Rishabala FS : Intruder in Love (Part 4,5 - Page 22) FINISHED 3/5/16 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful story
eagerly waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Nw story haaa. Nic start. Madhubala Bhatia ehhh. 🤣 Heehee. Anyway yaarrr itz Gud to see u bak wid anothr 1. Thankz fr PM. Continu soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start dear.loved it.thanx for the pm.waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start azru🤗
Belated happy b'day suru🤗
Thanx for pm..
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Superb start dear. Wait for next update. Thanks for pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing start. ..sounds very interesting. ..wanna c when will rk know the reality. ..n whats with engagement. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi everyone 😃
Hope you all are doing well 😉
I am back with Part 2 of this story, that to the day I promised 😆


PART 2


"Mammaaa" "What is it baby?" "I want my special aloo puri today" "I will make it tonight now we have to rush or mamma will be late to office" "You promised you will make it" "I will but after comming back and you also have to come with me as today is your holiday" "My buddy will also be there" "Yes" "So he is comming to pick us" "Yes when ever you have holiday your buddy comes to pick us right" "Yes.. Mamma i am want to wear my pink frock" "Okay where it" "Thank you mamma, you are the best" "Welcome baby" madhu replied to her daughter Suru while making breakfast, being a single mother was not easy. Madhu completed cooking and dressed suru , both of them were having there breakfast when there was a knock on the door "Mamma it must be buddy, I will go and check the door" "Okay" madhu replied, Sikky always helped madhu when ever he could and suru fondly called him buddy "Mamma I guessed right it was buddy at the door" suru said said showing her toothy smile. "Hi madhu" "Hi Sikky" "Did you find any new news??" "No sikky, I got myself in a big trouble but" "That bad, what happend?" "Long story will tell you on the way to office" "I forgot to tell, Rk is coming to city centre mall for a shops inguration and boss wants you to cover that" "No sikky, I cant do it" "Why?" Sikky asked and madhu told him what all happened yesterday skipping the part she slept in car. "That was a narrow escape" "but now if I go Rk will recognise me and then I am dead. I have to take suru also with me" "Okay lets make a deal, I will help you" "Done" "First listen what I am saying" "Okay tell" "Its my friends birthday party day after tomorrow in a club and you should come with me as my date" "Okay but this is the last time" "You are the best madhu and we will go to mall you take suru and go to play zone. I will go and cover the inaguration" "Thank you" madhu replied and three of them left for the mall.


There was lot of rush at the mall as the super star Rk was going to come. Sikky went to the shop and Madhu went to game zone with Suru. "Mamma I want ice-cream" "We will buy while we are going" "Okay" both of them were going when Sikky again came back "Buddy you came, you work is over" "No but it is delayed. Madhu lets go to coffee shop the inguaration is after 1 hour" "Okay lets go" madhu replied. They were sitting and talking about various things when out of the blue Suru asked "Mamma why do you do all the work?" "Because I am your Mamma" "but my friends mother and father share the work" "your mamma is very strong she can do everything" "but boys are strong" before madhu could reply Sikky said "I am strong boy and I help your mamma" "but you are no my father" "So you need a father?" "Yes" "As your mother doesnt have a boyfriend, we need to find one and get him married to your mom and make him your father" "Is it that simple" "Sort of but we need to find a boyfriend first" "Okay so mission mamma's boy friend starts'' '' Yes" sikky replied and both did a high-five.Madhu was shocked hearing what Sikky was telling to Suru , she hit sikky on his back and said "Shut up Sikky" "Okay" sikky replied and winked at suru because of which she started laughing.


Later Sikky went to for the inaguration and madhu and suru were going to game zone "Mamma my ice cream, you forgot" "You eat cupcake and cookies right" "but ice cream. I will go and get it, I am a big girl now" "Be careful" madhu said . Suru went and happily brought her Choco chip icecream, she was going back when a group people passing pushed her and her ice cream fell. Suru started crying when someone came to her and said "Sorry because of me the ice cream fell" suru wiped her tears and saw who it was "Rk my fav hero" she said. Rk picked her up "Hi" Hi hero" "So I am your favourite" "Yes, I and mamma see all your movies" "Wow... thats good. So do you want Ice-cream" "Yes yes yes" "Okay so lets get you one" rk was going when Bittu his manager stopped him "Chief what are you doing we are getting late" "Bittuji" "Chief leave this girl. We have to go" "Okay you get this girl a ice-cream" "I will" bittu replied. "So cute little princess I have to go now but this uncle will get you a ice-cream" "Okay" "Bye princess" "Bye hero" saying this suru gave a flying kiss to Rk and went with bittu to get her ice cream.

"Where were you princess. I was getting worried" "Mamma I met Rk my hero" "Good" "Mamma I want to meet him again" "He is hero and he has many fans how can he meet everyone. He will be busy also." "Okay mamma, lets go to game zone now" "Yes" madhu replied. Next hour went playing in game zone, last week suru was ill and madhu was worried about thats why she wasnt able to attend office, spending time with suru made madhu happy again. Almost an hour later Sikky called madhu and asked her to come at parking level 2. Madhu and suru went down and when they where at parking level 1, suru shouted "Heroo, mamma hero is there I am going to meet" saying this she left madhus hand and ran. Few seconds later she returned with Rk "Hero this is my mamma and mamma this is our hero". Rk was shocked to see madhu and was more shocked because the girl was calling madhu mamma. "Hi madhu" "Hi rk" "She is your daughter?" Before madhu could reply Suru said "Yes she is my mamma" "And where is your father" "I dont have a father but we are looking for one. We need to find a boy friend for mamma, so that he can became mammas husband and my father" "Wow... that sounds an interesting plan'' rk said looking at madhu who was red in embarrassment "Rk she is just a kid and speaking rubbish" "Why dont we discuss this over a cup of coffee" "Rk I have to go now" madhu said and suru again interrupted "Mamma I want to go with hero" "Baby your buddy is waiting for us" "Oh , I forgot. Sorry hero we have to go" suru said making a sad face. "No problem princess we can meet tomorrow" "Yes we will go to your movie" "You want to see my movie??" " No i want to go where you do movie" "You mean the studio or sets" "Yes that only" "but I dont have shooting tomorrow" "Pleaseee" "We will go there but like a picnic, What say?" "Yes you are the best hero" suru said. "Madhu tomorrow 2pm at Sitara studio" "Rk .. I .." "Pleaseee" rk and suru said together "Okay" madhu replied having no choice left "So we are meeting tomorrow princess" saying this Rk kissed suru's cheek and she did that same back making rk smile "Bye hero". Rk then turned towards madhu and said "Bye madhu" he then moved closer and whispered in her ear "Will be waiting for you beautiful" saying this rk kissed madhus cheek shocking her and went.


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I hope you all like the update *Fingers Crossed*😊.
So how was the twist by the way this will not be a TS I guess 😆😉
Suru how was the surprise 😉 RK kissed you 🤣



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Edited by AzraZaidi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
MEEE :) :) yes me on cloud nine... hayeee I kissed RK awww!!! 😳 😳
love ya aziii for this super awesomest part!!!
I really enjoyed reading it... interesting twist madhu is mamma of meee hahaha...
RK going crazy for her kissed her and beautiful whoaaa!!!
smashing cute update...
eagerly waiting for next type fasssttt!!!! 😛
Edited by My_VivJaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
luv u aziii
Meri Suru R u okkk????
Sweety what is ur feelings ????
RK kissed uuu😉😉😳😳
O my goddd
is it sweet or hot????😳😳😳
Just maari daala aziii
Our sweet baby Suru got her kiss
Ur writting is improving strongly day by day
I am feeling some twist ahaannn
Eager to read more
and basically i love RK madhu but in this story my Love is SURU
Hehehheehhehe
such a cute bacchi
really what is in theiir past
update soon 9 when ue wifi works)
lov u more azi
sorrryyy fr beinng too late

Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb update azru😃
Madhu hv a baby😕
But i guess there is some different story😳
Continue soon😛
Edited by .PassionateLuv. - 10 years ago

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