SUPER MODEL (AR ff) part 30(LAST) dated 11/10/2015 - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: megha_kajen

oye mujhe splly naa bol...
karti hun. comment wait...

(hanjjii sply bolaa.. kunki ap coment nahi krte baki sirf shorttt...😭😭.)
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haan toh ye rahi comment 😉

finallyy...!!!!😆


part was super awsume... loved it yaar...
kyaa kahun...
jo bhi apke dill main hoo...!!!

finally mallik family aa gayi..
hahahahhahaa...
I love both armaan's parents..
they r so cool...
cool toh hona hi tha afterall the armaan malik ke parents hai...!!!

and voh karwa chauth wala flashback...
Nikki aur Ananya...ka...
was mast year...
kese dono be planning ki... 😃
awsome ths na.. main karva chaut ke time se soch rahi thi kahan dalun...


and abhi last me billy
haaye kya dialogue hai...
"abhi main itna Buddha bhi ni hua year"..
humesha ki tarah ...
haha haha haha haaa...
billy malik is the coolesttt...😆😉

awsume...
loved it an jaldi se next upd8 de...
abhi need to go..
aakhiri exam ki preparation karni hai..

updatingg in a few min..

bye
luv u...
cuaaa
myahhh :*

tata...!!!
love u tooo meghsss...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

This comment is for previous part
Maine sochi thi post karungi comment but tune isse pehle hi part post kardia..😛
Yeh part pehle se bhi jayada choti thi
But i lv this part
But phir bhi comment me jayada nhi bolungi
Kyun ki tune itna chota part dia
Jab tak tu badi part nhi deti tab tak meri comment bhi teri part ki jaise hi choti hogi

are mtlb mujhe late update krna chahie tha kyaa...??? 😲
hww ye ka baat hue.. chalo koi naa... next time se ill try n update.. pr main kya krun.. mujhe jda bde parts digest nahi hote...😆😆

For new part
Omg
I'm so happy
It ws soo good*like kfc 😉😛😆*
im loving it.. (mcd)😆😆

I lv armaans dialogue for nikki
That ws just awesome
I so loved it
Then mr n mrs mallik ka acceptance for riddhima is cherry on the top yaar too good
Lved it
thank.. uppss soryy no no no thanksss wanksss onlyy..
loveee uuu aishuuu...


Continue soon
N is bar length leke kuch nhi boli coz tune bck to bck post kia
Lv u
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Tc

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Posted: 10 years ago

part ~ 27


Later in the evening..

Ridhima was siting on a swing on terrace..

Armaan came there n saw ridhima lost in her own thoughts..

Armaan moved towards ridhima n pushed the swing..

Armaan : kin khayalaon main khoi ho madam.. Main toh yahi hn..!!

Ridhima took a few minutes to recover from the shock given by armaan..

Ridhima : armaann.. Tum.. Ye kya tareka hua.. Dra dia mujhe.. Abhi heart atak ajata..

Armaan moved forward n sat on swing..
Pulled ridhima towards himself by putting his hand around her waist..

Ridhima's heart was beating at a faster rate coz of sudden push of swing by armaan..

Armaan : relax jaann.. Tumhare is dil pr main kbza krke betha hua hn.. Itni asani se ise kuch nahi hoga..

Ridhima kept her head oh armaan's shoulder n moved more towards him..

Armaan : kya soch rahi ho..

Ridhima : aj ke din ke bare main kitna kuch hogya na.. Pehle interview main reportes ke vo ques.. Then DK.. Fir tumhare parents ka ana.. Or...

Armaan : or kya ridhima..

Ridhima : kuch nahi..

(she huged armaan more tightly n hid her face..)

Armaan : or toh kuch bhi khas nqhi hua..?? Ya fir bahut jda khas hua..

Ridhima kept mum..

Armaan came out of hug.. N made ridhima face him.. Ridhima's cheek were deep red..

Armaan : haye meri supermodel.. Nahi super designer.. sharmate hue kiti jda sunder lgti hn..

Ridhima : armaan tum bhi na..

N punched his shoulder..

Armaan : acha ab btao itna kya soch rahi thi.. Tumhe pta hi nahi chala main kb aya yahan..

Ridhima : vo armaan.. Pta kya.. Jisdin se maine tumhe mere felings ke bare main btaya.. Main hmesha sochti thi ki kaise milungi tumhare parents 1st time as ur gf.. Pr aj ye sb itni achanak se hua.. Tumhare parents ne bina kuch hmare kahe itna sab.. Tumne unhe kb btaya..??

Armaan : pta hai ridhima Life main pehle bar main confused tha mom se kaise kahun ga.. Pr niki mom ki jasus bno hue thi.. Usme pehle hi usne mom ko btadia tha... Main ek dm shocked rehgya jb mom me mujhe btaya ki unhe sab pta hai..

Ridhima : kya..?? Pr niki me mujhe promise kia tha..

Armaan : usne mujhe bhi kia tha.. Vaise acha hi raha.. Usne btadia.. Mera kam asan hoga.. Jb tum mom dad ko ghar layi thi.. Mujhe lga ab toh mujhe moka hi nahi milgega tumhare sath romance krne ka... Ofice main tumhara har time chalu rehta hai koi ajayega.. Muski rahul atul anji..
Ghar main time milta tha tumhare sath.. Ab no tnsn ab toh tum meri oficial to be fionce ho..

Ridhima : kya armaan tum bhi.. Tumhe hamesha yahi sujhta hai.. Oh shit..

Armaan : ab kya hua..

Ridhima : armaan bahut bdi problem hone wali hai.. Muskan rahul atul anji kisi ko nahi ota hmare bare main abhi tk..??

Armaan : relax ridhima btadenge unhe.. Kya yaar tum bhi.. Kabhi mere sath pyaar se baat hoti.. Sara time kabhi koi kabhi koi..
Jara raha hn.. Byee..

Armaan stood up n moved towards the door..

Ridhima : armaan..

Ridhima ran after him n huged him from behind..

Armaan : chodoo mujhe bahut kam hai..

Ridhima moved n came forwards armaan.. Her arms were still around him.. Holding him..

Armaan moved his gaze away from ridhima..

Ridhima pinched armaan's nose n blowed air..

Armaan : aahh.. Kya kr rahi ho..

Ridhima : jo gusa is nak pr chad ke betha rehta hai use uda rahi hn..

Ridhima placed her arms around his neck n kised both his cheks..
Ridhima was about to leave armaan held her by her wrist n puled her towards himself..
Ridhima lost her balance due to a suden pul..n banged on armaan's chest with her hands on his chest.. near his heart...

Ridhima : armaan ye tum..

He slowly pulled riddhima more into him..and before riddhima could say further.. He placed his lips on hers..kissing her passionately...soon both were lost in the kiss...as armaan sucked her upper lip..she chewed his lower lips...latter both switched the places... And now she was sucking his uppar lip..and he chewing her lower lip...both were lost enjoying there first ever kiss...soon booth were out of there breathe.. So they broke the kiss...

Riddhima after the kiss hide herself in his arms.. Unable to look into his eyes..while armaan was lost in her hairs..in hailing the fregnance.. Soon there moment was broke with the shrill voice of Armaan's phone

Armaan : inlogon ko ghar pr bhi chain nahi hai..
(Picking up the cal)
Haan bol muski..

Muskan : armaan ridhima kahan hai kbse use cal lga rahi hn..

Ridhima took phone from armasn..

Ridhima : haan bol muski..

Muskan : started to cry..

Ridhima : muski tu ro kyu rahi hai..

Muskan : vo main.. Main.. N cried more loudly

Ridhima : muskii

Muskan : main aj party main nahi a sakti..??

Ridhima : wat.. Kyu.. Kya hua..

Muskan : mere sandel ki heal tut gyi...
N cried more n more..

Ridhima : muski plz rona bnd kr.. Kaise tuti.. Hmne kl hi li thi.. Us dunan dar ko main chodungi nai..

Rahul : main btata hn kaose tuti..

Ridhima : rahul tu..

Rahul : pehle apni is pagal dost ki harakt sun fir kuch bolio..

** flashback...**
Muskan was siting in her room..
She had aplied face pack in kept cucumfer slices in her eyes..
She was relaxing herself before the party..

Ting tong..
She heard her door bel ring..
Bt she ignored..
It ringed again..
N Again

On 4 th time muskan was fully pised off..
She remived the cucumber slices

As she opened the door..

Rahul was standing holding a parcel in his hands.. N coz of that he was nt able to see muskan's face..

Rahul : abe itni der kyu lgai kholne main..

Muskam : hoteee tte se ait ni oa.. Ing ong ing ong.. Bjii aa ra haa ell ooo
(khotee tre se wait ni.hota.. Ting tong ting tong bjai jara hai bel ko..)
Muskan coz the facepack was nt able to speek properly..

Rahul kept the parcel
Rahul : kya boli jaa..(as he turened n faced muskan.. Bechare ko 440 wqt ka jhataka lga..)
Aaa...

Muskan's anger reached hights.. Wat ever she could grab she stated to throw on rahul..
coz the pillow hit diretly on rahuls's face he came out of the shock.. N started to laugh..

Rahul : omg muskan.. Kitni dravni lgrahi.hai.. Hahaha.. Ridhima ko bolunga agar use koi hotor theme pr show krna ho.. Tujhe le show stoper..

Muskan threw her sandel towards rahul..
Rahul bent down n escaped from it... Bt the sandles heal broke...!!

Muskam : uteee amiee.. Erii eall
(kute kamine meri heall..)

Rahul : face pack ka fyada one ek.. Tri galiam mujhe smj nahi ayengiii.. Or na tre bkwas suni pdegi... Hahaha..

Muskan threw other sandel on rahul.. it also broke like the previous one..

** end of flashback..**

rahul : toh is tarah is punjab ki sherni ne apna sara zor lgake sandle ko ptka or vo tut gyi..

muskan : khote ye sb tri vja se hua.. sbar nahi hai bel pe bel.. meri heall.. (n strtated to cry..)

rahul : ek toh main tri dres leke aya upar se tu..

muskan : ridzii main party pr kaise auungii...( cried more loudly..)

Ridhima : Muski tu sach main pgl jai . Tu tnsn mt le main dusri arange krti hn.. Rona bnd ko ready hoo.. Party ke lie late hojayenge.. Bye..

Ridhima : oh shit itns time hogya.. Teady bbi hona hai..

Armaan : bahut time hai..

Ridhima : nahi hai... Tum bhi jldi tayar hojans...

Ridhima ran towards her room leaving armaan on terace..

Armaan : ye rahul muskan ki kya provlem hai .. Itna kyu ldte hai dono vo bhi hmesha glt time pr.. Indono ki ldai hmare puaar main sabse bdi hadi hai..!!


PS.- meghs love u lots babyyy...!!! :-*

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Posted: 10 years ago
haaye luv u too ❤️
wese tune kyun kaha...

anyways part was super... awsume... super funny n super romantic tha ...

hheheheeehehee 😆

AR ki kiss haaye... mazaa aa gayaa...

aur phir RM ki ladhai... aur bechaari sandel ko in dono k beech peesna pasha...
hahaahahahhaaa
🤣

mazaa aa gayaa...

wese abhi bhi m confuse.. y u said ..
luv u mrgs 😳
haaye sharam aa gayi
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing part loved it
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hagaha RM ki ladai haddi hai... hahaha bechara armaan. .. awesum update diksh :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Again inni si part not fair
Ek to itne din baad
Upar se inna sa
Diks its not done yaar
Aj se balki abhi se i'll call u choti
Coz tu inna bolne k baad bhi inna choti choti prt deti hai

But i lv it
N that rm part ws funny
Still
I want to read more
Update soon
N plz yaar little big wala
Lv u
Tc
Edited by Ruppkotha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww such a cute update
loved ar moments
nd armaan got to ridhz fir not giving him time
omg their first kiss it was so romantic
loved the cute fight between ar
nd how sweetly ridhz ne usko mnaya
but their moment was disturbed my muskaan hahaha
loved the rahul muskaan fight
its really funny moment yaar
but bechara armaan
but itni jaldi kyn khatam ho gya
maine or padhna tha *pout*

acha koi baat nah ab next part jaldi post kardiyo
ok bye tc
waiting for the next part
lov u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update !!
Loved it <3
AR moment is awesome :)
AR kiss !!
RM ki fight and muski ka sandal tutna :D
Continue asap !!

Thnxx for pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome dil
wow so funny it was nd romantic too
but lot of disturbance in their moments hA HA
UPDATE SOON DIL

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