Tum Hi ho....Abighya FF chapter 11 pg 16 updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi forum members,
This is my first FF ever.. Started this with getting motivated by reading the FFs and OS in this forum. I would like to put my imaginations in this verbal form.. Dedicated to all who read this...Please do excuse me for the hindi mistakes. I am not good at hindi.

I've taken the plot from this Tanu's pregnancy track. The background is that now pragya has somehow successfully executed her plan of going out of Abhi's life. The day before Tanu and Abhi's Wedding..

Chapter 1

She had tears running down her rosy cheeks.. Making the vision more blurred while she was packing off her stuff from the wardrobe..
pragya (Thinking): Aaj aakri dhin.. Aakri raat.. mein yahan hoo.. Kal se ye parivar mera nahi hoga.. jo log meri zindagi mein bhout maine hothethe kal se ye sab parayein ho jayenge.. (went to the flash back)

Flash back

How she fought with dadi for aakash and ratchana, how she shouted back to dadi and dadi slapped her. Dadi later tried to pacify her, but pragya behaved rude to her, saying she has always been ill-treated in this family. How she talked to dadi that she wants to go away from this family as she is dis-respected and every one takes advantage of her goodness. How her words made abhi angry and went to the divorce. Abhi later challenging pragya that he will marry tanu in front of her and live a happy life so that pragya would get punished for her behaviour to dadi. They signing the divorce papers and abhi not allowing her to leave MM till the marriage is over.

Flash back ends

thinking this she was packing her dress, when she sees her wedding dress and reminiscences about her wedding with abhi.. how she proposed and then how she herself broke her love.. her hands were trembling to touch them... She was not ready to go.. but practical pragya inside said.. Nahi pragya.. ab tum kamjor nahi pad sakthi... us bachee ki bhare mein soch.. bina baap ki zindagi kya hoti hai tum achi tara janthi ho..us bache se uska baap ka pyar tum nahi cheen sakthi ho..leave pragya...

while she was packing her wedding dress she heard a voice saying,
So dhokebaaz you are ready to leave.. but only after my marriage with tanu is over.. ok.
She wiped her tears and said.. mujhe koi farak nahi padtha...
abhi replied.. farak nahi padtha... farak padega.. Kal dekna...

Saying he went to sleep and pragya went with her quilt to the balcony...


Precap: Pandit says to start pheres, but voice shouting "ye shaadi nahi ho saktha"

If you like the post.. do comment and give your feed back for the next chapter..
thanks guys..😊

index

chapter 2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4368868&TPN=3

chapter 3:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4368868&TPN=4

chapter 4: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4368868&TPN=6

chapter 5: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4368868&TPN=8

chapter 6: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4368868&TPN=9

chapter 7: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4368868&TPN=10

Chapter 8: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4368868&TPN=13&#p122966866

Chapter 9: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4368868&TPN=14

Chapter 10:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4368868&PID=123730880&#p123730880

Chapter 11:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4368868&PID=122258227&#p122258227

Chapter 12:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4368868&TPN=17&#p125138318



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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Woohoo girl .. .r u sure it's the first time u r writing .. .
Anyway. , babe u write very well ...
Hmm .. .aww it's so nice ...
Abhi calls her dhokebaaz😲
It has Amazing plot...
And amazing execution
But the precap is a BOMB...
PM me sweetie or In fact buddy me
.."
Hoga and kisses
Xoxo
Adya
Edited by AdyaXoxo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice ff...please do continue soon...am too writing ss on dis track...but u r way ahead of the story...i like it...i guess its pragya voice...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start!!! Looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You cannot leave at cliffhanger for too long, 😉 plz update soon, I am very greedy when it comes to reading about the current track, Nice prologue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oooh emmm geee
Such an awesome preview dear
oops, where did i forget my manners?
Oh yes, welcome to the forum dear
And Continue soon..
I hv been waiting to read a story of this kind.
And btw, I'm Adah.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing
Please update soon it really awesome i love the concept

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start dear
U have utilized the plot really well
Doesn't seem like first time
Update soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AdyaXoxo

Woohoo girl .. .r u sure it's the first time u r writing .. .

Anyway. , babe u write very well ...
Hmm .. .aww it's so nice ...
Abhi calls her dhokebaaz😲
It has Amazing plot...
And amazing execution
But the precap is a BOMB...
PM me sweetie or In fact buddy me
.."
Hoga and kisses
Xoxo
Adya



Thank you sooo much...buddy
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: priya.sona

nice ff...please do continue soon...am too writing ss on dis track...but u r way ahead of the story...i like it...i guess its pragya voice...



thanks.. do post the title of ur ff..
I would love to read it...

as far as the voice.. of course its the suspense...😊

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