MY BROKEN HEART --- An arshi poem ..

Hello Everybody .. I think I m three years late in posting this poem I wrote ..Arnav and khushi are eternally etched in our hearts and minds .. We are still here ... Reliving their moments .. This poem is something I wrote when I saw the scene where Arnav calls khushi his 'biggest mistake'.I could not take how he could hurl those words at her .. How broken she looked .. I had to write this to get over the sadness I was feeling at the time.. .. I recently watched that scene again and thought I will post it here.. I am not a writer .. So please excuse the errors ..here it goes

U say brutal words to scar me ,hurt me,
U believe that they will define me...

Spewing venom time and again,
basking in glory when I m in pain ...

As my broken heart sobs and bleeds,
my mind tries to come up with an answer to your deeds,

My heart says - let it go.. Let it be..
For there will be an end to this , you shall see..

I pick up the pieces and try to mend
I have been easy for you to break and bend ...

I realize i m too broken now to mend
Is this the way it will be till the end?

Do u ever care enough to stop and think ?
Do u ever wonder about the missing link?

May be loving is hard , it is tough
And u run away , when the going gets rough..

As I think about what to do now
I realize I am loosing myself for love

What's my worth? What's my place?
Why is it that I m still in the race?

And I carry on , with a scarred mind and broken heart,
Putting a smile on , a perfected art ..

Do u care ? Do u see ?
Is this what u want me to be?

As I feel the imaginary chains holding me here,
Want to break free but shudder with fear..

Then I see a ray of hope , as this thought crossed my mind
true happiness ,I finally find ..

U scarred my mind, u broke my heart,
But I realize with joy, my soul is still intact..

As I walk on ,away from this grief..
Intact indeed, I sigh with relief...

An emotional poem and fablous 👏

Hi dear...
It is very written.
The rhyming is good.

hi...I am not a writer, critic nor poet.

Originally posted by: arshifan89

hi...I am not a writer, critic nor poet.

I am simply an Arshi fan. an ardent fan.

for me the poem is fabulous and fantastic,...I can feel it. u made me cry. I feel the pain in khushi's heart.

if at all arnav reads this poem..he cant take the pain, it will pierce through his heart...the silent agony of khushi never went unnoticed by arnav. infact that is simply his punishment according to me. he died thousand times every time he hurt her.

any way I am happy with the end. khushi is still in hope. and according to me, arnav would never hurt her beyond repair. he will be always there to hold her in his arms.

Thank u very much . I totally agree with you that he felt really bad every time he hurt her. And he did hurt her a lot . That said, this one I wrote especially for that scene when he said she's his biggest mistake . Even now that scene brings tears to my eyes . No matter how much he loved her, after all that she did to bring him back safe and put his di on a pedestal for him just like him ,,,, he just ripped her apart in that scene... The fact that he called her kkg instead of kkgsr made me cringe .. She did not deserve that... . No matter what.. And then I waited for the apology ..there was never one ... So ... Hence this ending to the poem 😊 ...oh but I do love Arnav ... Very much ;)

Originally posted by: -She-loSarun

Hi dear...
It is very written.
The rhyming is good.

Thank u :)