I do love you (kash vale AR story) part1 on page 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Intro seems interesting..!!
do continue soon..!!
will be waiting..!!
n do pm me..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thankyou everyone for commentin... M posting its part 1 in sometime...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1

Armaan n ridhima's life was going smooth and their love increased in these two years to the level that now they were inseparable. But like it's always said that there is no true love relationship which have never face or gone through any test which is put on them by destiny. So was their relationship. But destiny was cruel to them as it tested their relationship ones again. And the major question in front of their relationship was. Will they be able to stand strong together?

Present time...

It was their final year as interns and after six months they all would becomes proper doctors. They all were very happy as they all have decided that after their internship ends they will go for a trip to goa.

It was a very fine n gloomy day. A group of college students, medical college students had come for their educational tour to Sanjeevni. It was their break time. All the students were busy in some or the other things. Some were studying. Some were in couples romancing. And some were just littering around. Suddenly the atmosphere of hospital changed. A girl dressed in short belly length top n denim jeans entered the hospital. All boys were gaping at her with their mouths hanging and all girls were jealous of her. And this new girl was walking very confidently and without giving a glance to the drooling boys and their jealous girl friends she walked to the Dr. shashank's office.

She completed all her formalities and was welcomed by the Dr. shashank. he briefed her about the hospital and also told her about the four leading interns of our hospital.

Simran asked him if he could tell him the names of the persons holding these positions she also added it will be a great help for her to get along with the hospital's atmosphere.

Dr. shashank- Oh! Sure. Wait let me call someone who will brief you about their natures and will take you on a tour of hospital too.

After sometime...

Girl- may I come in sir.

Dr. shashank- yes! yes! Come in. naina meet Simran.

Simran this is naina, she will explain you everything.

Naina- yes sir I will surely explain her everything.

Now both of them leave the Dr. shashank's office and on the way to canteen.

While walking in the corridor...

Naina- hi...! I am Naina.

Sa- hi...!

Naina- so which year...?

Si- final year, you??

Naina- same.

While talking they reached canteen and naina asks her.

Naina- coffee??

Si- sure.

Naina goes and bring coffee for both of them.

Naina- here you go... (giving her a coffee mug)

Si- thanxxx... so now tell me about them...

Naina- ya sure.

Naina- so let me start with the intern who ranks 4th in our hospital...

Her name is Muskan Chada. She is the one who is like a diva of hospital, rude and arrogant with those who show her attitude... and extremely sweet with ones those who are close to her... A very awesum doctor... She is the best friend of armaan and ridhima... and girlfriend of rahul...

Next is Rahul... Rahul Grewal. He ranks 3rd in our hospital. A very helpful guy. A very good doctor... He is sweet n simple. Best friend of armaan and ridhima... and most importantly boyfriend of Muskan...

So never ever try to stick with him...

Next comes 2nd position holder of our hospital. Her name is Ridhima Gupta...

She is the most finest and intelligent girl of the hospital... An extremely awesum doctor precisely speaking the best doctor... actually her's and armaan's position keeps on fluctuating between 1st and 2nd...

She is the best friend of Rahul and Muskan... girlfriend of armaan... Rather I should say life of Armaan Malik...

And now last but not the least the dude itself Armaan Malik... hottest guy of the hospital... the best doctor... he is currently ranking 1st in our hospital. Bestfriend of Rahul and Muskan... love of ridhima... he is a friend in need kind of friend...

He is a person who is always there for his friends...

You know armaan and ridhima are the best couple of our hospital...

Si- so where are they all right now...??

na- oh! They all are on their visit to lonavala sanjeevni today... will be back by tomorrow...

naina's pager blinks...

na- chalo I take ur leave... it's my duty time... bye...

Si- bye...

Now I am waiting for tomorrow to meet them... Specially armaan... (evil smile)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Megs - the starts is really good.
What I liked about the chapter was highlighting the essence of the friendship, the bond between the four of them and of course, the sizzling love between Armaan and Ridhhima.. I loved it. That was the highlight.


I am quite intrigued with the new intern or doctor or whatever this Simran girl is.


Amazingly penned chappy.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Woah woah woah... sme1 is very eager to meet armaan. .. even I am bt an amazng and interesting start to the story ... Thank 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
awesome start👏
loved how u described each and everyone and the bond they share😳
continue soonish😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
SO Basically aur KR writer..
& Now u r writing it In AR version Also..
Dat Z Gr8...
I love D Prologue..

& If U Write any Another KR astory In AR version LINK milegi kya .. I really wanna Read...

I'll Cmnt Again after reading first update...
C U soon..
Tataaa..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
So Here Comes D Devil Simran.
I knw U r thinking how do I knw & Y i am Calling her Devil..
Ab Koi aese Evil Smile dega to Devil hi Hoga na..
So, For Now She z Villian For me..

Naina Ne bade achche se 4 main characters Ko define kiyaa..
Their Frndship, Bond, Love,,
& Best Frndz For each other ..

Let C Yai Simran kyu aayii hai..
Waese SIMRAN u go & find Ur Raj.. Leave My AR 😛

& I don't Need PM..
Main Khudh hi tapak jawungi 😆

continue Soon ..
I am eagerly waiting for nxt update..

Take care..
Bbyee..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
nice start... waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Nice dear
Loved it


Really intrstng update

Keep smiling

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