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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

🤣do you know in telgu lang we call muku means nose

oops🤣 her name is muskan naa so i call her muku😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Our ja fans are best yaar atleast they like or comment about our story but in vampire dairies i started a story no one liked it yaar just read i think and i think their very few people in that forum
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

Our ja fans are best yaar atleast they like or comment about our story but in vampire dairies i started a story no one liked it yaar just read i think and i think their very few people in that forum

ja fans are always best😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

...Chapter - 23...

The young lady tried very hard to open her eyes... Due to severe headache here eyelids felt too heavy to lift up... Her one hand automatically reached upto her forehead... She started pressing it lightly so as to reduce the pain... Finally after a good 10 minutes she felt better and had her bearkfast... She was still now hovering on the previous night's events... Buzzing of phone caught her attention... "arth... " she wishpered and pick the phone up... "hmm... Arth bolo..." "jo come down immediately" he cheerfully replied..." Not today arth " jodha polietly replied but arth was nowhere to be convinced "please jo..." after much insistence he finally made jodha agree... "ok wait" with this she hung up... After 5 minutes jodha stepped out of the room and scanned the hall to find someone but fortunately find none ... she rushed outside only to got bump into arth... "ouch..." jodha winced little... "oho cutie you took too much time..." and dragged her to his bike... He immediately jumped on it and ignited the engine and signalled her to sit...
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Jalal tightly clutch the glass... And it broke, glass pieces got pierced in his hand leaving a big cut... "shit..." he hissed in pain... Tears clouded his black orbs not because of injury on hand...but because of the injury on his heart which is more painful and deeper "Jodha m really sorry, i can't let you come near me, you will also leave me alone... Like others do ... With great difficulty i had build this wall around me and i am really afraid to get attached emotionally... Every time i let someone to came close to me, and every damn time i got pain, betrayal and loneliness only... M really sorry i can't give you that what you deserve..." and with this he completely broke down... He was sobbing badly... Every betrayal he got from his loved ones flooded his memory... From his mother , father , his bestie... He was trembling badly because of sobs and loud wails were filling the silence of the room...
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"arth where we are?" jodha looked puzzled ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Looks like jalal had very bad past and lost his loved ones i am also feeling like crying:'(:'(:'(
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice chapter dear wow in this chapter i liked jalal but what about arth...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update monu
now jalal slowly slowly changing
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm chappy neetu.. I loved this side of Jalal he was doing it purposely.. He had sad past made me cry..
U didn't reveal who was that lad.. It's Arth I think who took her out.. I hate this Arth😡
Common dear dont make her go close to arth.
Waiting for next chappy.
Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome nd emotional chapter i love it... i like jalal today in this story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Bingo! Next Update today only

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