ArShi FF: A Modern Arrange Marriage - Ch 12 up !!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi All

I am staring a new FF on the concept of Arrange Marriages in todays scenario in India.
I will try to keep it as realistic as Arnav's and Khushi's character in the serial will allow.

hope you all like it .
And as usual plz plz plz comment

A Modern Arrange Marriage




Chapter 1 : Below
Chapter 2 : Prelude to " The wait" - Khushi - Page 3
Chapter 3 : Prelude to " The wait" - Arnav - Page 5
Chapter 4 : Kitabi Kida ???- Page 10
Chapter 5 : Social networking Skills - Page 16
Chapter 6 : Booking a Date - Pg 22
Updated with English dialogue
Chapter 7 : Family Equations- Pg 27
Chapter 8 : Siblings... Oh so annoying - pg 35
Chapter 9 : Mangal hi Mangal - pg 41
Chapter 10 : Yariyaan ... pg47
Chapter 11 : intrigues and Celebrations ... pg 50
Chapter12 : pg 57


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1 : The wait

6 pm : Khushi was irritated 🤢🤢.

10 min later : She was pissed😡😡😡.

15 more min later : She was glaring at her parents 😡😡😡and then at her younger sister. She cursed the rain outside. She wanted to stomp her feet, get up , run and never come back. She was fidgeting in her seat. Suddenly her cotton sari had become very troublesome. She cursed herself as in why she opted for a saree in the morning instead of a suit.


She had stopped dressing up for occasions like this. Her father had made a comment earlier about wearing a bright colored sari and she had simply ignored it. Her father had not bothered her again.

Her mind was trying to calm her heart .'Wait for few more minutes Khushi, then you can go home. Don't show any verbal emotions now. After this waiting fiasco your dad is not going to bother you again for next 3 months atleast '.

5 min Later :

Khushi could not take it anymore . She turned to her father and said, teeth clenched but as calm as possible," Papa, if your chief guest is not arriving in 5 more mintues, I will leave. You can meet him without me. Come on , Papa even the waiters in this fast food joint are staring us. We are waiting here for past half an hour with only a single coffee shared between 4 people'.

Her father sighed and said OK beta. Then suddenly his mobile rang. He picked it up. Khushi only heard OK from his side.

He disconnected the phone and said," Actually the guy is struck in traffic jam ". It will take him 10 more minutes to come here".

On hearing this Khushi blew up," What ? We have been waiting here for the past half an hr. He already knew the meeting time didn't he? My office is also in the same route. Didn't I leave early to reach here on time? Am I not tired after coming here directly from office without any chance of changing my cloth ? Just because I am girl, I am supposed to wait for a guy ? Bend to the guys whims and fancies?Why is it so important to you ? ".

Her father got irritated ," Enough Khushi. We will wait for 15 more minutes and then we will leave. I will not discuss more".

On hearing his fathers irritated tone, all 3 women kept quiet.

After 10 min Khushi noticed a car just entered basement parking. Her father exclaimed . He was here. Finally Mr Arnav Singh Raizaada had graced the lesser mortals like her, with his presence.😡

Edited by maaneet_michi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww it's a cute starting
I loved it
N this khushi is what always want so u awesome job in writing something different
Waiting for ur next chapter :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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made me laugh to read... dont wait long for update
please this sound so cool
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i wonder how arnav going to be...

in your version...

since we can no about khushi... attitude
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot for the response...
I have wanted to show Khushi in a lot more independent manner . And I hope and plan to keep Arnav's wealth in a very sizeable proportion than normally displayed.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please dont take her confidence on being financially independent as some sort of attitude.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start...
Waiting to read more
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Originally posted by: maaneet_michi

Thanks a lot for the response...

I have wanted to show Khushi in a lot more independent manner . And I hope and plan to keep Arnav's wealth in a very sizeable proportion than normally displayed.




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