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Hey! This my first ts.I was planning of to write this weird ts from long and I did.So,please ignore my mistakes.

Happiness was spread all over in Agra.Every body was busy in the preparations of upcoming jashn as Akbar had won his war against his rival Maharana pratap and also conquered over half of his domain.Every body knew how much these two hated each other and now when he had won the war everybody planned for a jashn.He had come after six months due to the war to Agra and in this span he had missed everybody in Agra specially his beloved wife jodha and their little sons Hassan and Hussain .
It was night time and jalal was in jodha's room where she was making Hassan and Hussain sleep .She was so overprotective about them that she used to make them sleep on her bed in her warmth.Jalal could simply smirk seeing jodha's overprotectiveness towards their twins.After making them sleep jodha also lied down on the bed near them but jalal had different plans.He sat on the bed while pretending and telling,"ahhh! Jodha my head is very badly aching ,could you just massage them?"He was expecting jodha to come near him and pamper him like she always used to do but,what happened made him really sad.She came to his side gave him some pills and told him to sleep but jalal wasn't the one who liked losing so,he kept the pills on the nightstand, got up from the bed and pulled jodha towards him.She crashed on his chest with a thud!They both looked at each other with love.He kept his hands on her bare smooth waist and pulled her move towards him while smirking and then sensually whispered in her ears,"I don't feel like sleeping."He gave a long peck on her lips ,nibbled her lower lip and then looked into her eyes deep.He was looking extremely handsome in the dim light of the candles.This gave her goose bumps all over her body but then she freed herself from his grip and told him"jalal I am really sorry but I am too tired and if you don't want to sleep you can go to the angoori bagh for a stroll."She blew off all the candles and retired for the day.Jalal wasn't angry but was hurt because he knew that it was difficult to take care of Hassan Hussain alone.But again he also wanted to spend time with her.Since he came from the war although she was very elated but she didn't even hugged him once as she was busy with Hassan and Hussain .It wasn't that that he didn't love Hassan and Hussain .They made his life complete but he had lost his jodha in all this.He decided her to give her some space.
Days passed by ,but jodha still had no time for jalal.She was also yearning to spend time with him in his manly arms but after she had got to know about the conspiracies against her twins months ago she had to take the role of an overprotective and possessive mother and to add more to it jalal was also in the war field at that time.After some days mainavati and bharmal arrived to see their grand children.Jodha was elated.When mainavati saw her daughter taking care of Hassan and Hussain all by her self she felt proud.She also noticed jalal and jodha's distances .First she thought it must be due to a fight but then when got to know about the real reason from jodha she decided to reunite the love birds.


I WILL UPDATE THE SECOND PART SOON .I KNOW IT WAS BORING AND BAD BUT PLZ BEAR WITH IT.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update... šŸ‘
PM me when you update second chappy Plz
Continue soon... 😊
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superb update ...
plz pm me to on next update...
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Originally posted by: jodhaandakbar

Awesome update... šŸ‘
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Continue soon... 😊



Thanks a bunch!And I will surely pm u.
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Originally posted by: 1357raksha

superb update ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1 was nice. :)
thanks for pm n notify me of part 2 :)
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wow dear very nice story.please update the next chappy soon and pm me .eagerly waiting.
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The update is awesome. Plzz continue soon and thanks 4 d pm
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it's superb
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nice ts
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