For JR CVs hope they read this

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Posted: 10 years ago
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To respected JR CVS writing this as I am a diehard JR and sidni fan on behalf of all dos fans who love the show when JR started it was told by the producers Ashvini yardi that's it's a light hearted show between two families and the concept was fresh and unique with a tinch of humor, comedy, nok jhok and romance as promised it had all those elements as we got a Jamai who did change the orthodox approach of our society he stood by his in laws we got hooked to the sweet love story of sid roshni nok jhok of saas jamai his rapo with nani ma kesar chachu and resham chachi element of fun touched our heart it became a part of my life where JR was a stress reliever for me as I hate watching saas bahu drama and plotting well I think today generation is surely looking for a concept like Jamai Raja something which is more practical and this is the reason the show touched its popularity in the first week of its start which is very rare for a new show but it did coz of its fresh concept till 6 months show was on a light hearted mode and I really appreciate CVs for their amazing writing loved every bit of it specially sid roshni romantic scenes as surely I have never seen something like this on any tellywood couple it takes a lot to bring in life to the characters which ravi and nia did it effortlessly

Coming to the story post sid revelation what a twist as surely his revelation was the key point of the show as this was the testing time for sidni love and they had to go through this separation and as RV being the villain used his idea at the best of it so sidni got separated completely justified as any girl at roshni place would react exactly the same way and then the story takes a leap of 6 months in bangkok with roshni finding a friend in yash who falls for her and DD being completely justified wants roshni to marry yash and then the story moves to Mumbai with sid not letting roshni go away and this one guy who for no reason suffered by his own so called mom but his character was always firm he would never let go off roshni for anyone as roshni was his breath his life but it was still not easy for sidni to unite as RV kept playing his games and everytime sidni wanted to come close he would do something det dey used to get separated again and then roshni falls for his cheap act and blames sid for using her only to get physical but then again CVs surprise us and sidni are asked to stay together in one roof which as a viewer gave us hope that finally this was the last call before sidni unite and with the way everytime RV planned to separate them they came even more close and their it started the downfall of his evilness and also dis was to make roshni realize the worth of sid that he loved her truly and that she was wrong and it was well written by CVs and roshni realization and her falling for sid was a treat to watch as from an immature girl she turned into a responsible lady who not only took care of sid but also her in laws and on the other side RV track was taking an end the good part of RV death was he told roshni everythin that sid was innocent but the worst part was the two people kritika and simran who should have known his real face died a death of hero for them wow this was really disappointing part from CVs and then kritika turns evil and wows to take roshni away from sid and poison simran to justify her acts and there you go her one plan and sid roshni are separated

Coming to the present track what diff did it make after sidni divorce coz DD is back to blaming sid even after doing so much for his in laws DD is hating him like any other mom, roshni is jus shocked if roshni again blames sid den der is no trust in their relationship and the 3 months of her realization will turn completely foil I hope she tries to find out the reason sid why is he hiding time and again things from roshni and not let anyone know about simran being involved in all dis ohh so simran is scared det if raj comes to know she will be into problem well looking at future track nothin seems moving in the story line why is sid present at DD house when he divorced roshni and why is roshni not doing anythin to amend her relations well dis divorce thing was not at all needed as wot all cvs showed its mahanta is all gone for a toss today then why did sid stopped roshni getting married to yash why did he protected her from dos insult from the society why did he get yash married to sam wen he at the end had to give up on roshni ? isnt the story is back to square one infact even worse i was so positive towards the show coz it was leading to somethin positive with RV downfall i knew kritika will turn evil but then her one plan n der u go cvs destroyed the couple in seconds are this people really a businessman coz cvs really played with all the characters is raj blind not once he thought how can DD get her property all of the sudden and a piece of paper describes the love of sidroshni i used to love sid for his full power attitude the guy who can give up on anyone but not roshni i agree he had to see his in laws but there were many other ways as DD had started trusting him he could explained her det she can take his help n return wen she gets her wealth back he even kept roshni in dark that girl is human she is not some toy to be played wenever needed really disappointed with JR divorce was not the solution to separate sidroshni

sorry if any of my above description didn't make sense and it's a daily soap and stretching is needed but sorry to say JR is losing its plot by having played with the leads sidni and jamai saas relation was the USP of the show which CVs have destroyed it trust me this negativity in the show is prolonged for quite sometime almost 5 months and it effects our life when we watch a show to refresh from our stressful day but all JR is doing is depressing us more CVs pulled out the humor from the show by removing their original cast like resham chachi kesar chachu its high time CVs end the negativity or else JR is already losing viewers and if sidni are destroyed more JR can surely lose its viewers

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Harmony10 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The cvs seriously do need to read this. They need to know what they are doing to the light hearted show and it already lost its charm after the revelation. Soon they will lose all the viewers and the trp too if they continue with this story line. I agree JR surely was a stress reliever for all of us but now depressing the shit out of my life. They need to stop what they are doing before ruining the story anymore and focus on SidNi ASAP.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb post dear
well mentioned points
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well written and valid points,I fell in love with the show for its new difference from the other and SidNi, I don't tink the divorce was necessary cause now he won't be the jamai until they remarry . I hope even in anger Roshni still trust Sid and they become one soon,they are the gold mind of this show and CVs will only lose by not putting them back together soon . We viewers kept watching for SidNi but keep them apart linger and CVS I'm sure Jamai Raja will be a thing of the past cause everyone will leave.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The divorce was unnecessary. . it's been now almost 200 episodes and dd-jamai relationship is almost the same as before. how much more time does dd need and when will she stop manipulating roshni against Sid. I hope roshni sees through him this time or else all 3 months build up will also go to a waste.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very well said👏 Nothing more to add...I'm sad at the current state of affairs😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Has anyone attempted to tweet storyline idea to Ravi Dubey? He reads all the tweets and retweets it. We can let him know when we like/dislike a track. He can possibly even mention to CVs, you never know.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am someone who has criticized the CVs a lot, so I understand people's unhappiness with the CVs. But, I am feel to some extent the CVs hands are tied as well.
They can't have lovey-dovey scenes for too long (without significant issue between the leads) otherwise the majority of casual viewer will be put off by lack of conflict (supposedly all good stories require presence of significant conflict at all time?).

For the die-hard fans like us, we will prefer if the story has no conflict (and SidNi on honeymoon for 6 months with funny scenes for 3 months in a row!), but the average non-committed viewer will be put off by it.

Also, I think some issues we have with current story line is typical of tv shows since they have to stretch the show's life. I can guarantee you that if Jamai Raja was a movie, they would not have had 3 separation since the intention in movies is to compress full duration (not always in bollywood though).But in tv shows, they have to do the opposite, stretch it out, and make smart characters temporarily stupid so that story is stretched. ( Why did Sid not reveal to his dad about his deal with Simran? We can try to argue it is due to Sid's greatneness bla bla, but it is just CVs stretching).

Edited by danman - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: danman

I am someone who has criticized the CVs a lot, so I understand people's unhappiness with the CVs. But, I am feel to some extent the CVs hands are tied as well.

They can't have lovey-dovey scenes for too long (without significant issue between the leads) otherwise the majority of casual viewer will be put off by lack of conflict (supposedly all good stories require presence of significant conflict at all time?).

For the die-hard fans like us, we will prefer if the story has no conflict (and SidNi on honeymoon for 6 months with funny scenes for 3 months in a row!), but the average non-committed viewer will be put off by it.

Also, I think some issues we have with current story line is typical of tv shows since they have to stretch the show's life. I can guarantee you that if Jamai Raja was a movie, they would not have had 3 separation since the intention in movies is to compress full duration (not always in bollywood though).But in tv shows, they have to do the opposite, stretch it out, and make smart characters temporarily stupid so that story is stretched. ( Why did Sid not reveal to his dad about his deal with Simran? We can try to argue it is due to Sid's greatneness bla bla, but it is just CVs stretching).



@ bold Simran has made Sid promise that he wouldn't reveal it to anyone including his dad. That was part of the deal Simran made with Sid😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: danman

Has anyone attempted to tweet storyline idea to Ravi Dubey? He reads all the tweets and retweets it. We can let him know when we like/dislike a track. He can possibly even mention to CVs, you never know.



I don't think Ravi can do much, he may have his limitations. But everyone should tweet to Ashwani Yardi maam, Grazing goat etc..about the dislike of current track.. Maybe even the actors should know about how the audience are feeling about the track😕, but its imp the CVs know about it first..

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