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interesting teaser ...
What went wrong...
Why is she so broken..
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Bhai. Priya jumped showing her excitement hugging Ranbir as if she had not seen him for ages. How are you? Gosh I did not even think you would be coming here Bhai. Ranbir held her lightly but his eyes focused on the figure that stood far away from him. It must be.. gosh how could you just step in here Bhai.. Aapne yaha sab kuch..

I have moved on in my life Priya. He parted her forcing her to stand a bit away from him. And past does not affect me anymore. Priya smiled sadly trying her best to be patient. And I don't care where m I unless and until I myself get affected.

I love tat attitude of yours bhai. She once again squealed in fake happiness. And tats wat makes you my super hero. Ranbir smiled at her. And I'm very much happy tat you are here.. gosh its been ages since we all are here for some happy moments.. right guys.

Yes. Everyone screamed together in happiness and one by one came and hugged Ranbir who smiled at them. And we are going to rock your birthday bhai. One of the cousins said with double excitement. Ish baar tho Geet bhi hain humare saath.. so you see its like.. omg the old gold days back in our life. Geet silently cried hearing it. She wanted to run away but then it would be an insult to do so, so she just stood far away and watched everyone meet and hug her Bir bhai.

Bhai. Pooja took a small step and hugged him. M happy tat you came. He smiled patting her head. And I wish tat this birthday gets back everything you lost.

Everything I lost. He repeated as if he was mocking himself. It can never be the same Pooja. She looked up at his face after putting some distance. Jo kho juka hain woh wapas kabhi nahi aa saktha.

But if we try we can get it back Bhai. Ranbir smiled sadly touching her left cheek. He loved Pooja coz she was well matured for her age and knew more then wat she learnt in her life. Agar aap koshish kare tho. He just stared at her while she tried to read something in his eyes. She always felt tat he just did not lose the most precious relation in his life but much more then wat he showed and it scared her at times. Anyways lets forget tat... Aap yaha aaye tats important for me... saalo baad hum sab ek saath hain. He just shook his head agreeing to her and they both made their way only to stop exactly where Geet stood watching him smiling.

You look handsome Bhai. Pooja giggled hearing Geet compliment Ranbir coz it was one thing tat she never did when they were kids. She always refused complimenting Ranbir on his looks even if she was asked too. I really mean it.. aap bahut handsome lag rahe ho.

Di... aap kabse.. I mean you never ever said anything like this before... phir aaj achanak se. Pooja asked with a smile. Are you trying to flatter Bhai but suddenly the light atmosphere turned serious with Ranbir's harsh words tat would kill anyone who was already hurt and leaving on a edge.

Don't you ever think tat I'm here for tat stupid birthday of mine Ms. Handa. Geet did not say a word. She knew a word from her and Ranbir would spit more venom and she would not take it anymore. It's just tat Darji forced me and..

And you can't deny him. Maan pulled Geet closer completing Ranbir's sentence walking into the sibling's time. And I appreciate it Mr. Handa but he smirked giving a sharp look to Ranbir why do I feel tat there's no Darji in the scene here?

Wat do you mean Maan? Maan gave out a small hysteric laugh. Are you trying to deny my words.. tat I'm here coz of Darji.

Did I say it Ranbir? Maan widened his eyes making Ranbir confused. Ohh god save me... I'm getting forgetful now. Shit Geet you better don't get married to me baby.

Stop your shit drama Khuranna. Ranbir hissed in anger. And dare you..

Tats wat I plan to do Ranbir Handa. Ranbir narrowed his eyes at Maan. Putting an end to the drama tat you have been living with and trust me you..

Maan.. Geet cut Maan before he could speak more. Don't..

Come on Geet... your Bir bhai isn't so smart in lying?

Coz you are the king of liars Khuranna. Ranbir shot back shutting Maan with his comment. You see he eyed both Maan and Geet a well played game and poor your families... I wonder wat will happen when they get to know wat a double standard game you both played to get married.

Don't you dare go there Ranbir Handa. Maan was infuriated and his eyes filled with fury wanting to kill Ranbir right there. Don't you dare go there or else I will forget who the bloody hell you are.

Geet tried to calm Maan down but it was impossible when someone pointed at his love, the love tat he worshipped and anyone insulting it, he would be just wild like fire.

Tumari tarah kamina nahi hoon main Ranbir.. sach jaane bina kisiko saaza du.. and you bloody talk about lying. He growled back in anger. At least we lied but we did not kill anyone with it.. but can you say it about yourself Ranbir Handa..

Maan aap..

Shut up. He hissed at Geet and it was enough for her to know tat he was out of control. And stop taking sided of this bloody Handa Geet.. maar diya hain ushne tumne. Do you get.. he bloody killed you without any mistake of yours. A bloody sick brother who punished you for no mistake of yours.

Enough Maan.. tats enough for the day. Geet goaded in anger. And don't you dare forget tat he's my brother.

Yes your Brother.. then who the hell I'm Geet Handa. Who the hell is he to insult my love like tat? Geet felt an instant stab hearing him. Mana ki humne sach chupaya hain but did we kill anyone.. did we hurt anyone.. aur agar itna hi gusaa aur nafrat hain tho ask your Bir bhai to go and tell our families.. ask him to tell them the truth about us.. can you do it Ranbir Handa..

I did not mean like tat Maan.. tum bekaar ka gussa kar rahe ho. Maan laughed like a manic scaring Geet. I just did not mean..

Do you even know wats love Ranbir Handa... jaanthe bhi ho ki pyar kya hota hain. Ranbir turned pale with his words but none noticed it. Agar jaanthe tho kabhi kehte nahi.. I have lived in fear every moment whenever I got to know tat your damn family was planning to get my Jaan married... so nahi pata tha do you hear me.. zindagi cheen jaane ke darr se and you dare insult my love..

I'm sorry. Ranbir apologized. I seriously did not mean to insult and hurt you. I know how much you love her. He eyed Geet and m happy for you Maan and trust me if I wanted to ruin your love I would have done the same day when she came and told me the truth.. but I'm not a heartless person.. pyar samajtha hoon main and seeing you both in love... I can only pray for your happiness Maan.. He did not say anything more and just walked away but stopped after taking few steps. I will kill anyone who tries to part you both Maan.. mana ki main tumare pyar se nafrat karta hoon but I will never ever part you both... Zindagi mein pyar sabke naseeb mein nahi hota hain Maan and even if my hatred for your Jaan is more I will protect your love like anything and he just walked away leaving a tearful Geet and shocked Maan.

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I'm sorry. Geet smiled realizing her Maan sensed her behind him. I shouldn't have reacted like tat. I'm really sorry Jaan.


It's ok baby. She wrapped her hands around his neck and rested her chin on his head. Your anger was quite justified Maan but thoda jyada tha.

Tha na. He asked reaching for her hands. Even I thought. Geet giggled at his words. At times he spoke such words tat she would get confused to understand him. I think I should go for anger management classes.. hain na.

Are you sure you will attend them. Maan pulled her in front and made her to sit on his lap. Bolo are you sure about it?

And are you sure tat I get angry for unnecessary things? She nodded with a smirk only to get a glare from him. Ab gussa kyu ho.. you questioned and I answered.

Seriously Jaan. Geet still continued nodding her head. You must say tat nahi Maan aap gussa nahi karte ho.. aap bilkul shant ho.. samundar ki tarah.

But samundar ki shaanti bahut khatranak hoti hain na baby. She asked with so much of innocence tat for once Maan thought she was really tat innocent but then seeing her smiling evilly he narrowed his sharp eyes at her. Hoti hain na Maan.. I heard tat it brings tsunami?

You little witch. She laughed as he grabbed her hair. Trying to over smart me haan.. but not.

Aaahh Maan. She cried faking pain and Maan instantly loosened his grip. Dard ho raha hain Maan. Aahhh..

I'm sorry.. sorry Jaan.. woh.. you stupid girl. He growled as she quickly jumped out of his lap and stood a distance away teasing him. Aaj tum. I swear I will not leave you Jaan.. you fooled me...

When you are a fool why do I need to fool you more Khuranna? Maan grit his teeth but there was happiness in it. He had not seen Geet so open from last few days and he promised himself tat he would keep her like this forever. Wat will the world say Maan.. MSK a fool.. omg.. tats a breaking news.. aaahhh leave me.. Maan leave me. She struggled as Maan lunged for her in a swift move and grabbed her by her arm. Maan.. chodo mujhe Maan...

Chodh du kya. She shook her head slightly. Sachi kya chodh du bolo.

Please and he left her only to push her on the wall behind and trap her from all sides. Maan..yeh.. wat are you doing?

Leaving you. He smirked closing the distance between their mouths. But in my way and her words were swallowed by his hungry mouth as he kissed her hard not leaving any chance for her to stay still. His kiss demanded her reaction and soon she was equally wild with him and the punishable kiss turned into a long passionate kiss with their hands playing their own game of pleasure wanting to feel more of each other.

Get a room guys. Mona stopped the moment she saw them but she did not close or avert her eyes. Omg.. get the hell out of the spell you f****** crazy love birds. She yelled seeing no reaction from them but just lost in their kiss forgetting the rest of the world.

Bloody hell.. Mona laughed loud seeing Maan grab his a** and hiss in pain. Shit wat the hell...

Shit isn't hell khuranna. Maan's eyes wide as he realized wat hit him.

You cheapster.. how dare you kick me haan?

There's no word called as cheapster in English Maan? Mona smirked at his wide eyes.

Whatever but why the hell did you kick me? He asked growling in anger still soothing his bum cheeks. Stupid girl its hell paining now.

You deserve it. Mona smiled taking a seat and then narrowed her eyes at Geet who was still lost in the kiss. And you Miss. Handa.. isn't your Brother Ranbir Handa in here or did he leave the next moment he arrived.

Wat.. Bir bhai left.. why did no one inform me.. when did he leave.

Relax Geet. Mona tried to calm down Geet. And don't get so hyper.. warna kiss ka asar khatam ho jaayega.

But you said..

I asked.. I did not say it. Mona smirked seeing Geet in confusion. Oh my dear.. I hope you are not so dumb the way you show.

Mona...

Ok ok. Mona gave up. I asked coz I saw you both crazy love birds kissing here all lost and you see I just wondered did tat Hitler brother of yours leave tat you are romancing.. na na not romancing making out with your fianc in open. Geet blushed at her words. Oh don't you blush.. abhi tho maine kuch kaha hi nahi.. but anyways why don't you go and see wat tat Hitler bother of yours is doing.

And you idiot messed our romance for tat stupid Ranbir Handa. Geet glared at Maan and Mona she just laughed seeing his expressions. You irritating snob... I swear I will..

Forget it Maan. She narrowed her eyes trying to warn and signal him tat it was important tat Geet leaves the place. I just wanted to inform Geet tat her so called clan is enjoying along with your two sibling's and you have missed a important call from KC.

Call from KC... Are you trying to bully me Mona.. or is it.. he could not even complete his sentence as he saw Mona squint her eyes in anger at him and grit her teeth which was enough for him to know tat she was serious and she needed him alone. Shit.. how could I forget it.. yaar yaad hi nahi raha ki I was supposed to call at office for some urgent work.

Hmm tats better.. ab yaad aaya. Maan nodded and Geet just looked at them. Jaan I will...

Are you sure tats the case Maan. Geet asked in doubt. Why do I feel there's something big tat you are hiding from me?

Big and hiding. Maan tried to act normal. Jaan I don't have my phone here and it's a truth tat I had to call KC for some work. You remember na I'm trying to take over the Mehta's since they are running into loss. Geet shook her head. They too were trying for it but then she rejected the idea coz the Mehta's condition was far worst and she even suggested Maan to back out but then he loved challenges and he went for it. You go and enjoy with your clan and I will just finish up with the call and then join you ok. She smiled though still not sure about wat he said.

Maan how are you going to get Priya confess the truth? The out of blue question shocked Maan. He just stared at her not knowing wat to say and how to react. You remember you promised me tat this birthday I will get my Bir Bhai.

I do Jaan.. he tried his best to hide his nervousness. And m working towards it.. you just don't worry ok.. just enjoy every bit of this trip and leave the rest on me. She narrowed her eyes at him for a moment but then she trusted him with closed eyes and giving him a last quick peck she walked away to join her cousins.

Priya has laid down her big evil plan Maan and trust me she the biggest black witch I have ever known. Maan tightened his fist. He had asked Mona to keep close eye on Priya not trusting her.

Wat did you get to know? Wat is she up to now? And his body boiled at he heard wat Mona had learnt. He wanted to kill the bitch but it wasn't the time as they had yet to get the truth out of Mona and they had to wait for it.

Let her go with the plan Mona and you know wat you have to do right? Mona smirked evilly. If Priya was the black evil witch then she was the blackest evil witch when it comes to safeguard her loved ones and Maan and Geet were family and Priya was her enemy now. Just make sure she does not get a hint on wats going on with her ok.

Don't you worry James Bond.. ab tho Priya Ranawat ki band baja baraat paaki hain. Mona smiled devilishly and laughed out loud imagining about Priya's horror stuck face when she would face the cruel reality of her cruel evil plan.

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Wat? Geet giggled while Pooja narrowed her eyes watching her Ranbir Bhai glaring at Annie who looked like a scared mouse right now. Will you damn open your mouth? He yelled scaring the others who surrounded them. They had been playing a game when Ranbir suddenly jumped into it scaring Annie who had been laughing at some joke. Damn you Anwesha...

Annie... my.. name.. Annie...not Anwes..ha. Ranbir looked shocked and eyes wide trying to read her lips. No..

Did you say something? He asked gritting his teeth. He had wanted to enjoy with his clan for some time and here this Khuranna species was hell bent on irritating him for no reason. Will you damn say something or not?

You.. scared me... you.. I laugh and you..

Don't you have a proper voice tats audible to others? Everyone laughed and so did Ranbir seeing Annie's facial expressions. Or is it tat you are so dumb tat speaking takes much longer than normal person.

Nahi Bhai. One of his cousins came forward. She does have a good tongue only tat she is very much mute at the moment... shayad aapko dekhe darr gayi.

I not darr gayi ok. And the whole hall burst into another big laughter hearing her words tat were mixture of English and Hindi and Annie purred in anger like a cat. She narrowed her eyes at Ranbir and thud, the whole hall turned silent as the brand new phone tat belonged to Ranbir Handa was smashed into pieces.

See I had said na.. I would break it.. so maine kar diya break. Annie giggled like a kid unknown tat the tiger was all building his fury ready to pounce on her. And Annie no scared of you Ok... She is Khuranna and Khuranna no getting scared of any Handa... Ranbir Handa.

Oye shreni kya baat hain. Pooja came from behind patting Annie's back and smirking at Ranbir. Tumne tho sher ko maat di.. wah.. ab tu hain Annie Khuranna.. kyu Bhai..

You.. how dare you break my phone.. how the hell...

No swearing ok. Annie cut Ranbir in between. Dadima says its bad and you are my bhabhi's brother so please don't use bad words coz I don't like it. Ranbir glared. He wanted to wriggle her neck for irritating her. And you deserve this.. I was laughing and you scared me by coming and sitting next to me.. don't you know Annie gets scared easily.

You spoilt..

Bhai.. Geet stepped forward before Ranbir could say and do something tat Maan would not like. She knew Maan was very much possessive of his baby sister. Just please..

Wat please haan. This bloody girl she broke my phone and you are saying please. Wat does she think she is?

Annie Singh Khuranna. Ranbir closed his eyes to control his anger. And I said na don't you shout and use bad words. Aapka birthday hain na kal so you need to be very happy and calm warna birthday spoil hojayega.. and as far as your phone I will ask Maan Bhai to gift you one on your birthday but if you shout or yell at me next time I will break it again... Just like Pooja and Geet Bhabhi said.

Wat.. who said? Ranbir asked as if he did not hear wat she said.

Pooja and Geet Bhabhi. They told me tat next time you get angry, I should just grab your phone and break it like this.. see and I did it. Geet and Pooja tried to escape but Ranbir's gaze held them while Annie smiled like a kid and unknown to them Priya was plotting and planning a big move against Geet thinking of destroying her for last time where she would not be able to stand up again by sneaking into Geet's bedroom to set up the trap tat she needed for Geet.

We...I.. mean.. woh humne..

Shut up. Ranbir yelled again and Annie glared at him. How could you both.. shit.. Why the hell did I come here in this circus?

May be you wanted to come Bhai. Ranbir just stared at Pooja. May be somewhere deep you have this feeling tat may be you will see the truth tat I have been trying to tell you. He narrowed his eyes at her. May be somewhere deep you are regretting for not listening to me and now since jiju has put this doubt you are worried sick of being wrong. May be you are scared tat wat if you thinking and wat you say.. haan the truth tat you know isn't the real truth.

There's nothing like tat? He retorted in defense. No one can change the truth.

Then why did you break your promise of not stepping here and not celebrating your birthday with Di Bhai. He just stood rooted not having any answer to Pooja's question. Was your promise so weak tat it broke with the mere declaration from jiju tat you are wrong and he will get the truth out.. boliye... itne kamzor hain kya aap.

Pooja...

Na Di.. aaj tho bolna hoga bhai ko. She shut Geet by raising her hand. Boliye Bhai why did you step your feet inside Geet Villa... boliye... why did not you go and tell the truth to our families after Di's confession. You hate her na then why not ruin her happiness as you have been doing ever since tat dreadful fake truth you started to believe. She waited for answer but Ranbir just stood silent. No answer na...but I have Bhai but trust me I won't say it coz I know you won't believe me...

Poojaaa Vicky grabbed Pooja away from Ranbir while the rest were shocked to hear Pooja. They were confused and did not know wat the hell she was saying. Pagal ho kya.. dhimaag karab hua hain or is it tat you want to ruin our plan for exposing the truth. Pooja just stared at Vicky for few seconds and then the reality hit her. Thank god tat she isn't here warna sab barbaad ho jata.. kabhi tho apne gusse per kabhu rakho.. just see where the hell you are before opening tat big mouth of yours.

Woh.. I.. sorry.. I did not mean.. I was just angry. Vicky just nodded and looked around to make sure Priya wasn't back.

Just make sure you don't open your mouth until we succeed Pooja.. Bro ka plan karab nahi kar sakthe.. we just need to be careful about this trip got it. She nodded and then walked back towards the rest and smiled at them saying tat she had lost her brain and just spoke whatever came in her mind and she herself did not know wat it was while the other side Priya was happy for her first success.

Precap: Aar ya paar...

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Next Update after 240+ likes and 25 pages comments and I know you will give it soon coz the next update is too big Dhamaka update.. No one knows wat will happen as the teaser is quite scary right.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome part but really scared wat will the outcome of the plan hope it doesnt hurt geet as teaser was scary
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's amazing.ranbir entered in geet villa and taking wishing from his all cousins. But geet was standing far away. Again ranbir hurt geet pointed his finger on maneet love.but today maan told him how.pure is their love. He was showing him the mirror. Today maan expressed her all love for geet. Ranbir was started seeing maan's anger so he asked sorry from him. But again his last sentence hurted geet. maneet were lost in their passion but Mona disturbed them. Now maan is going to implement his plan. Puja was going to spill the bean but thankfully Vicky stopped her. I am thinking about the tease you give. Why geet was hurted by maan.he was just trying to bring truth out. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update.but really scared whats going to happen next
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wonderful update😊iss chipkali Priya ka koi murder kyun nahi karta😡good for nothing witch😡keeps faking all the time 😡 i loved the way maan confronted ranbir for questioning his love...geet tried to intervene but knew maan's anger was justified...oh their passionate moment 😳was distributed by mona😛😉 Annie is such an adorable cutie😆😆 ranbir ki kya band bajai ussne😆😃😛 and even told him it was geet and pooja's idea😃 to break his phone if he shouted on her😆pooja was almost about to reveal the truth if vicky wouldn't have stopped her...but this priya is a real witch😡hope her plan flops big time and maaneet don't have any misunderstanding because of her but the teaser and precap are very scary 😲please don't separate maan and geet😭and ranbir should finally know the real truth...eagerly waiting for next update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice part.. ranbir came to party .. that priya was faking drama ..geet was sad standing in some corner watching her bir bhai.. maan and ranbir arguing and maan was angry because of ranbir words..geet calm down his anger..mona interfering their kiss.. that priya planning something evily.. hope she gets failed.. waiting for next.. teaser was scary
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Awesome update... Ranbir came to geet villa as per the plan to celebrate his birthday for his cousins sake...Love the way maan stood for his love when ranbir is insulting it...this was so necessary that some one should stand in front of ranbir to make him speechless by showing what he is ...nobody dare this to him and maan did it... Finally ranbir has to bow his head for maan and geets pure love and he assured he will protect his jaan no matter what making geet overwhelmed with his love and protective nature... Hope maan will expose priyas true face in front of handa family without hurting his jaan in the process... loved monas true freindship and standing beside maan to help him in his mission... luckily vicky was on right time and pulled pooja away from everyone before she blurting the truth with out any proof... loved maneet romantic passionate kiss and poor maan was kicked by mona and got disturbed in his romance...
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lovely part.now what will do geet s bhai?maaneet moment is just wow.mona is true friend.i feel jealous to see maan s love for geet.loved when ranbir said,he alwz help maaneet to keep their relation.inside his mind,he love to see maan s love for geet.lovely update
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Nice part di.. hope ranbir gets to knw the truth.. n priya doesnt succeed in her plan.. that witch.. i hate her.. really scary teaser di.. hope geet doesnt get hurt.. update next part soon di.. waiting

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