Rishbala FF: Till The End#4[Epi-Page 34] COMPLETED

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: muzikk93
Beautiful ending😃😳yesss epilogue please😳

thankss dear!!! will write epi soon!!!

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi
azzi another stunning update.

lovely piece of writing dear.

one of d best ever story of this forum ll miss d story.

nevertheless it was a blissful journey with this ff.

do write epilogue too dear.

thankss dear!!! glad u loved it so much!!! ya I will...

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: piaviviandsena
Awsm Ending. Luved it.

thankss dear glad u loved it...

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: piaviviandsena
I definately want epilouge. Maybe u cn write about rishbala's babies.

ya I will thanks for suggestion!!!

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: vishti4eva
nice update.please write an epilogue fr this story

thankss dear!! ya I will...

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: ashitha235
Beautiful ending😊Loved this story.
Please write an epilogue.😊

thankss dear!!! glad u loved it... will surely write...

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Hi everyone😉

Thanx for the likes and comments on the previous update 😃

Hope you all enjoy this and keep supporting me 😃

This update is dedicated to Suru who celebrates her birthday today.

Epilogue

Five years later

Rk and Madhu were sleeping when suddenly there sleep was broken by continuous knocks on the door. Rk rubbed his eyes and shouted "Who is this??" "Your princess daddy, now get up and open the door" hearing their daughters voice madhu and rk got up at once. Madhu checked the clock and said "Rk we are late, I said you yesterday night but you never listen to me !! I will go and take shower you go handle your princess" saying this madhu held the sheets closer to her went to take shower and get ready. Rk got up and put up some clothes and opened the door "Good Morning my sweet little bushi" "Good Morning Daddy. You know our house is looking so different because of the decoration" "Dont you like it" "I love it but daddy when will trishna aunty come to stay with us" "Tonight only and ca her trishna mammi" "Yippe, I am so excited she promised to make her special noddles for me" "That great" "You know mommy said today I am going to wear my new dress" Wow" "And also she said that ... " rk rk stared at his daughter who kept speaking like her mother, non stop. He still remembered the day vividly when madhu told him that she was pregnant, it was unexpected madhu hadn't finish her final exam but they decided this baby was happy omen for them. Sikky and trishna helped madhu in her studies because she missed classes due to morning sickness and madhu scored well at last. Sikky wanted to open his own office so madhu, trishna decided to be partners and start the buisness. They got their first big project when madhu delivered the baby. It was a baby girl everyone decided to name her bushra as the name meant good news.

Sikky ran coming to Rk "Bhaiii" "What is it sikky?" " I am nervous" "Sikky it was you who proposed trishna and decided to marry her" "I know but also" "You both are together since 5 years so why are you worried now" "I don't know" "Sikky go and get ready" "Where is madhu ??" "How many times did i tell you to call her bhabhi" "okay okay , Where is bhabhi?" "I wont tell go and get ready and stop behaving like bushi" "Okay" sikky replied and went to his room. Rk went down and was checking the decorations when he saw mohan standing and ordering the workers, rk went to him and said "Dad you go and sit. I will see the work here" "No rishab let me do this" "You go and play with your grand daughter , I will stand here" "This sounds a good idea" saying this mohan went. Rk chuckled and thought after madhu came in his life everything changed for good.

It was evening time and Sikky's wedding rituals had started Madhu was sitting with Roma and Radha. Madhu was very happy, she had everything she ever wished for. She found a handsome caring husband in Rk, a great friend and brother in Sikky, a mother in Radha and Roma, a father in Mohan and a angel in her daughter bushra and now trishna was also joining the family. After madhus marriage Roma stopped working and started her own bakery which has now turned into a small cafe. Mohan had permanently shifted to India now stayed in kundra mansion with everyone. They all were a happy family now.

All the rituals ended and madhu was back in her room after putting her princess to sleep. Madhu chuckled thinking what happened few minutes ago, bushra wanted to sleep with trishna and sikky was helplessly looking at everyone but atast rk was able to convince her to sleep in her room. Rk entered the room "Madhu you looked very beautiful today, i wanted to tell you since morning but dint get time" "I know and you look no less" "You want to see the pictures I took" "Sure why not" madhu replied. Rk took his camera and started showing the pictures to madhu, there were many beautiful candid pictures. "You still look the same" "Really" "And you know what ?" "What??" "I love you my sleeping beauty" "I love you too" saying this madhu tiptoed and pecked his lips before she could withdraw Rk held her face and deepened the kiss. They continued kissing till it was extremely necessary to breath.

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I hope you all like the update *Fingers Crossed*😊. It was so tough for me to write this and Suru as this is a surprise for you i couldn't tell you that i am posting this ... you have no idea how tough this was for me . No proof read ... Sorry .

PLEASE READ THE NOTE BELOW

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NOTE

Hi everyone ,

Hope you all are doing well. Till the end finally comes to a end now, this was a wonderful memorable journey for me and I hope you all also enjoyed it. I want to thank all the readers who have been with me from the start and also those who joined later but continued till the end. Some readers who left this in the middle due to exams and busy life I miss you all. I am not a writer, I just scribble for fun but you all made me a writer, reading your beautiful motivating comments was the best part of the day. I want thank everyone who pressed the like button or atleast commented once and the silent readers please I deserve atleast one comment. Hope I am not boring you all but there are three persons I want to mention without whom this story wouldn't have been possible. Bushra, Suru and Shuvra you three made this story happen. Without bushra's constant nagging I would have never written this story and without Suru I would have never typed or had the courage to post and without Shuvra di I wouldnt have been able update. I am blessed to have you three in my life. Ruby, falak a special thanks to you two also for being my constant support. I hope you all have a successful and happy life and hope to meet you all again in my next story till then keep smiling, stay happy, be blessed.

Love,

Azra 😃.

Edited by AzraZaidi - 10 years ago

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SuRu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

My biggest surprise Yayyy!!! TTE's Epi!!!
I Love You for This!!!!
I m proud of you!!! 😳
it's really superb!!! from starting till the end I will miss this story!!! loved each bit of it... rishbala's cute little Angel!!!
grt work 👏
Thanks For Dedication!!! 🤗

Edited by My_VivJaan - 10 years ago

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vishti4eva

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

will be waiting fr ur next story

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jalebi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Beautiful ending azra dear...

Loved it...

Haha... Princess want to sleep with sikky & trish on thier SR huh?? Great!! It would have been more fun if rk couldnt manage his daughter & made her sleep in her room... Then poor sikky would have gone mad...

Enjoyed this story a lot dear...

Thanks..

Happy birthday suru dear...

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago