cavya os u nd me make a beautiful we

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u nd me make a beautiful we



Cabir:kahan ho tum (navya shouted on top of her voice) kavya ke saath khelna band karo aur meri help karo packing ke liye

Cabir was playing with kavya who was jst 2 months old

Cabir to baby: yeh madhubala bhi na ,I hate her,hamesha tumhare bira se kaam karvaati rehti hai (saying this he strokes baby's cheeks and she was just smiling) tum has rahi ho that means tumhe bhi lagta hai voh paagal hain, wow that's like papa's daughter( then suddenly he just corrects it as) I mean bira's daughter

Navya: cabirrr

Cabir: mein abhi aya cindrella,uska muh band karvake aata hoon ( saying this he kissed her hand and keeps a pillow beside her and runs to the other room where navya was busy in packing and also searching for something)wats ur problem navya tum chilla kyun rai thi

Navya : kitne der se tumhe bula rahi hoon ,aur tum ab aa rahe ho

Cabir: mein cindrella ke saath khel raha tha na,kal tum dono chale jaoge phir pata bhi nahi kab milunga usse,voh sab chodo bolo y did y call me

Navya:voh tumne humare mata rani ka locket dekha kya jo hum roz pehanthe thein,pata nahi dikh nahi raha lagta hain kho gaya.

Hearing this cabir clutches his pocket

Cabir : nahi I didn't see anything ,now leave me mujhe cindrella ke pass jana hain voh akeli hain aur mera wait kar rahi hain so bye,hum dono sone jaa rahe hain ,good nyt

(Saying this he goes back to the baby and again starts playing)

A smile crept on navya's face witnessing the love the cabir has for her ,no their daughter.she wonders hw life has taken a 360 degree turn within these 2 months but nw it's the time to depart,and tomorrow its gonna be the end of most strangest relationship on this earth she gets flash backs of days spent with cabir

The day when she entered his apartment,the whole crying drama after that,then cabir allowed her to stay with him,days passed by they became rivals to good friends then best friends then...??she remembers hw he fougt with her mother and promised her that he will always b there with her.then harshads entry to their life ,but something was holding her back to cabir.cabir took care of her like a mother .wen he lost his job she supported him.she started to teach music to kids in their apartment. Then he got a new job.they lived happily with so much care for each other ,nok jhoks ,fights,masti and so on.navya gave birth to a baby girl.though they decided to give the baby for adoption ,after seeing her cute face cabir and navya changed their decision and decided to keep baby with them.they were living a happy peaceful life but life turned upside down one day with the entry of Raghav back into cabirs life.harshad also wanted navya back in his life ,harshad seemed to hav changed.he was guilty for his deeds.for navya cabir's happiness was the priority so she let him go with raghav ,as she thought he wud get back love of his life and cabir did same with navya and harshad .and nw the day has come they need to leave each other for each others happiness.but little did they knw that their happiness lies being with each other)

Navya : mujhe jaana hi hoga ,cabir ki khushi ke liye.(.a lone tear escaped from her eyes..she finished her packing and went to the bed room and witnessed most beautiful sight infront of her eyes,cabir sleeping with the baby entwining his small finger with his cindrella and she also seemed to b at peace with her loving dad...nahi bira...).

She went to couch and slept there without disturbing them..praying let this night to last forever ...

Next day morning she woke up with harshads call informing her that he will come to pick her up at 6 in the evening

She got down from the couch and saw cabir and baby still sleeping she went near the baby and kissed her forehead then she went near cabir and lightly moved her fingers through his hair and kissed his forehead also .she went to kitchen and made all cabirs favourite dishes and she decided to thank cabir once again for everything .then later fab 4 and nandini reached their apartment to wish navya and baby for their new life .by the time raghav also reached there.day went so busy that cabir and navya didn't get a single second to spend together.navya got ready by 6 and all the girls took care of the baby and dressed her also.harshad was on time to pick up navya and his baby.and now its time.

Harshad took baby from nandini and held baby in his arms but cabir noticed that harshasd had held baby in a wrong way that might hurt her

Cabir rushed to him and took baby from him(shouted on top of his voice) : harshad yeh kya kar rahe ho,meri beti ko hurt hoga agar tum aise pakadoge toh(then he realizes slip of his toungue and correcst it.)mera matlab hain meri cindrella ko.(Everyone around them except navya were shocked to see this possessive side of cabir.)

Cabir realized wat he did few minutes back and to come out of this awkward situation he gave back baby to harshad

Cabir: voh baby ko aise pakadte hain harshad otherwise it will hurt her.

Harshad: oh thanks cabir.ab toh baby har roz mere saath hogi and mein dheere dheere sab seekh jaaunga

Hearing this cabir plastred a fake smile on his lips and nodded his head

Harshad : navya chale its getting late

Navya just nodded her head and hugged everyone,by this time cabir excused himself to washroom,it was time for navya to leave still cabir didn't show up anywhere she went to the bedroom where she saw cabir standing in balcony leaning to the railing

(cabir and navya's change of expressions ,dilemma ,love were only understood manik and nandini they both were relieved to see navya going back to see cabir for saying good bye,because they thought atleast this conversation wud bring out some miracle.

Nandini: manik.sab humare haath se choot raha hain hum kuch nahi kar paa rahe,agr iss tym bhi kuch nahi hua toh sab galat ho jayega

Manik : relax ,hope for the best .shayad ab teek ho jayega)

Navya : cabir ,hum jaa rahe hain aur tum yahaan khade ho?

Cabir:turns to navya ,and with a fake smile: yaar tum gayi nahi madhubala .mein toh yahaan uperwale say thanks kehne aya tha ki ab toh mujhe tumhe jelna nahi padega

Navya with a teary eyes hits him playfully tum kitne rakshas ho mein yahaan jaa rahi hoon so bye bolne ke jagah tum humse peecha chootne ki khushi manaa rahe ho

Cabir smiles

Navya: cabir statue

Cabir freezes

Navya: hum jaante hain ki sirf ek thank u kehna kaafi nai hain,aur humare paas tume dene keliye bhi kuch nahi hai,par hum ye vaada karte hain ki humari aakhri saans tak hum tumhara saath denge ek ache dost ki tarah,aur mein jaanti hoon tum tumhari cindrella se tum kitna pyaar karte ho,dekhna iss duniya mein sabse jyaada pyaar voh tumse hi karegi...aur hum...

She cudnt hold more and hugs cabir tightly,cabir goes numb after hearing her words and lightly hugs her back,after some time they break the hug

Cabir wipes her tears and says thank u to u too...aur jo bhi meine kiya hain na kuch bhi free nahi hain apne us ameeer harshad ji se bolke mere bank mein 5 crore ruppaiye daal dena

Navya smiles : hum tumhe yaad karenge...aur tum?

Cabir: I ll definity miss ...my cindrella ..aur tumhe bilkul nahi karunga ,jab tv par koi black nd white film ayi tab zaroor karoonga

Harshad calls navya from the hall

Navya: haan abhi ayi... She turns to cabir and says bye

Cabir turns back and his back side is facing navya...navya starts to move but suddenly cabir calls her without turning: navya agr tumhe lage kuch bhi galat ho raha hain tumhare saath bas sirf ek call aur mein aa jaunga tumhe lena..kabhi mat sochna tum akeli ho is duniya mein mein hoon tumhare saath

Navya( is shocked to hear all these from cabir) : cabir

Cabir turns back with teary yes and takes her in a bone crushing hug ,navya too reciprocates back,she feels her shoulders getting wet due to his tears but she cudnt understand its meaning

Cabir slowly broke the hug and kissed her forehead : bye navya...

Navya : atleast bahar tak aajao hume chodne keliye

Cabir accompanies her

Navya says good bye to everyone ,takes her luggage and moves down,along with her everyone goes down except cabir and raghav.She feels bad,And bids goodbye to everyone.harshard drove to their house. Others also parted ,but nandini and manik were still there.

Raghav and cabir in room

Raghav comes and hugs cabir and says finally I got u back but cabir doesn't hugs him back he stands there as if he is frozen

He excuses himself and goes to the room,he sat on the bed and remembers all the moments spent with baby and navya,he cudnt get wat was the feeling inside him like if he has lost his life,finally realization stuck his mind that he loves navya.he takes out that mata rani's locket from his pocket and runs but raghv catches him

Raghav: where r u going cabir?we need to spent some time together

Cabir: I'm sorry raghav mujhe jaana hoga...mein ...

Raghav : but kahaan nd y?

Cabir: navya aur cindrella ke paas mein unke bina nahi jee sakta

Raghav: wat ??par tum mujhse...

Cabir: no R,mein tumse pyaar karta tha par ab nahi,ab mein usse pyaar kar kartha hoon jisne muhe sahaara diya ,akelepan se bahaar nikala,jab tum mujhe chodke gaye voh thi mere saath ,usne meri zindagi phirse khushiyoon se bar di,saraa din mujhse ladthi rahi,nautanki kart hi rahi,mujhe chidaathi rahi,aur mujhe ek baby bhi diya ,ab mein usse pyaar karta hoon.meri MADHUBALA se

Saying this he runs down to see her ,but by the time they had left,he s shattered,but manik and nandini were there witnessing this

Nandini: cabir kya hua ? unki yaad aa rahi hain

Cabir nods yes

Nandini: cabir ek baat bolun,zindagi mein aisa nahi hota ki pehli baar hume pyaar mile aur vahi sachha ho. Kabhi kabhi zindagi hume doosara mauka deti hain...aur tumhe yeh mauka mila hain

Manik: hold his shoulders haan cabir zyaada mat soch,jo pyaar tera hain usse apne haath se mat jane de,apne haath se chootne mat de... go man...,

Cabir: par kya navya bhi mujse??

Nandini: iska jawab tum apne aap se poocho

Cabir thinks for a while and recollects all their moments

Cabir: yes she too loves me. I need to go voh meri hain

Nandini nand maik gets happy to seeing this ,manik gives his car keys to him and gestures him to go ahead .they both goes to raghav and makes him understand about cabir's and navya' s relation

Cabir droves the car fastly and he chased harshads car and stopped infront of it,he got down from the car,

Harshad: wat the hell...(.then he realizes its cabir )cabirr

(hearing cabir 's name navya looks at him and sees him standing infront of their car)

Navya gets down from the car with baby in her hand

cabir: kya hua tumhe

Cabir doesn't respond nd takes baby from her and started caressing her but he doesn't give any attention to navya

Navya: cabir ...navya( shakes him) kya hua hain tumhe bataaon na

Harshad gets down from the car almost irritated

Cabir: mein mein,navya mein cindrella ke bina nahi jee sakta aur aur

Harshad:( hell irritated but he calms down to avoid more drama): cabir tum jab bhi aao usse mil sakte ho humare ghar pe .tumhe koi nahi rokega...

Navya: ( looking towards cabir)aur??

Harshad tries to interrupt bt navya shushes him

Navya: harshad shuuu she gestures him by keeping her finger on her lips

Navya: bolo cabir... aur?

Cabir: navya statue...

Navya freezes

Cabir: aur tumhare bina bhi nahi jee sakta..he takes out her mata rani's locket from his pocket socha tha tum dono chale jaoge aur yeh mujhe tum dono kareeb mehsoos karvayega,aur mujhe tumhari mata rani sahara bhi degi...par jab tum dono nikal gaye mujhe realize hua ki mujhe koi devdas ki tarah tum dono ke yaadon mein thadapta nahi rehna,because I'm not that type, I need both of u in my life,mein nahi jaanta ki tumhari apne future se kya expectations hain par mein ek vaada karta hoon tumhe hamesha kush rakhoonga aur baby ko bhi...jaise hum pehle thein vaise hi zindagi bar masti se jiyenge...and I love love u navya

Navya runs to him and hugs him and baby together ,cabir too hugs her

Harshad: wat the hell is all these

By the time manik and nandini too reach there

Manik: tumhe dikhta nahi ?? andhe ho kya? Now get lost

Nandini: harshad, let me b clear to u,navya ne agar tumhare saath ane keliye agree kiya voh sirf cabir ke liye,she thought he will b happy with him par sach toh yeh ki navya and cabir can only be happy being with each other aur voh realize hone mein thoda time laga... aur rahi baat baby ki, koi apna sperm donate se acha dad nahi ban sakta ,par apne karma se ban ta aur cabir se acha dad tum kabhi nahi ban paoge...so.pls try to understand and leave...

Harshad bangs the car door and drives away fastly..

Manan smiles seeing the sight infront of them ,to bring them back to earth manik coughs..

They break their hug,nandini comes to them and takes the baby away

Nandini: choti,chalo aaj thodi der tumhe nandu chachi aur manik chacha gumne keliye leke gayenge

Manik: haan kyun ki tumhare mom dad ko romance jo karna hain kyun cabir?

All of them breaks out into laughter

Manik: achaa tum dono aajaana ,yaad rakhna ki ek bachi bhi hain tumhari,aur cabir tujhe kuch tips chahiye toh I don't mind ...

Nandini hits him playfully,and takes him to car,waves them bye...

Nandini: manik ke ghar honge hum sab ,its party time...romance khtam karke aaj na

Cabir and navya stands there looking at each other,

Cabir: navya voh mein...

Navya: shshhh...she again hugs him : hum bhi tumse pyaar kar the hain,par

Cabir:par kya...

She breaks the hug and hits him

Navya: tum gaddhe batameezz nalayak itni der laga di tumne...

She hits him continuously and he starts running saying sorry..its goes on ...their never ending nok jhoks and fights and moreover their love

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow beautiful os
loved it
very nicely written

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omg it was so cute-do write more😊
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I never read anything here apart from manan stories. But I'm glad I read. Since you sent me the PM I thought I should try reading it!! It was beautiful Gauri!! Amazing... Loved their bonding. Hope something like this happens on the show too!! Thanks for the PM. Keep writing. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparnainbox

I never read anything here apart from manan stories. But I'm glad I read. Since you sent me the PM I thought I should try reading it!! It was beautiful Gauri!! Amazing... Loved their bonding. Hope something like this happens on the show too!! Thanks for the PM. Keep writing. 😊

thank u for comments yaar
i want to see cabir with navya in the show,i think its nt happening ,so i wrote down wat i wanted
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Originally posted by: sherma

omg it was so cute-do write more😊

thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very very well written!
THIS IS HOW I WANT MY CAVYA TO BE..GOSH!😳😳😳
I'll die of happiness if this happens..truly so beautifulll!😊😊
Good job!
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Wow..!!! Beautiful OS..!!! 👏
Loved their bonding..!! its amazing..!! 😳
Sooo beautiful...!!! 😳😳
Nicely written..!! 👍🏼
Edited by PrettyAaShu - 10 years ago
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keep up the good work
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wow...gauri...this is fantastic..yaar...
loved it a lot
u penned it so beautifully...!!!!
do write more like this...
thanks a lot for the pm dear
take care

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