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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: DEEPIKAA0123
superb update. And nice story

Thank u rani (I hope I am not wrong with the name ) glad u liked it 😳

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sush_avina
Amazing update...
so cute
please update soon

Hello sush glad u liked it just now read ur anniversary wala story u r an amazing writer in dead 😉

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Rinki

@IshraMiNeholic

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

hehhe love it..

lyk romi flirtng style wid pari..

wat a gr8 suprs by pari.. but tell me 1 thng is pari is real sis of mihika nd cousin of ishu..?

hw adi nd ruhi involv in dis plan nd who is d boy... suspense...

reveal soon

thnx 4 pm

updt asap

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

hey its a cute story
njce start
update soon n thanx for d pm

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Asha I was surprise more than Ishu cause I think hot girl come to tease Raman but turn to be Ishu Sister. But the telephone conve look fishy about their plan hope nothing bad happen.Please continue not mind for long update.😉

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Gurleen Sethi (Guri)

@TamannaSethi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb
Translation added 😊
All credits to Gaya3 hihi 😆
Coming to the prologue, it's awesome dear
You didn't disappoint me at all.
I'm enjoying it.
I'm looking forward for updating the first chapter... 😊
It's so interesting 😎
Update hath main hai...phirphi koyi itna excited hoga kya...! (Crazy me 🤣)
Apki writings ke copywriter oops...copypaster... 😛 😆

Wow jii...

You have aldo started writing.. Awesome jii...

Read the prologue just now...

Sounds interesting Asha...

Mission Ishra... Hehe..

Gayatri dii... You are same as me... I am an IF AGENT of my friend AMBREEN...

And you are COPYPASTER. ...

HEHHEEH...

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Gurleen Sethi (Guri)

@TamannaSethi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Part 1

Amazing dear Asha...

Starting was superb hot...

Bechara RKB... Hhehe...

Mihika came to say something... What was that?

Who is that girl yaar?

Mihika is up to somesomething dhamakedaar...

Part 2 updated... Going to read it...

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Gurleen Sethi (Guri)

@TamannaSethi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Read part 2 ...

Ohhh... Meri confuse aatma..

Q confuse kr rhe ho...

Superb update...

I thought Pari came to tease Raman and then Ishu will get jealous of it... But no... She is sister of Ishu and Mihika... I think she is cousin...

It looks fishy dear... But what about the phone conversation.. Whom is she texting?

How come Adi and Ruhi know Pari? I think because of Mihika... She is master mind in this... I think Mihika did all this...

But now if Pari is cousin of Ishu then how will she tease Raman?

Uff .. Confusing...

Still yaar I enjoyed it... Continue soon..

Latkana nhi please..

Gayatri dii... Thanks for being the COPYPASTER... Hehhe...

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Rina

@super_cutie

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Amazing story and very interesting

Plz continue soon

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: usaonly
Asha I was surprise more than Ishu cause I think hot girl come to tease Raman but turn to be Ishu Sister. But the telephone conve look fishy about their plan hope nothing bad happen.Please continue not mind for long update.😉

What to do every one was gussing my plan how could I let that happen 😆 so change in plan twist in story 😉 Oho u people r really good in catching hints 😉
I don't know if some thing bad will happen but I can just say that the bomb is planted now wait for the dhamaka 😆

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