Naksh # short love story no.4 # part 2 -pg 51

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Friends i am going to write some cute...romantic...n sad stories for our beautiful couple NAKSH...
hope u will love it...
but firstly i want to thank...
friends
who always read my stories and do comment for it...
friends
who always read my story and press the like button for ur support...
friends
who always read it but never like it or nor cmment on it
and last but not least...
friends
who never read my story
THANK U ALL...

part A page 1
part B page 2
part C page 4
part D page 7
new story
part 1 page 19
part 2 page 29
part 3 page 32
new story
part 1 page 38
part 2 page 39
part 3 page 41
new story
part 1 page 43
part 2 page 51

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

This is a shortest story for naksh... hope u all like it...
first of all thanks for open this topic and for reading it...
so here is my story...
CHAPTER...A
A girl and a boy chatting with eachother...ya girl is our AKSHARA and ofcourse boy is our NAITIK...
ak- hi !
nk- hi ...
ak-aaj hume poora ek saal ho gaya hai chat karte hue...
nk-hmmm... par aaj tak hum ne ek doosre ko kabhi nahi dekha...
ak-ya i know ...mujhe tum se milne me ek ajeeb sa darr lagta hai
nk-darr kyu ?
ak-pata nahi...
nk-toh iss darr toh khatam kar do
ak-wo kaise ?
nk-mujhse milkar...
akshara became numb to hear this...
nk-pls akshara ek baar mujhe mauka do...ki mai tumhe dekh saku...tumse apne dil ki baat kar saku...kuch toh jawab do...
ak-par mai
nk-pls akshara...i promise ek baar hum milenge toh kabhi juda nahi honge...
akshara smiles on this...
ak-theek hai...mai kal tumse milungi...
nk-thank u akshara...mai tumhare ghar ke paas wale garden me tumhara wait karoonga...tum aaogi naa
ak-haa...mai pakka aaungi...par tum mujhe pehchaano ge kaise ?
nk-tumhe pehchaan ne ke liye...mujhe aankho ki zaroorat nahi...
and then chatting OFF...
naitik happily start prepraing for his first date with akshara...
here akshara...
ak-thanks varsha...
vr-thanks kyu ?
ak-tu ne poore ek saal tak meri itni help jo ki
vr-toh kya hua ? apni friend ke liye itna toh kar hi sakti hu...
ak-par maine tuje inn sab ke liye bahut pareshaan kiya hai...
vr-shayad kal se naa karna pade...
akshara smiles on her luck...
ak-haa shayad kal se phir kabhi na mai naitik se mil pau...aur na hi tujhe yu pareshaan karu...
vr-tu aise mat keh...naitik bahut accha ladka hai...wo tujhse bahut pyaar karta hai...
ak(smile)-wo toh kal hi pata chalega...
and she went to sleep...
AAKHIR KYU KAHA AKSHARA NE AISA...KYU WO NAITIK SE MILNE ME TNA DARR RAHI HAI...KYA HOGA ANJAAM NAKSH KI ISS LOVE STORY...
JUST WAIT N READ...I WILL UPDATE WHOLE PART TODAY...BUT THODA THODA

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

Tum jo bhi likho my best wishes always with u cryu...

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--
Tum jo bhi likho my best wishes always with u cryu...

i know...thank u happu for always be with me...
hope u will like this shortest but the cutest love stories of naksh...
i will update it tomorrow

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

Nice strt cryu waiting for aage ki kahaani...

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Pragati-naksh

@Pragati-naksh

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

nice intro sonal.. its looks like a fresh story. looking forward to it

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
nice intro sonal.. its looks like a fresh story. looking forward to it

thanks pragati
u know ye story aaj hi complete bhi ho jayegi :)

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--
Nice strt cryu waiting for aage ki kahaani...

thank u...
now i am going to write next part

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER...B
NEXT DAY...
Akshara came with varsha in the park...
she sits there on a bench with a small gift...
vr-tu yaha wait kar...naitik abhi aata hi hoga...
ak(smile)- thanks varsha jo tu yaha tak aayi...
vr-its my pleasure...accha ab mai chalti hu...tera prince charming aata hi hoga...
ak-bye ...aur ha bau ji ko kuch mat batana...
vr-theek hai nahi bataungi...bye
after some time...
akshara is still waiting for naitik...
and here naitik brought choclates...flowers ad a love card...for akshara...
he came in the park...and start looking here n there...
when he saw a girl in a white suit sitting quitely on a bench...
naitik came there...and sit beside her
nk-hi ! akshara ?
akshara turn to his side...
ak-yaa i am akshara...tum naitik right ?
nk-yaaa ...!

but she is not looking at her...but smiling continuosly...
nk-ye tumhare liye...
ak-ye kya hai ?
nk-flowers...n chocolates...
ak-aap ye sab kyu lekar aaye...?
nk-kyu nahi laa sakta kya ?
ak-nahi bas aise hi...
he gave that gift to her...
ak-thanks...
nk-aap bahut sundar hai akshara...
ak-thanks
nk-aur mai aapko kaisa laga ?
ak-hum abhi toh mile hai...
nk-ya right...par mai aapke liye kuch aur bhi laya hu
ak-kya ?
nk-ye lijiye...
akshara again take that card...
ak-thank u
nk-isme maine aapke liye kuch msg likha hai...aap pls padhiye naa...
akshara became worried by his word...
ak-mai ye... nahi
nk-par kyu akshara...?
ak-aapko abhi tak pata nahi chala ki mujhe dikhai nahi deta...i am blind...
naitik's eye filled with tears...
nk-i am sorry ! par mujhe sach me ye pata nahi tha...
ak-ab toh pata chal gaya naa
nk-haa...i mean mai
ak-its ok naitik ji...mere saath hamesha aise hi hua hai...jab bhi koi ladka mujhe dekhne aaya w hamesha mera mazak banakar chala gaya...
nk-par mai aisa nahi hu akshara...mai toh aapse pehle hi din se pyaar karne laga
ak-aur ab?
nk-ab toh aur zyada karne laga...i love u
ak-...
nk-aur aap...
ak-mai iska jawab tabhi de sakti hu...jab mai apni inhi aankho se dekhne lagoongi...tab tak shayad aapko...
nk-mai wait karoonga...
ak-par ye wait bahut lamba bhi ho sakta hai...
nk-mujhe fark nahi padta...
ak-thanks...accha mujhe ab jana hoga...meri friend aati hi hogi...
nk-mai aapko drop kar du...
ak-ji...
naitik holds her hand n drop her near her house...
ak-mai aapka ye gift tab hi padhoongi jab mai aapse doobara milungi...
nk-mai bhi uss waqt ka intezaar karoonga...
naitik was about to go when akshara gave her gift to him...
ak-ye aapke liye
nk-thanks...ab ye gift bhi mai tabhi kholunga jab aap mujhse apne pyaar ka izhaar karenge...
both simle n went to their respective place

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago