NEW SS-PATI PATNI AUR VOH..! Part-5 up on Pg 14 :) - Page 2

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

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PART-1


It was a usually unusual morning at Bhalla house. Raman was lazily lying on his bed. No no it is no more his bed, it is their bed. He smiled thinking of his JKR and her own way to show her love to him. She always managed to do the unexpected and surprise him. Life was always a beautiful dream with her by her side. Thinking all this Raman opened his eyes lazily to find her side of bed empty.


Raman : Yeh madrasan ko bhi na kisi bath ka chain nahi hai. Ise puri duniya ki fikar hai sirf ek muje chod kar. Abb kaha chali gayi yeh JKR?

This Mdrasan doesn't have peace. She cares for the entire world except me. Now where did she go?


Saying that he was just about to get out of the bed when he heard the bathroom door click open and what he saw next, he could not describe in words. There she was his JKR, fresh from her early morning shower. Her wet hair, no makeup and her angelic glow, it was so mesmerizing. What he saw next gave him an even bigger shock. The shock of his life. Was she planning to kill him or what! She was in her baby pink silk bathrobe which was loosely tied on her waist showing her perfect figure. Raman gulped seeing that.


Raman :(self talk ) Yeh madrasan ko kya ho gaya. Vo kab se aise kapde phne lagi! Beta ise phele ki vo tuje dek le or din bhar tuje tana mare ki thu kitna shameless hai jaldi jaldi so ja. Ha yeh theek hoga.

What happened to this madrasan. When did she start wearing such clothes! Better you sleep before she see you and tease you the entire day. That's better.


And then he posed as if he is slept but what he didn't know was his madrasan also knew mind reading and was observing his every action from when she stepped out, but thought to play along.


Ishu: Ravan Kumar yeh tho bas trailer tha...asli picture tho abhi baki hai and chuckled mentally.

Ravan Kumar, it was just a trailor. Real picture is not over


Then she walked to her Ravan Kumar slightly leaning over him as her wet hair brushed his cheek. She gently wished him good morning by quickly kissing him on his lips and ran away to change.
Raman was in a total state of shock but as what just happened sunk in his head he smiled thinking of his JKR and her nautanki.


Raman : Kithni badi drama queen hai yeh pagal madrasan! Jab pass Jane ki koshis karo tho bhag jati hai or jab control karo tho yeh...Beta asli maza tho abb aega...thu phele bhar tho aa madrasan. Mai tujhe sika tha hu ki apne pati ko good morning kaise bolte hai.

What a drama queen is she! When I try to get closer she runs away and now when I controls...It'll be fun...Firstly you come out madrasan. I'll teach you how to say good morning to your husband.

And he smiled running his hands in his hair.


Other side Ishu was a total mess. She wanted to tease her Ravan but ended up blushing like a red tomato.


Ishu :(self talk) Relax Ishu...be normal. You're not a teenager with her crush. Get a hold on yourself and forget what just happened.


Acting completely normal she came out of her bathroom all decked up in a beautiful transparent white sari and a sleeveless deep cut blouse. And she saw that the devil was up and on a mission.


Ishu: Good morning Raman. App itni jaldi kaise utt gaye? Kuch chayea app ko?

You woke up so early? You want something?


Raman (to himself ) Yeh deko phele khud kaise ko aide jago aur phir aise bath karo Jaise ki ise kuch pata hi Nahi. Tuje tho mai abb batata hu JKR.

See, first wakes me up like this and now acts as if nothing has happened. I'll you show you JKR

(To ishu ) Vo kya hai na, aj kal ghar mai bin mousam barish hogi rahti hai ase mai kisi ko kaise neend aa sakti hai.

It's just that, nowadays rain falls regardless of the season. Then how can anyone sleep.

And he came close.


Ishu : walking back. Barish...! Oho mai samaj gayi. Yeh Neelu bhi na, is ko kitni bar bola hai ki kamara app ke Jane ke bad saf kare bekar app ko utah diya. Mai abhi us se bath karti hu.

I understood. I told Neelu a lot of time not to clean the room before you leave. I'll tell her now.

and she ran out calling Neelu.


Raman : Ishita ruko tho sahi.

(Ishita stop)

But she was gone by then Koi nahi, bach ke kaha jaegi vapas tho yaha na hi hoga.

No problem, where will you go. You'll come to me anyways.

And he also walked out to start his day.


In hall


An over exited Mihika ran to her Akka
Mihika: She hugged Ishu and said Akka Akka Akka I'm very very happy today u can't imagine how happy I am.


Ishu : Kya hua itni kushi kis bath ki

Why are you so happy?


Mr and mrs bhalla :ha ha Hume bhi Bata


Mihika : vo...
And she stopped in middle as if remembering something and then said Kuch Nahi. Kuch bhi tho Nahi happy hone ka koi reason hona zaroori tho Nahi hai na.

Nothing. Is it important to have reasons for being happy.


Mrs bhalla : thu bhi na ek dum pagal hai kothi na hoitey

You became mad


Ishu (st ) Yeh miku kuch tho chupa rahi hai. Pata karna hoga.

Mihika is hiding something. I'd find it.

To Mihika vaise miku thum yaha I mean Kuch kam tha kya?

Miku, you here. What happened?


Mihika :stammering Nahi mai...Tho bus...And then it clicked to her and she told, Simmi ki sangeeth ke liye help karne ae thi Akka

I just came over to help you in Simmi's Sangeet.


Ishu somewhat convinced got back to the work she was doing when Raman came there.


Raman : madrasan ab ki madad karti rahogi ya kuch apne dance ke bare mai bhi Sochogi?

Will you keep on helping others or think of our dance?


Ishu : Kya Raman app bhi na. Hum last mai practice kar lege phele Simmi important hai us ki shadi hai after all.

You too Raman. We'll practice later. After all it's Simmi's marriage.


And Raman went from there cursing his fate that how his pagal madrasan was busy with her samaj sewa (social service) and never cared for him and he stormed out to his office in irritation. On the other side Mihika who saw all this decided to do something to help her jiju but knew her Akka was a tough nut to crack and suddenly as if something struck her head she ran out of the Bhalla house on pretext of making an important call.


Mihika : on call Hai mai bol rahi hu. Ek zaroori kam hai thum kitni jaldi ho sake yaha aa jao. hmmm ok. Bad mai bath karte hu. Ok bye see u.

It's me. There is something important. You come here ASAP. I'll talk to you later.


Sorry Akka, but app ke aur jiju ki love story ko track pe lane ke liye yeh apne sweet story mai mirchi ka tadka lagana bhot zaroori tha.

It's important to add some spice in you and jiju's love story



TO BE CONTINUED...



Precap :- sangeeth dance masti and bomb blast


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ASHA

Oh... So sorry...for the late comment
I was on my workshop of updating KNK and then I slept till now 😛
Coming to the update;
Awesome start 👏
When I was updating it I really thought about you dear...
You started with a steamy scene 😳
Raman...as in the serial has bad luck in this story when it comes to that 😆
I'm not digging other scenes but Mihika
Kya kehne vali dhi voh...
Jaldi update karo... Oops... Update send karo 😆

Nice start .Asha ..continue soon . gay u r really a sweet heart dear

instersting start
ishita naughty avtar
raman's frustration n
mihika's plan wow just loved
continue soon

Hey it's amazing starting plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

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Originally posted by: divazfankau

instersting start
ishita naughty avtar
raman's frustration n
mihika's plan wow just loved
continue soon

Ahem ahem...the morning scene... Wah wah wah...

Originally posted by: AngelSREE

Ahem ahem...the morning scene... Wah wah wah...

Actually what's gonna happen in ishra's life...

Gayatri (Chechi/molu) update next part soon...