tease ki hehehe...

After AR left, Padma and Shashank was nice...

Sahi kaha Shashank ne, god koh bhi yehi manzur ta...

Issiliyeh toh AR aaj saat hai...

Padma and Shashank was remembering old time, how Armaan parents would be happy to see AR together if they were alive...

Phir Flashback when Armaan and Ridz make their doll get married hahaha...

Awww it was sooo cute Aaayooo, I love AR childhood moment...

Childhood se Armaan was so caring for Ridz...

Uske saat doll bhi khela kyunki usko uski aansu dekha nehi jaata hayye... So cute mahnnn...

Ek taraf Armaan Ridz ke saat khela...

Dusri taraf Ridz ne Armaan ke saat khela jo usko pasand haiii...

Childhood se dono koh ek dusre liyeh choti choti cheez ki...

Hopefully now AR would live their life together no matter what happen in their future righttt...

It was awesome part Aayooo...

Bohot rolaya aur aaj hasa ya bhi tumne hi hai hehehe...

Looking forward parts eagerlyyy...

Continue super soon...

Muwaahhh

Love u sooo muchhh...

Take care

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megha bansal

@megbans

Goldie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

hhahhhahahahaha...😆😆

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

this part was really funny aayu jaaan...

maza aaa gaya read akrke...

hhehehehhe

AR bickering was supperb great...

pehle Armaaan ki aanoying harkate saying Riddhima

that she's miss ske;eton...

kuch khaati ni...

and then saying PAdma is his mom n not hers..

🤣 🤣

ahhahahahaa...

that was too funny 😛 😆😆

and then voh flashback part was so adorable...

little AR apne gudde gudhiya ki marriege kara rahe hain...

wow...

that was so cute scene...

haaaye loved the whole part...

suchi mein by god ki kasam... 😛 😉

haan aur achha hai thank u ni boli tu...warna chappal tamamatar k saath

ande aur onions bhi khatai mujhse...

hahahahahahaa 😆😆😆

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

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Dik

@Dik..

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

aayyuu super part...!!!

hahaha,,
loved the AR ki fight...😆😆

bechari ridjima ki mom bni uski saas...
hwww...😉😉

flach back was too too too cute.. baby armi n ridhi...

u[date soonnn...!!!!!

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Seya

@se.ya

Goldie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Hey Aayu :)

Just caught up with this SS.. Read all the parts in one go..

It's nice yaar.. Nice story, nice concept and nice narration :)

Loved the whole thing about this story :) Waiting for the next update.. Update as soon as possible :)

Love you.. Take care :)

PS: Keep up the good work 👍🏼

-SeyaCandyfloss

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