KaYa OS: Mere Kabir Sir

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi...
Here's an os I couldn't help but write...this is based on the spoiler...I guess u know which one😉...this is dedicated to Sowmya as a farewell gift😭
Os:Mere Kabir Sir

Ananya and Kabir were sitting in madhonath's adda...kabir was in deep thought while Ananya was really tense and worried...when she noticed one of the goons staring at her...

A: kya hai?...kabhi sundar ladki dekhi nahi kya?...aakhe noch lungi...Aur tumhara Vo madhonath usse toh main...

G: aae madam ...tameez se baat karo...varna...
Just then madhonath made his villainous entry...

M: aarey ruko...kya kar rahe ho...
Grabbing Her neck pressing harder...he said...
M: ab tameez seekhegi...

This scene got on Kabir's nerves...he lunged forward and pushed madhonath with all his strength...
In turn madhonath slapped him hard...the impact made kabir fall down...madhonath pulled him up and beat him up mercilessly...and threw him to the ground...

The goons laughed and went away...
A: kabir sirrr!
She screamed at the top of her voice...
She immediately took his head on her lap ...she called

A: kabir sir...aap theek hai?
He didn't reply...he saw his cheek it had swollen quite a bit and had a cut due to madhonath's ring...his nose too was bleeding...and had many bruises and cuts on his body...

Tears streamed down her face...she felt very guilty...he had told her time and again to keep calm but she didn't listen to him and now he has been punished for her deed...

Kabir sir can you hear me...
K:ye..yes...Ana..Ananya...Tu..tum...theek...theek ttoh...hona?...( weak and heavy voice)
She wanted to cry even more as he was not able to speak properly... ..
A: I'm sorry sir...I'm very sorry...meri vajah se aapko...
She burst into tears...kabir had never seen her cry and his heart pained to see her like that...
K: no...it's...not...your fault...I'm fine...
She quickly removed her handkerchief and wiped his blood...

She made him sit properly and had almost dozed off when a goon entered and threw a plate in front of her and yelled...

G: itna hi khaaneko milega...chup chap kha lena...

She looked at the miserable food not even enough for one person that would have to be shared by two ...

She looked at kabir he weak and needed food so she tore of a small part less than quarter of the roti and left the rest for him...

As soon as Kabir opened his eyes he saw a peice of Roti in Ananya's hand near his mouth...he loved it!
It had been years when someone had fed him lovingly...

Night 11
It was really cold...madhonath and his goons sat In another room all warm with a blazing fire leaving kabir and Ananya in a cold and damp room...with an old thin blanket...

Ananya was cold and shivering...kabir noticed this and pull her closer by her waist...Ananya rested her head on his chest while he rested his chin on her head and covered them with the blanket

Ananya smuggled even closer in her sleep making kabir smile...he just stared at her lovingly...occasionally caressing her head...soon he too smuggled closer to her and both were soon in deep sleep...

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Next morning:

Ananya was the first to wake up only to find herself in kabir's arms...

She smiled at his innocent face...one thing that she came to know that behind the shrewd and professional kabir Sharma exists an innocent and kind hearted kabir which she wants to bring out...

A goon came to check on them abduction laughed madly looking at their posture...
G: toh do aashiq pyaar lada rahe hai...hmm...
Ananya decided to keep quite and gave him a disgusted look...

Later that day ...when the goons and their Boss were out...Ananya and Kabir sneaked out...

Ananya lighted some dry leaves as a signal to nearby people to help them...
Luckily...inspector Khuraana's rescue team got the signal and came to their aid...while madhonath was also arrested...

In police station...
Ananya and kabir had come to give their statements while madhonath was being led away...
A: ek minute inspector...
She came near madhonath and slapped him hard...
A: ( angry and disgusted tone) ye tha hum dono ko torture karneke liye...
And slapped him much harder this Time and pointing her finger on his face she said...
A: Aur ye mere kabir sir pe haath uthaaneke liye...

Kabir was shocked hearing 'mere'...he couldn't understand why the girl he hunted so much is fighting with someone else for him...but he felt Special and loved!😳

The end😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww.. thanks nautangi... tune tho emotinal kardiya mereko... 😭 😭

Coming to the update... meine kaha tha na.. tere pm aane se pehele me tera Os padchuki hongi...

too good yaar... Mere Kabir sir...
'
Kabir ko kuch hua tho Ananya madam to sherni ban jaathi hai...

Nice slap to that baagi.. wo bhi do... 👏 👏
Edited by sowmyap03 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sowmyap03

aww.. thanks nautangi... tune tho emotinal kardiya mereko... 😭 😭

Coming to the update... meine kaha tha na.. tere pm aane se pehele me tera Os padchuki hongi...

too good yaar... Mere Kabir sir...
'
Kabir ko kuch hua tho Ananya madam to sherni ban jaathi hai...

Nice slap to that baagi.. wo bhi do... 👏 👏

😭 I'm also sad...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome one
nice thought
haaye mere kabir sir *i mean ananya ke*
Can i ask a thing? farewell os to sowmya means?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pd786

awesome one

nice thought
haaye mere kabir sir *i mean ananya ke*
Can i ask a thing? farewell os to sowmya means?

Sowmya's going for a while and god knows when she'll join us back...so that's why😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: akyabiggestfan

Sowmya's going for a while and god knows when she'll join us back...so that's why😭


ohh but she is joining back for sure naa
please sowmya your readers like me are waiting for you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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best part of the OS -

In police station...
Ananya and kabir had come to give their statements while madhonath was being led away...
A: ek minute inspector...
She came near madhonath and slapped him hard...
A: ( angry and disgusted tone) ye tha hum dono ko torture karneke liye...
And slapped him much harder this Time and pointing her finger on his face she said...
A: Aur ye mere kabir sir pe haath uthaaneke liye...

Kabir was shocked hearing 'mere'...he couldn't understand why the girl he hunted so much is fighting with someone else for him...but he felt Special and loved!😳


now waiting to see this on the show too .. dil ko thandak mil jayegi😃 ! keep writing more.

bdw, what should i call you ?😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mind blowing yar..
Awesome
"Mere Kabir Sir"...Awww such a cute moment..
Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww... this was really sweet.
cuteness is redefined.
amazing...
thank u so much for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Owww... Awsome os... Dr...
Loved it...
nd that slap for bagi is v.good
Do write more

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