The Day Before My Marriage (SWOT Analysis)

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

BM!

Lovely stuff :D

Thanks for updating it so promptly and on schedule as promised..

The usage of the photos from the show was an added bonus <3

Poor N.. just could not hold it in any longer :(

big hug to both of them!

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

BlueMoon! Heyy! :D
So the confession is up ahaan ;)
One thing caught my mind, unn teeno ka palak paneer paneer kofta and matar paneer! Suhaani ka shahi mushroom!
Dikha diya na farak paraaye aur apne mein hahahaha
Loved how ragini blasted at him, relatable to her character much then the conversation followed by those amazing caps was wow!
Yar itna bada kaise likh lete ho :/ Talent hai yeh bhi.
Both of them suffered equally, just that ragini got to share his feelings with her mom but nachiket always kept it all inside. Though he deserves a slap in the show right now bt loll here he has realized it for the better :)
Thankyou for the pm!
Waiting for more :)

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BlueMoon8

@BlueMoon8

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
BlueMoon! Heyy! :D
So the confession is up ahaan ;)
One thing caught my mind, unn teeno ka palak paneer paneer kofta and matar paneer! Suhaani ka shahi mushroom!
Dikha diya na farak paraaye aur apne mein hahahaha
Loved how ragini blasted at him, relatable to her character much then the conversation followed by those amazing caps was wow!
Yar itna bada kaise likh lete ho :/ Talent hai yeh bhi.
Both of them suffered equally, just that ragini got to share his feelings with her mom but nachiket always kept it all inside. Though he deserves a slap in the show right now bt loll here he has realized it for the better :)
Thankyou for the pm!
Waiting for more :)

Seriously ! Believe me it was unintentional ! I'm a Vegetarian .. So could get only some Vegetarian recipes ! Even I never thought about why Suhani should like Mushroom whereas others are fond of Cheese ! Whatever came up to my mind while writing that was it .. 😊

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abcd89

@abcd89

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

i am on top of the world reading u r part of story tear come out very nice stroy👏👏

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Blue_Moon824

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Seriously ! Believe me it was unintentional ! I'm a Vegetarian .. So could get only some Vegetarian recipes ! Even I never thought about why Suhani should like Mushroom whereas others are fond of Cheese ! Whatever came up to my mind while writing that was it ..😊</font>

Relax! That was just a joke! Don't take it on heart! I forgot to write just kidding :S

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BlueMoon8

@BlueMoon8

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Relax! That was just a joke! Don't take it on heart! I forgot to write just kidding :S

Frankly, I never took it otherwise !! :)

Even if you had meant it seriously .. What's wrong in it, friend ?

😊

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@metoyou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

This was very good BM! Very very nice! So emotional toward the end and the way they finally said those 3 words to each other...

Well done! Keep it up 👍🏼😊

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BlueMoon8

@BlueMoon8

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

SWOT Analysis 😆

Part 1 - The Day Before My Marriage

The dialogues in the last part were too filmy.. Could have been better.. Some hit the bull's eye .. happened in the Show also..

* Ragini convincing Nachiket for the Roka/Engagement

* Nachiket comes to know about the fake marriage from Suhani (and Agham)

Part 2 - The Realisation

Was an emotional part .. mainly featuring Ragini and Suhani-Agham.. and for the first time Dr Nachiket Khanna, gives in to thinking about his mistakes (a rare thing .. may never happen in the Show)

Part 3 - The Confession

Most difficult part to write .. too emotional .. Could have been much better.. But that's all I could manage ..

Edited by BlueMoon8 - 10 years ago