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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare

Wooow that was wonderful second meet was even more interesting


Thanks a lot

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping

Oh my goodness! Thanks for the PM OSJ! Otherwise I would have missed out on this brilliant piece of fiction! Loved every bit of it! Brought back the old YHM! Oh what a rush! Eagerly awaiting the new update! Love, an old fan!


Wow I am so pleased to see u here! Thought u left the forum.
Thank u so much😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

This is lovely..the way you are mixing the past and present is wonderful , looks like both of them are in a little bit of denial... can't wait to see what comes of this...


Love is crazy and very complicated at times. 😳 N IshRa r themselves such complex characters.
Thanks for reading dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello everyone
I am back with another update. I am so slow in updating that I feel a recap is important for those who have forgotten where the story ended.😳😆
Recap:
Raman and Ishita mat after six whole months and ended kissing each other passionately. Both are very vulnerable and confused and there they go down the memory lane: their first encounter with Raman as a patient and later he came to meet her. Intrigued by the uptight dentist he proposed a coffee date which Ishita finally accepted.
So let's see how was the coffee date.

Note: this story has a mixture of the past and present so all confused souls please bear with me! 😳 Don't forget to hit the LIKE if you like and leave a comment too. If the response is not too favorable, the next update will be for next month. 😈
If I am happy then Ruhi promise an update will be on Thursday😃
Cheers
OSJ/omshreejaanu

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Chapter 5:

"I like my coffee how I like myself: dark, bitter and too hot for you"

Ishita had no idea how she had managed to climb the stairs to reach her house when she knew that his gaze was fixed on her as she had walked away from his car. She was trembling inside and her legs were threatening to let her go.
Half an hour later, standing in her dimly lit room, Ishita's thoughts were still jumbled with her heart beating wildly. She lifted her fingers to her damp lips.
Did he just...
She shook her head in disbelief. What was that? Why did he...?
She could still feel his hard grips on her arms, his fingers digging into her flesh, the anger and passion of the kiss sending powerful tremors through her limbs. Ishita had to sit down to relieve her wobbling knees. Her eyes stinging with hot tears, Ishita closed her eyes in frustrations. The man was always a complicated case. He had always irked her with his arrogant attitude and then would left her all confused with his unpredictability.
How could she ever forget their first coffee date? Sitting near the window sill so that she could breathe in some fresh air, she again went down the memory lane unaware that some miles away, in a pub, the man occupying her thoughts, was also doing the same.

***
When Ishita reached Cafe Lovers ten minutes earlier, she immediately booked a table and sat there tensely. She realized that accepting to have coffee with Raman Bhalla was not really a great idea. His way of saying thank you! He had said. What would she talk about with him? Ishita wondered. The man made her nervous and very conscious.
One glance at her watch and her anticipation grew. She ran her fingers over her locks and moisten her lips. It was almost 3 p.m and he would be there anytime.
It was half past three and Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla never turned up. The unchivalrous man!


The next day when she reached the clinic early for some paperwork, she was surprised to see him waiting for her with a big paper bag in his hands.
- Good morning Ishita.
- It is Miss Iyer for you, Mr Bhalla.
- Miss Iyer sounds like one of those irritating spinsters! I prefer Ishita. You can call me Raman.

Very funny! Ishita muttered under her breath. The man was unbelievably annoying and too smart with words. He always managed to get her tongue-tied. She would have to get lessons from her sister on how to deal with men like him. Mihika was far more adept when it came to the fine art of social interaction and savoir-faire. Staring and stammering definitely weren't top of the league when it came to masterful social interaction. She would rather prefer not to argue but to mean business with him.

- Why are you here?
- We missed our coffee rendez- vous and...
- YOU missed it not me!
- I am really sorry. An important meeting cropped up and I didn't have your mobile number to contact you. I asked my secretary to contact the clinic but your secretary never picked up and...
- It's ok. A thank you is enough and... accepted.
- No it's not ok and a thank you is not enough. I am here with the morning coffee...

Ishita stared at the man in front of her. He was really unpredictable! If she hadn't had that first encounter with him, she would say, he was adorable but she knew better.
Instead she mumbled, "I...I really can't. I have an important appointment...
" In an hour", Raman completed her sentence.
Their eyes clashed. "My time is precious Mr Bhalla. I have some important paper work to complete." She replied back stubbornly.
"Come on! I won't take more than fifteen minutes and I am reassuring you again. I am harmlesss."
This brought a curl of amusement to Ishita's lips and finally she accepted.
That's how they ended having their first date, in her cabin, among dentistry tools and prescriptions and files. Ishita found herself enjoying the coffee and croissants in his company. It was only when he stood up to leave that she realized the time. She walked to the door with him with a small smile. Forwarding a hand towards her, Raman said, "Thank you for spending thirty minutes of your precious time with me, Miss Ishita."
The jolt of awareness that shot through her at the slight physical contact brought hectic colour to her cheeks and she sprang back, alarmed.
"Have a good day", he drawled, watching her face and giving her the impression that he was aware of the effect he was having on her. There was a little silence as she raised her eyes reluctantly to his. For some reason her head began to spin and her mouth went dry.
"Thank you for the croissants and coffee," Ishita managed to say.
Raman smiled back, a glint of naughtiness in his eyes.
He was so overpowering with that air of lazy sex appeal which she could glimpse quite easily now that some of his cold arrogance was no longer in evidence.

It is only when he left did she relax. Her heart beats were erratic! Strangely she was feeling truly alive after a long time...like Sleeping Beauty awakened by a magical kiss. Leaning heavily against the door and tapping her forehead, she breathlessly told herself that her younger sister Mihika would die laughing if she could see her right now. She would exclaimed: this is what happened when you spend the entire of your life boringly in a clinic!
Mihika wouldn't be entirely wrong. After her break up with Subbu, Ishita had drowned herself deep neck in her work. It was not that she was depressed but she was not interested in making friends or going out. She was a very practical person in real life and she had understood that, though she was disappointed and hurt, Subbu was not worthy of her time and love. She had left Delhi with a purpose and had promised herself that once she went back, she would make sure that her loving family stopped treating her like breakable China. They would meet the ever loving but a stronger Ishita. She had not turned her back to love and marriage but after what the trials and tribulations she had faced lately, she was more cautious and she had her roots very deep down now.
But little did Ishita know that the storm called Raman Kumar Bhalla who had caught her by surprise was coming into her life to create more upheavals than she ever faced before.

***
Feeling completely drained, Ishita finally succumbed in the arms of Morpheus in the hope that the next morning she would wake up and realized that meeting Raman after six months in Delhi was just a dream.

Raman on the other hand, having drowned all his anger and frustrations, drove back home...the same house which he had run away from in the hope that he would recover from his past.

Little did both of them know that they were destiny's favourite children and it had something very special reserved for both of them. 😳



Precap:
Raman stared at her, fury etched on his face.
"I can't believe this! What an unscrupulous man you are? Not only did you hide your marriage from me...you are also the father of a kid...disgusting!"
He grabbed her arms, his grip anything but gentle. Pulling her towards her, he yelled, "Stop overdramatizing, will you woman! You keep jumping to conclusions without giving me a chance to explain. I am not going to put up with your nonsense any more. You understand!"

Ishita struggled to free her arm but in vain. Angry she raised her other hand in an attempt to slap him but...
Clutching her wrist, he seethed, " don't you dare Ishita!" Bending her arms behind her back, he leaned so close that his chest brushed against hers.
"You better keep quiet and listen to me or else...I know very well how to shut you up."
Edited by omshreejaanu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all parts in one go
Awesome story...beautifully written
Eagerly waiting to know the flashback

But Where is the update????
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 5 is posted! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Done 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pari...

Read all parts in one go

Awesome story...beautifully written
Eagerly waiting to know the flashback

But Where is the update????


Thank u Pari
Waiting for ur feedback on chapter 5
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
mere 2 chap pending pade hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Osj..lovely update
making her wait n then coffee date in her clinic😳
So they brokeup becoz he hide abt his marriage n kid???
thnx for the pm dear
Waiting for the next update

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