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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

interesting update! Maan loves Sam???

Yes he does😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: punam2712

maan in love with sameera - not believable

U don't believe me wait making u believe will be my only aim from now on😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: spoorthi28



Yaar missing you. ..
Hope you get some free time soon😔

Thanks for reading!



will try to b n touch 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: diyadecember



will try to b n touch 😊

😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks aparna😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part #1



Khurana mansion which proudly stood in the heart of the city admist acres of land widely spread n well maintained gardens surrounding it was where he lived..

Losning his tie...worn out n tired he stepped in to his house lossing in his mission find sameera kapoor another time only to face his over dramatic family

I tell u they very conveniently decided on my wedding. .. here I was about to share my feelings n doubts with my brother n dadi but look at them. ..

They totally look like clowns!

Removing the decorations n ribbons from Dadi's hair n vickeys hands he gave them a pointed look demanding answers. ..

But my master mind dadi quickly escaped the interrogation making an excuse of her falling health n being tired!

This is my family they were all planned for my outburst I guess that the reason of the deserted house with in next half an hour!

Sighing deeply he had a relaxing bath n settled himself near the pool side to get some peace n get lost in his dream world with his love!

How beautiful the night would be when sameera would be by his side sharing his stress n not to forget giving him competition in attitude!

Looking at his ringing phone with irritation he picked in up thinking it must be something important!

Maan where are u son?

At the poolside dad... are u home dad?

No beta just do one thing go to my study... n don't cut the call...

Ok dad I'm in the study tell me what is it do u need any file?

No maan open the draw to the left side of the table. ..

Hmm

Did you find a white envelope in it..

Yes dad.. Should I send it to u with driver...

No maan now carefully lock the draw n close the door of my study please u always forget!

Dad!

Ok now that envelope contains a pic of the girl u r going to marry n on the back of it are her details... got to go son the clients are here...

N the line went dead... he just kept gaping at the now beeping phone in his hands n the envelope in the other with mouth wide open!

Oh god now how will I solve this issue...
Walking to the kitchen he grabbed a bottle of chilled water n stared at it as if that poor bottle was the source of all his miseries

Emptying a bottle on his head he tried to calm himself

Maan its just the pic just look at it n reject her big deal...

Ok taking a deep breath he opened the envelope to look at the photo which had all the deatils her

Name:Geet
Age:23
Height:5.3
Education: Graduate
Ph.no:52462578847

Turning the the pic to see her face he couldn't believe what he was seeing!

All his calmness vanished in thin air!

What does she think of herself ... n how dare she ?

What's her name yes Geet that silly low class girl what does she take khuranas to...

Let all of them come back home I'll make sure u pay for messing with me Miss.Geet!

He was fuming with anger gushing through his vains this time even the bottle of cool water won't work I suppose. ..

Geet beta tu tho gai!😆



To be continued. ...



Hay yaar people

the length of updates in this story will be short actually too short😳

Don't crib please. .. will try to pull it n streach it from the next part
Wo kya hai na I'm typing this in my free time at work so😃

Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
me first..😃
Now you slightly confused me.. Check your PM you will know why!!😉
So akhir Maan ko Geet ka rishta aa hi gaya and he is soo rude yaar!!!😲
seems like he is totally in love with sameera!!😲
Waant to know about next..
Update soon..

Edited by kkmouli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fab update! well written! Maan in love with Sam! his dad has chosen Geet 4 him! Maan livid! seems like he knows Geet! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Her Incomplete Story -- A Tempting Scotch Bottle..A Word Called Love..😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Her Incomplete Story -- A Tempting Scotch Bottle..A Word Called Love..😉


😆

I don't have anything say on that😛

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