RagNa OS: gadi bula rahi hai city baja rahi hai part 7 last part(23)

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Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Lovely update
I love the happy ending

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farhana04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Thank you for giving us such a beautiful story

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-Maggi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

😆 mujhe phle he pata chalgaya 😛

nice story swara and the songs u included init made it all more beautiful 👏

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Arpita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Finally read it :))

Fabulous ss... Was laughing while reading almost all updates.. !!

The " Sun su my first gf " thing reminded me of the marathi movie pune-mumbai-pune.. But yeah the movie wasn't as hilarious as this story..

Loved the way Rags sang the songs then they have a kind-of jugalbandi.. Great song selections.. Old songs never lise their charm.. 😃

Also loved the fight, the confession and specially Raghav's line at the end.. " Raghav se karo gorilla se karo ya monkey se karo karni to mujhasehi na"

... Great one!!

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premap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Fab! The bit of the story which was written in English was simply great. Imagine, if only I could understand Hindi , Would have enjoyed tremendously ! The last chap was fantastic.