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Posted: 10 years ago
nice story dear... continue soon 😊
is geet not well and how does maan know her 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
~LONGING FOR LOVE~



PART 4

there was silence that prevailed in the room..maan was confused , frustrated , helpless and the girl in his arm was unknown.. He knew that she could be any threat posed by his rivals... MAAN SINGH KHURANA was no ordinary person.. He knew what she could be.. His blood boiled on thinking on such prospect.. He wanted her to say and in a moment he parted her away from himself .. She was shocked with sudden anger that he showed .. Her eyes were already swelled with the tears that she shed and now his behavior was making her feel unwanted and used..
Maan : just get lost from my place do you hear me.. I don't know you and don't want you here ... Just leave .. I don't want to do anything that you will regret .. Just leave..
His voice was hoarse and rigid with no emotions.. She was crying a lot.. Maan didn't knew what to do.. He was just cursing the very moment he saw her.. It was just a week and now he was struck with her.. A total stranger..
Maan was already filled with anger and hatred , it was him who was feeling weak towards her.. she was just a mere girl and she managed to stay with him from last two days.. He was now sure that she wasn't the one she was pretending there must be some reason..
On the other hand , the girl was so lost she was sobbing holding the soft scarf and didn't knew what to say to him... He was mad at her.. But why .. She was feeling so depressed listening to his words.. She at once came towards him and cupped his face..
Geet : please itna gussa mat Karo.. I know I did a mistake .. But please uski itni badi sazza mat do.. How I will live without you.. I love you.. I really do believe me.. She slumped down on the floor after confessing for the second time.. And maan he was having no clue how to deal with her.. He at once held her from her arms.. And in a jerk made her stand..
Maan : dekho this drama won't work on me.. Don't make me involve the police , I know what type of girl you are.. Tell me who sent you.. I will pay you double amount your so called boss is paying.. Tell me..


He smirked seeing her face shocked .. He had played the ultimate card now..
She didn't said a word ..

Maan saw her retreating her steps and the next moment he saw her leaving..
Geet : I don't know what I have done.. Babaji ki kasam I am not lying I really love you please ..
Maan ,for a second wanted to go and console her.. He was thinking maybe she was thinking him as someone..
Geett: you are taking revenge na.. Meine wo sab kiya but I swear jaan book ke nai kiya tha.. She pinched her throat and sweared while her cheeks and eyes were red from crying.. She was getting hiccups in between but it didn't bothered him..
Maan folded his hands and at once asked him..
Maan : OK tell me who told you I am here.. As no one know that I am here bolo kaise aayi yahan tak.. He asked her..
Geet wiped her tears with her hands .. Her every gesture was creating a doubt in his mind.. Her habits were like a child and the way she wiped her tears with her palm..
Geet : I knew that mom dad were lying to me.. Unhone mujhe bola that you don't want to meet me see my face.. But I knew that you don't do that.. Mein toh aapki geet hun na.. And how can you leave me.. Mujhe pata hai aap naraz hain lekin kabhi bhi apni geet ko chodkar nai jayenge..
Her each and every word was filled with so much innocence and trust that he was not getting what should he do.. Should he trust her or make her leave ..
Maan was in Darjeeling for six months , he needed some space and there was a constant pressure of marriage for which he wasn't ready.. He was handling khurana industries with perfection now and didn't needed anyone to ruin his concentration.. He had came to Darjeeling after a big fight with his mom and daadima who were persuading him to meet the girls.. and maan needed some time.. He was a practical guy and wanted some time for himself.. He knew that his dad was certainly against him arguing with the ladies but sometimes they were too much..


Maan came out of his thoughts when he saw her standing still at the door of the cottage entrance .. Practically dressed in just a long skirt and a shirt that was hugging her body .. It was chilly cold outside and he had seen her in the same dress from last two days trying to figure out the situation as she was so stubborn to let him go..
Maan : that doesn't answer my question how did you come here..
Geet was tongue tied and meekly replied
Geet : mom dad were forcing me to come to Kolkata .. Unhe lagta hai mein pagal hun..
Sadness crept on her face and it affected him too.. He didn't know what to say but was quite for some time..
Geet : aap batao kya me pagal hun.. I am not mad.. Mom KO lagta hai I am getting mad isliye she want me to come to kolkata with her ..
Maan was listening to her.. She was saying it with each and evry detail that it was hard for him to believe that she was not pretending..
Geet : I saw you in the place.. Aap apni car me ja rahe the.. And I followed you here.. I knew that mom dad will not allow me isliye i hide myself ..
Maan was stunned hearing her..
He knew that he had taken his car from bagdogra that was the only airport near sikkim as there was no direct connectivity but he was not sure that she followed him from there..
He for a moment cursed himself why didn't he checked the SUV of his..
Her talks didnt do something good just angered him.. She is been following him is a clear thing that someone send her behind him..
This project that he was doing in Darjeeling is worth of millions and rivals are just seeking any chance to destroy it along with the reputation and image of khurana's and that was the reason maan had a strict security on the sites and now this girl was making him suspicious of her acts and her purpose..

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I didn't updated yesterday coz I thought no one was waiting..
Well from this past is started and it will continue upto two - three parts..

Thank you those who commented..

Two readers guessed the plot.. Well I don't have to say much you people r really genius 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan is thinking about past.
He thought she was send by someone to disturb him.
Geet tells him she is following him from airport.
Geet is mentally disturbed.
Edited by kamnagupta7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very interesting and mysterious also... geet followed maan from bagdodara and maan is suspecting her... he is thinking may be she is sent by the his rivals to spoil khuranas reputation... why geet is saying I luv u to maan when he didn't even see her before...has maan forgot his past or geet thinking maan as some one else with whom she is in love... eagerly waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb Update
Still geet is mystery, poor her crying continuously and maan in dilemma don,t know how to handle her, he is suspecting her , geet confessed her love second time , she is behaving like she knows maan since long and maan does not know who she is???
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet was following maan , he was thinking she was sent by some rivals
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting part dear .. maan thought geet sent by his rivals to destroy his project .. geet crying and innocently telling him how she reached there ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
maan is having doubt on geet's intentions why she is following him
geet is bit childish
maan come here 2 hide from his family bcoz they want 2 marry him


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Posted: 10 years ago
was i the one who gussed???right
waise awesome part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Different update
Did Maneet know eachothet from past
Waiting for update

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