Zaya TS: irresistible breeze chapter 2' page no. 5, 25 th may

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Holaa buddies, remember me??😳 This is a short story , it serves no purpose, but I wanted to pen this from months, this is based on my most favourite episode in BI. Dedicated to all Zain Abdhullah fans.

Sim this is specially for u buddy, I know I'm not upto u in describing Zain, but I tried😆

Imp, I need a help, see for it in the end of update

Chapter 1
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I stride on the meadows to reach lake visible, located a few hundred feet away from me. Chilling breezes are blowing gently flushing my skin to pink.


Morning Rays of sun are piercing fog shroud to greet living beings in lake. Sun kissed lake turns to transparent showing depth of it near shore. I smile looking at gleamed feet of mine in transparent water.


Finally I am here, in London , to pursue my studies. It's my dream come true, I still can't believe dad accepted for my studies here, now I have a complete freedom of 2 years. I grin at the thought of it.


I should make a mental note , I should not allow these European guys to flutter my heart, I have a thing for their blue, green, and grey eyes. It's my 7 th day here, I was already caught by couple of European guys when I was staring at them, I was totally embarrassed . They were not whom I want and I'm pretty sure none here can make my heart race.


It's just 7 th day of my college and I'm already in a mood to bunk class. Debating with me I stand still thinking what can entertain me other than class. I here sounds of people from somewhere around me. I glance around to point source of sound . I didn't notice earlier marriage arrangements are going . Crowd is gathered and even bride and bride groom are already here.


I never saw a Christian marriage earlier and this looks absolutely beautiful here under open sky with beautifully ornamented flowers. I have an urge to join them but I'm uninvited.


Marriage is going on , I could see far images of them, bride and groom standing beside each other. It might end soon ,after all they are not Indian marriages.

Should I go? Will they kick me?? No I don't think so , none will mind my presence . Couple would be busy admiring each other. I decide to go.


Suddenly gentle wind turned wild swaying my hair around me, my ears blaring with approaching noise of a chopper. I hear familiar decibels of a man, could not recognize which language as it was juggled with noise chopper is making .

I glance up to see man, he is all ready to jump from chopper, standing on footboard holding rods on either side tightly. I open my mouth in astonishment.

Is this an adventurous spot ?? Will he do bungy jump ?? can he??

He jump into lake gracefully outstretching his arms , I could see no ounce of fear in his total body though he is in air, gravitating to lake. He fall into lake spluttering water over me.

I still doubt, can this man stand up? Are all his bones in okay condition? Shall I go and help him??


Fixing a faucet to my flooding doubts, he raise up brushing back his dripped hair, his white wet shirt is revealing his broad chest, he still has a smug smile ,which skip my heart a beat. I gasp for air, he is walking out as gracefully as he landed into lake.

He never once glance towards me, but my gaze is fixed ,totally lingering on him to capture his every move.


He has a dark brown eyes, dark so dark, I cannot help myself , I'm drowning in them not finding a way out. All those green, blue and grey eyes I fantasised faded away. His perfect bushy brows making me envy of them.


Mental note of letting anyone to flutter my heart, trodden with every step of him away from me. My heart drifts in the direction of his way. I'm blown , fully blown by this fresh ,enticing breeze, walking Infront of me. I follow this irresistible charmer .

He enter into crowd and I now notice everyone's gaze is fixed on him in amusement. I silently slid into crowd and continue staring him.

Is he best friend of couple?

" I have a problem with marriage," he says , " I have a problem"

I'm deflated, out of excitement, hearing him, my swollen heart shrink in disappointment.

Is he lover of girl??

No no , he might be her brother, I cajoled my heart, still I glance at bride feeling insecure.
She is not beautiful, she might not be his choice. I am still trying to be an optimist.


" these many promises, all our words !! " he pause, now I am sure they both loved each other, it seems girl cheated on him, she might be fool for loosing him, whatever I still have chance , I smile , praying God for best.

" how can u cheat on me, ?" He continues, " did u forget all our plans."

Groom looks at girl suspiciously

" what are you looking at him, I don't know him, I swear, I swear" she says in trembling voice.

" oh my darling , how can u forget me? " he says catching grooms hand.

I am still confused of what's happening, girl took one back step away from groom in
Bafflement. Crowd is shocked and they start whispering.


I shove my mouth with palms as realisation hit me. Remaining argument went like blurry, my shocked state didn't let me listen what's happening .


I see evidence he brought to show everyone , it's a poster of him with groom, my irresistible breeze kissing on his cheek, I close my eyes feeling stab hit to my deflated heart.


Girl threw bouquet on grooms face and ran away from there. My irresistible breeze encircles his arm around groom with a mischievous grin and drag him to a side. I hear groom calling him Zain.


So , my irresistible breeze name is Zain. I glance around crowd is dispersing slowly. I'm still in shock. My Heart never bounced for anyone till today . First time it did ,and to my dismay it's for a Gay. I once again glance back to him, he is happy patting his partners shoulder, smiling conspiratorially.

I still can't believe , this Indian guy is a Gay. I shut my eyes tightly allowing truth to sink in. After few moments, I walk away not casting another glimpse of him.


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Class was boring, as soon as clock striked time, I walked out simply ignoring my new friend . Ayat took leave , I pray she should not get disheartened like me . I wish that day turn into a dream. It's been 4 days and I am still not out of it.

I that little time before I know his truth, I built fantasies which are now looks like fragmented rubble.

May be another week, may be I need another week to get rid of him.

" Aliya " I hear some one calling me, I turn around to see him.

It's Zubair, my new Indian friend coming with Faith, white blonde.

I stand up , clinging bag to my shoulder, and I flash a smile .

" why didn't you wait for us??," faith asks, " anything wrong? "

I widen my smile hiding stupid reason behind my disappointment.

" I am absolutely fine ," I say, assuring them.

" okay , Chalo Aloo, faith promised us to make us meet few more Indian students right " Zubair says in excitement.


" oh yes, I forgot, come let's move , we should go out too, to do leftover shopping " I say to both of them.


They both walk ahead me, I follow them messaging Ayat. I need to find out where she is, should inform her to be here in an hour at least so that we can go out together.

I bump into some one hitting reply to Ayat. I shut my eyes in fear, I'm not floor, seems that some one caught me. I open an eye to see who it was, hoping it's a girl, but I'm in arms of one who has most captivating eyes. He raise a brow passing a smirk, I could see myself looking as a fool at him in his so dark brown eyes.


I shrug myself giving an irritated look and got free from his hold. He raise his both brows seeing my expression. This ridiculous, how can this man be so beautiful of whatever he does and how come this man have this effect on my heart, it's been hijacked since 4 days in his memories and again he is Infront of me.


He can drift my heart again , he is an irresistible breeze , and I will hold my heart tightly, will not let it drift.


End of update


I know , all are ready with sandals😆, running, pls dnt forget to leave feedback,mid any of u liked it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
And as always bueatifully written
Thanks
Kunika
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Originally posted by: Aarohi2009

Nice start
Continue soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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[QUOTE=zayahangover]Nice start
And as always bueatifully written
Thanks
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Thank u so much Kanika, for lovely comment]
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start... Do continue soon..
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Nice strt
Do continue soon
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Madhu... this was one brilliant piece of chudail giri. ...lol
first she found him attractive and then irritated...buahahahhaa
she thought he is a gay...rolf.
continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: HarshikaAnuraj

Great start... Do continue soon..

Hehehe thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: butterfly20

Madhu... this was one brilliant piece of chudail giri. ...lol

first she found him attractive and then irritated...buahahahhaa
she thought he is a gay...rolf.
continue soon.

thank u chudail, Yesh she is thinking him as gay😆
Thank u so much for lovely comment darling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start
Can't wait to read more.

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