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Posted: 10 years ago
#1
Guys first of all this is not my ff. I am only giving this story in kr version so dont give me any credit.
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zindagi mein aap jinse jaan se bhi zyaada
pyaar kare jinke liya aap ne apni zindagi
khatre mein daal di . jinke jaan bachane
ke liye aapne apni jaan gawate - 2 bacchi
par aap unhe unki jaan ke khatre ke
baare mein khuch nahi bta sakti , aur yeh raaz apko aur bas ek aur insaan ko pta
hai jisne aapse vaada kiya hai ki voh unhe
kuch nahi bataayega , kya hoga jab vahi
log aap per shaq kar rahe ho , aap ko
samajh nahi paa rahe aap se zaada kisi
aur par trust kar rahe ho , aur aap ki feeling ka mazaq bana diya ho par
chahkar bhi aap unse nafrat nahi kar
saqte aur unko kuch naa ho isliye un se
bahut door chale gaye ho aur waha par
phir se jeene ki koshish kar rahe ho kya
hoga jab aap apne past ko bhulaker aage bar chuke ho aur unke bina khush rehne
bhi sikh liya ho tab voh past aap ke
samne phir aaker khara ho jaaye aap
unhe phir kabhi nahi dekhna chahte ho
aur voh aapke samne ho aur aap karaaz
bhi jaante ho , aur aap se maafi mang rahe ho , aur apni galti sudhar ne ke liye
ek aakhri mauka mang rahe ho , aur aap
ki zindagi mein phir shaamil hona chahte
ho , kya aap unhe maaf kar paayenge ?
kya aap unhe aakhiri mauka de
paayenge ? kya aap un per phirse yaakin karke apni zindagi mein shamil kar
paayenge ? yaa phir unko maaf na kar ke
unse hamesha hi door hi rahenge ?

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
CHARACTER SKETCH
Male leads
Reyaansh Singhania - he is the most
famous choreographer of India . he is so
handsome and a brilliant dancer . he have many fans and many girls die on his good looks . he is owner of d3 dance academy which he run along with his friends . his friends call him rey.something happened 5 yrs back and he lost his lady love . but he didn't realised his mistake and still think it's her fault . and blame her for all . he is bff of sharon and swayam.
Swayam sekhawat - he is also one of the most famous choreographer of India. He also have many fans . he is owner of flames academy . something happened 5 yrs back and he lost his baby sis that time he didn't realise his mistake but now he has realised his mistake and misses her like hell. And is very guilty . and he is dying to see her one time . he has distant himself from rey and all his friends as he know that they are the reason he has lost his sis.
A.C.P Arjun Suryakant Rawte - he is
second in command of etf . An angry
young man has no past like show . but still is an akdu , sadu and khadoos boss .but is really a good hearted person and a super cop . he is bff of sameer and is in secret relationship . and only two person knows about his relationship and that is his princess & his bff. and he love both the angel of his life a lot and can't live without them . and misses both of them lot as they are away from him.
A.C.P Sameer Dhamsingh Rathod - he is
cheif of etf and is known as rowdy
rathod. he is married to his love of life
aayesha . he is arjun's bff and knows
about both the special girl's of arjun's life and he also misses both of them a lot as both are like his sister .
Female leads
A.C.kyra Suryakant Rawte(kriya) -
second in command of etf delhi .
something had happened with her 5yrs
back because of that she had lost her
identity and that one incident changed a
bubbly , chirpy girl to a serious person . that incident have totaly shattered her
and still haunted her but she had now
learnt to live again for some people that
is her only family .she misses her bhai ,
her love and her so - called friends a lot .
her only motto is to finish crime
A.C.P Riya Mukherjee - CHEIF OF DELHI ETF. She is a brilliant cop and a sweet and caring girl . love someone selflessly and is in relationship with him . she love Kyra lot too and care for her . knows about her past helped her too move on . and treat her as his little sis . bff of choree and ayesha and sis of sameer.
Aayesha Sameer D. Rathod - she is also a sweet caring and daring officer . married to sameer and is madly in love with him. She is also a good cop and cares for Riya and Kyra very much . and treat them as her sis and she also miss them a lot.
Sharon Raiprakash - she is one of the best dancer and choreographer . she is co -owner of d3 academy . and is bff of rey and is in love with swayam . she didn't take her relationship seriously earlier but now when he is distancing himself from them . she realised his value in her life but she don't know why he always stay away from them and behaves as he don't know them. Supporting characters
Vicky , nil , bharat , simmy , rinny and
aashi - same as the show but don't know the value of kriya and think she don't deserve rey and are trying very hard too make rey and tani in relationship.
Tani - A brilliant classical dancer and is trying to get rey back by telling kriya's mistake and trying her best to make rey fall for her again.
Vishakha - she has totaly changed . and
had become one of true friend of kriya &
is like her elder sis . love her lot and can't hear anything bad about her . knows all about kriya's past and was a part of kriya past too . she is co-owner of flames academy . and hate rey and other's for not believing kriya . she had forgiven swayam but didn't told him about kriya's past.
Shree , liza , chotu & shakshi same as the show
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
first chapter
It was a beautiful morning in a beautiful house and two girls were being ready to go out but suddenly they hear loud noise from outside and there was a bang on the door and some goons enter the house there face was covered and they have guns in hand . one of the girl went forward and started fighting with the goons and told another girl to run away and hide herself in some safe place the other girl started running and the first girl continued to fight with the goons and defeated almost all the goon but one goon unnoticed by the first girl went towards the second girl and pointed his gun toward her and shoot her but in time the first girl came and push her aside and the bullet hit her but still she shot the goon and fall down blood was all around her the other girl went numb due to shock and when she gain her consciousness she shouted riyaaa. She got startled and wake up shouting riyaa and sweating very badly . and then look around she was in her room . she switch on the light and drank whole glass of water from the side table . it's been 5yrs after that incident but it's haunted memory is still fresh in the mind . she look at the clock it's 5:00 am in the morning . she quickly got up and freshn up and went downstairs where she saw a girl waiting for her near the door as she went near her the girl pass her beautiful dimple smile to her. Girl : gudmrng ,kriya.
Kriya : gudmrng , riyu waise aaj mere
wajah se jogging ke liye late ho rahe hai
na.
Riyu : haa chalo , waise aaj phirse wahi
sapna dekha na (kriya shockingly look at
riya ).
Kriya: tumhe kaise pta
Riya : best friend aur behen hu tumhari
panch saal se janati hu tumhe . so pta
chal gaya Aur maine kaha than a ki uss bare me sochna band kar do aur dekho mujhe kuch nahi hua nahi.
Kriya: pta hai ri , pta nahi aaj itne dinno
baad wahi sapna kyu aaya , aur waise bhi agar uss din tumhe kuch ho jata.
Riya : (by cutting her in b/w ) ho jata hua toh nahi na . so , stop thinking about it aur waise bhi A.C.P Kyra ko aise santy baate suit nahi karti . criminals ne sun liya toh unhe heart attack aa jayega
tumhara yeh avatar dekh kar.
Kriya : hahaha , very funny ( saracasticly ) ( and this bring smile back on kriya's face aura aye kyun na humari ri hai hi aise jaha hai waha sabko happy kar deti hai and then they started there usual talks starting from cases then about all the things around they were talking while jogging so after 1hour of jagging they came back home & went to take bath and change into casuals as they were sweating very badly ) After taking bath riya came down to prepare breakfast and while preparing
breakfast. Riya's pov Aaj uss haadse ke itne saalo baad bhi voh
ghav taaza hai kriya ka ander . pls
bhagwan use shakti dena ki woh issab
ko bhula paaye par aaj phir uske ghav
taaza hogaye kyonki aaj itne saalo baad
voh phir Mumbai ja rahi hai jaha yeh sab shuru hua pls use itni shakti dena ki voh
yeh sab khatam kar paaye . aur pls waha
aisa kuch mat karna ki itni mehnat se jo
uske face pe jo smile aayi hai voh chali
jaaye . ( her pov was disturbed by ringing sound of her phone and a sweet smile appear on her face as she saw the caller id ) Same time kriya's room She come out of washroom and sat on the
bed thinking how complicated her life
had become 5 yrs back she was a normal
bubbly chirpy girl full of happiness and
have dreams like any other normal girl
would have but life had taken a turn and everything got scattered by just one
incident and she have lost her identity. No one knows kriya shekhawat it's A.C.P
Kyra Suryakant Rawte but as time past
she had accepted this and found positive
things in this too .she have found true friends as kyra , three bff who were
more like elder sis to her who understand her feeling even before she spoke , two big bros who were always there too support her and she found her angel here and again has started enjoying life but , no the past have to come back and she have to go to the city she never wanted to go Mumbai the city of dreams there are so many happy and sad memories there she remembered how she came to Mumbai then how they became friends then his rejection , tum hi ho sequence when they indirectly confessed their feelings, then there confession and the time after
that . she also remembred her masti with her bhai and friends but then haunted memories start to creep in her mind but her thought process was broken by a sweet voice .
Voice : mumma
Kriya : mein yahan per hu ashi
Ashi: mumma , see i'm ready , hum
Mumbai kb jaayenge aur mamu se kab
milenge aur hum kaha rahenge
Kriya: hum Mumbai abhi breakfast ke
bad jaayenge , chalo chalk r breakfast
krte hai In break fast table riya served breakfast to three of them and enjoyed their family time as much as they can . and then they left for airport as there flight was of 10am and it was 8 am already.
Mean time in Mumbai In a big and beautiful bungalow. A handsome guy is very happy and anyone can guess that by looking at his face and why wouldn't be he happy , as he is going to meet the three most important girls of
his life after so long time and his happiness know no bounds and , so he is
busy in cleaning and arranging the house then he took his phone and dial
someone's no Someone : hello , gudmrng arjun , kaise hai aap ? Arjun : gudmrng jaan , aur tumhare,
kriya aur angel ke bina kaisa ho sakta hu Riya : accha ji , toh aaj toh aap bahut
khush honge kyunki hum vaapas aa rahe
hai Arjun : khush toh bahut hu , by the way
mein tum logo ko pick karne aa raha hu .
so ,meet you at airport Riya : ok , and pls be there on time bhul
mat jaana Arjun : ok , aur yeh baat toh mein kabhi
bhul nhi skta Riya : ok ,by love you and see you soon Arjun: by , love you too and meet you soon After disconnecting the call arjun again
got busy in the task of cleaning the house After sometime door bell rang , he went
to open the door and saw his bff
standing there Arjun : bhai , subah- 2 mere ghar kaise Sameer : kyu aa nahi sakta , waise mein
toh isliye aaya tha kyunki tuh jog par nhi
aaya so check karne aa gaya , aur tu kya
mujhe darwaze se hi bhagane ki planning
mein hai Arjun : nahi Sammy : toh ander aane de Arjun realising get away from the door
and give Sammy way to enter After coming inside Sameer : ( shocked ) aaj suraj kaha se
nikla hai , the great A.C.P Arjun aur ghar
ki safayi kahi mein sapna toh nahi dekh
raha na Arjun : saale , nautanki band kar , aur voh
aaj riya , kriya aur aashi aane wale hai
toh ghar saaf kr raha tha Sammeer : saale , tu mujhe pehle nhi bta
sakta tha kitne dinno baad apni dono
beheno aur angel se milta , aur agar mein
yaha nahi aata toh yeh janab toh kuch
bolte bhi nahi Arjun : maaf krde mere bhai bhul gya ,
chal tu mere sath unhe pick karne chalio ,
ab khush Sameer : tu na bolta phir bhi mein unhe
pick karne aata , samjhe yo samjhau Arjun : dammnit , yeh mera dialogue hai Sameer : copyright nahi hai tere pass , aur
waise ab tujhe ghar saaf nhi karna Both the bff did a lots of masti with
cleaning the house and waited for their
arrival
Precap :kriya , riya & aashi in Mumbai
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
part - 2
outside airport in mumbai
arjun and sameer were waiting for kriya
and riya to come out of the airport
arjun : yrr , aur kitne der lagegi inhe aane mein
sameer : mujhe kya pta mein bhi toh intezar kar raha hu naa
arjun : yrr , itne dino baad milunga unse,
ab toh ek pal bhi unke bina guzarna
mushkil ho raha hai.
rathod : mere halat bhi tere tarah hi hai,
waise intezar ke alawa hum kuch kar bhi toh nahi sakte
arjun : haa yrr
suddenly , they hear a sweet voice calling mamu and both of them look toward that direction and saw there angel coming running towards them. ashi come running towards arjun and arjun bend down on his knees and pick his angel up in his arms and hug her very tightly and then kiss her .
arjun : kaisa hai mera baccha ?
ashi : mein thik hu par apse naraz hu aap mujhse milne nahi aay na
arjun : sorry , par kuch kaam aagaya
warna mein apni angel se na milne ayu
yeh kabhi ho sakta hai kya ?
ashi : it's ok , par aisa dubara nahi hona
chahiye arjun : yes ,mam
sameer : arrey mere angel toh mujhe bhul hi gayi , usee toh apne sammy mamu yaad bhi naye , ab mai kya karu
ashi : mamu and she jump on sammy
and he ctch her and twirl her around and then both of them start chatting
two person were smilling seeing there
antics and they were kriya and riya
kriya look at arjun and ran in his arms
and arjun also held her protectively in his embrace arjun kissed her forhead and wishper missed you my princess
kriya: missed you to bhai
then she seperated from arjun and went
toward sameer that's when arjun look at riya and both of them shared an intense eyelock . riya
came towards arjun and arjun hug her
tightly and wishper missed you jaan
riya : missed you too arjun
and both look toward each other and
were caught in another intense eyelock which was broken by sameer's voice
sameer : riya , arjun tum log waha kya kr
rahe ho ghar nahi jana kya
both together : haa aa rahe hai
they smile at each other and went
towards other and all of them then went to arjun's house
in arjun's house
all in arjun house were chatting happily
and samjun were really very much busy in playing with ashi and after sometime
ashi fell asleep due to tiredness and arjun took her in his room and made her
sleep properly . and after that he came
down and all of them were happily
talking with eachother after so long they
didn't know how the time pass so fast
and it was night time . they have dinner together and then sammy left for his
home and kriya left to her room as she
was also tired after the journey now
ariya were alone in the room .
and started there lovey - dovey talks and
romance too ( guys abhi isse kaam chala lo i'm not good at all this stuff )
same night in a diff place in
mumbai a guy was sitting in his bed holding a pic aaj 5 saal ho gaye hai tumhe dekhe huye
kriya pta nahi tum kaisi ho , kaha ho
mujhe kuch nahi pta , par mein tumse
bohot pyaar karta hu mere cutely weird
sis , mujhe nahi pta ki kya vajah thi , aur tumhare aur gang ke bich mein kya hua
tha par mein pta kar ke hi rahunga
promise , aur ho sake toh mujhe maaf kr
do , mein tumhara sath nahi de paya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
hey , guys it's cs of ashia
ashia : ashia is adopted daughter of
kriya . she found her during a case when
she was 6 month old. and presently she is 3 yr old . she have great bonding with
ariya and sasha . and arjun and sammy
call her angel
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Part 2b
Next day kriya ,riya and arjun went to etf and leave ashia with maid. Which is
arranged by arjun earlier . and as soon as three of them enter office premesis
everyone wished them kriya and riya
replied to their wishing and greeting while arjun just nodded . as they enter
conference room , choree and aayesha
were really angry on them as they didn't
inform them about their arrival .and after lots of manofying from kriya and riya they
forgave them . and just at that moment samjun enter conference room . and they
all discussed the case and decided kriya
and shree will go as bf and gf in the mall
to catch the culprit . In the mall Shree and kriya moved towards food
corner where their chief suspect was they
walk in hand in hand , talking and
laughing. Shree told kriya about the
suspect in her ear and she acted as she
was blushing . At that moment d3 gang watch them and
they all were shocked . first they see
kriya after 5 yrs and that to totaly
transformed . she was wearing shots , top and a jacket . and that to with a unknown guy who was looking like her bf. All the gang members were shocked they have diff feelings swayam and vishakha were happy to see kriya but the possisive
bhai in swayam , was sending mudersly
glare toward the new guy While the other members were too
shocked too react taani broke their trance taani : yeh kriya hi hai na , aur dekho
kitne khush lag rahi hai , aur yeh larka
toh iska bf lag rha hai Lagta hai isne move on kar liya , aur ek
rey tum ho jo usske liye wait kr rahe ho
use maaf krne ki soch rhe ho par usee toh
koi farak bhi nahi par raha All the gang member nod in approval
while swayam and vishakha glare taani Vishakha : agar tum logo ko sach pta hota
toh tum aisa kabhi nahi kehte Rey : sach kya hai yeh btao toh aur tum
uski side kyu leti ho hamesha pehle toh
nafrat krti thi ussse Vishakha : agar himmat hai toh sunno
sach aur fir tumhe yeh bhi pta chalega ki
mai humesha uska sath kyu deti hu Precap : revealation of past
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
ch -3
recap : vishakha going to tel about
kriya's past
######################################################
vishakha : i will tell you about what
actually happened 5 yrs back but not here
let's go to my home cause its the closest ( she awnsered there unasked ques )
all nodded in agreement and left the mall
not before starring at kriya and shree .
vishakha's house was 10 minutes away
from mall . so , after a silent drive of 10
minutes they reach vishakha's house . and all were spell bounded to see the house's
beauty . all went inside and settle
thereself on the sofa and look at vishakha
to start
vishu : you must thinking how me and kriya became inseprable friends right so ,listen flashback after leaving the college , i got admission
in st. thomas college ( fake name ) which
was famous for it's facilities in dance and
other activities and also in making the
student's career . i was very happy when i
got selected but i don't know it will became reason of my all nightmares . you
know one day i got offer from one very
big company for performing a solo
performance in one of there events and i
happily agreed but i don't know what
strom was waiting for me . you know what happened after my performance the
manager ask me for a drink and i happily
take it . but i don't know they have mixed
something in it . and my head became
heavy and i felt dizzy and became
unconcious . and that guy raped me and made a video of that too . next morning
when i wake up i found myself in that
condition . and i was totaly shattered i
told him i'll complain against him but he
show me the video and told me he will
leak it if i did any thing like that . and he also demanded Rs 20,000 from me . i was
feeling helpless i don't know what to do
and whom to say , i tried taani as she was
my best fiend but she never recieve any of
my calls . i was going to do suciede . and
was about to jump of the bridge when kriya saw me and prevented me from
doing anything insane . she asked me why
i was doing so but i was not able to tell
her so , i told her i can't tell her and i need
20,000 Rs urgently . so , she told me she
will give me the Rs without knowing the reason and without guranty wether i can
return her or not . i was amazed to see
her and told her everything as i trust her
and after knowing the truth see was first
shocked than she help me stand against
him and collect evidences against him and finaly both of us succeeded in making
him arrested . i was so much depressed
and she help me out of depression . and
that's how we became so good friends .
( i'm not breifing out how they have done
it i hope you guys don't mind ) ################# end of flash
back
########################### vishakha was literaly crying after
remembring all the incident's once again
and everyone in the gang was looking her
shocked and starring her thinking how
much she have faced . swayam was first
one to come out of shock and side hugged vishakha consoling her . as he was the
closest one to her now . after recovering
from shock vishakha started again .
i was in regular touch with kriya .
sometime i felt something was bothering
her i asked her many times and she said it was nothing. and that day when i came
back . i came college first and went to
meet kriya.
####################fllashback################################ i came at college and hear what the
whole college was saying about kriya and
see how you guys were taunting her as
she was a non-dancer . and i just went to
search her and found her in fire escape
crying badly . i felt so bad and wanted to teach you guys a good lesson but kriya
stopped me and told me she will not care
what others think but what rey and her
bhai thinks was all that matter to her .
but that they when you and swayam shout
on her without any reason she was totaly shattered and only i know how i make her
normal again . and that they when you
got offer of dance
at that event she was so happy for you
guys but she was upset because you guys
didn't inform about that to her . and when we went there i saw that manager
that raped me there and i was scared plus
i sense something wrong . do , i informed
kriya and she came there and we both
hear there talk secretly and we gotto
know that they were going to sell all the girls and kill all the boys . and there are
many more girls there too . who were
about to sent out of country . we were so
shocked and kriya immediatly called
police and informed them . they came
there and only found illegal alcohal and only manager was arrested but the boss
was so angry tha he told you guys that a
girl complain in police against them so
your deal is canceled and also told that
the girl was of your college . and you guys
like insane people told him kriya's name and you just went out of there and all of
you blame her for your loss and downfall .
and asked her why she did all . and all of
you blame her without any reason . rey
did you remembred what you did to her
in rehersal hall rey : what the hell , kriya why did you do
that , how can you become so self fish ,
you just tried to destroy our careers
kriya : trust me rey , i didn't did anything
wrong
rey : lie only lie , i don't know kriya tum itna gir sakti ho
kriya : rey , just believe me i did all hat
too save you guys
rey : kriya ( he was about to slap kriya
just then vishakha enter and she stoped
rey kriya was so hurt that she just ran out of the campus and vishakha ran after her
to stop her as it was not safe )
######################## end
of flash
back##################### vishakha : ab batao rey kriya ki galti kya
thi , bus yahi ki usne tum logo ki jaan
bachai , aur tum logo ne uski jaan khatre
mein daal di , tumhari wajah se usse apni
identity , apni smile , apni innocence sab
khona para , aur jab ab phir voh khush rehna sikh gayi tumhare bina , tab bhi
tum logo ko problam ho rahi hai , ab
batao rey uski galti kya thi
everyone of the gang was too shocked
and numb to react , they were feeling
guilty but all this truth affect three persons most they were shareyam ,
swayam was the first one to come out of
all this and he glare rey hard
swayam : rey , i'm warning you stay away
from kriya , i can't afford to loose my sis
once again and that's too because of you guys my sis has suffer a lot . and me being
her brother was also against her and
supporting you guys knowing something
was wrong but still i didn't care but not
once again .
rey : was just numb to react on this and the same reaction was of all of other
member of the gang ( they were guilty ,
hurt and angry on themselves for hurting
such a person )
swayam : vishakha , why kriya left
mumbai , and what happen to her after she left college that day because it was
last time i met her ? i wanted to know
every thing and you know that guy too na
who was with kriya how is he and how
kriya know him ?
recap : why kriya left mumbai , how she
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Ch - 4
Swayam : vishu ( swyam call vishakha
vas he had become one of her closest
friend ) you know na everything than pls
tell me . i can't bear this mystery anymore
. i've already lost 5 long years as i can't
get even a single thing about my sis life but not now i'm not going to do the same
mistake again i'll make sure everything is
perfect in my baby sis's life . Vishu : yeah, i know everything about her
. and don't worry her life is perfect now
and she is happy too she have not
forgotten the painful and haunted
memories of past but she had got some
beautiful memories and relations which had made her happy and made her learn
how to enjoy life again . ( when she was
speaking all this gang full concentration
was on her ) Vishu : and you wanted to know what
happened that day ,When kriya ran out of
rehearsal hall i went after her as i know it
was not safe for her . and i know that
manager had got to know it was kriya
who complained against him . all thanks to you guys . so , he must have plan
something to harm her so she can't speak
against him. Flashback As soon as kriya ran out of rehersal ,
vishu ran after her Vishu: kriya, kriya ruko mere baat toh
suno ( but kriya didn't listen to her as only
rey's word were ringing in her mind and
when rey was about to slap her . it broke
her heart in infinite pieces and she was
oblivious to the world and tears were continuously flowing down her beautiful
eyes and she was just going where her
legs were taking her in such a vulnerable
state she exited hte college premises an
went towards an isolated street she was
walking in that street lost in her thoughts suddenly she felt a tuck on her arm and
turn around to see vishakha holding her
arm and panting heavily , vishu didn't
even realise when kriya hug her tight and
started crying her heart out and she
started calming her down after some time kriya calm down a little bit and
came back to her senses just then both of
them realise that they are in mid of an
isolated street . Vishu : kriya , chalo ghar chalye hai , it's
not safe here ( as soon as she said this
she saw few goons coming towards them
it seems like they were following them
for long ) Vishu : kriya jaldi chalo yaha se woh log
mujhe kuch theek nahi lag rahe hai
kriya : mujhe bhi vishu , lets go ( both the
girl rush out of the place and tried to walk
as fast as they could and they flt the
goons following them too , then they
started running and they can felt the
goons running behind them and suddenly they face dead end , it was end of the
street and when they turn back they saw
those goons just behind them . they were
really scared now ) One goon : ab kaha bhagogi , bahut bhagli
tum dono , aura b yeh pakdan - pakdai ka
khel bhi khatam kriya : kaun ho tum , aur humne tumhara
kya bigada hai jaanedo hume Goon : bigara , bigara toh bahut kuch hai ,
tumhari wajah se lakho ka nuksan hua
humme aur iski saja toh tumhe milagi ,
aur voh hai maut ki saza , taaki koi phir
humare khilaf awaz uthane ki zurat bhi
na kare ( he took a knife and was ready to stab
kriya with it but vishakha was coming in
b/w so he pushed vishakha away and she
fall down and again he was going to stab
kriya but at the last moment they hear a
gun sound and everyone was startled and look around and found a girl who shot
him ) Goon : hey , ladki agar apni jaan ki sahi
salamati chati hai toh chali jaa yaha se Girl : unn do ladkiyo ko chod do mein yaha
se chali jaaungi Goon : oye , ladki zyada mat bol warna
tere liye thik nahi hoha , aur inke sath
khamakha tub hi maari jaayegi Girl : yeh toh waqt hi bataayega ki
kiskeliye kya thik nahi hoga And she started fighting with them she
was alone and they were so many but she
defeated each and everyone . she was
looking like an angry tigress and all were
her prey . she came to the head goon Goon: pls chod do humme , humme jaane
do Girl : yeh , toh meine hi kaha tha kit um
log unhe chod do varna tumlogo ke liye
acha nahi hoga , aur mere ek baat kaan
khol kr sun lo aurat ki kabiliyath par shaq
nahi karna chahiye And then the girl turned toward both of
them Girl : are you both ok ? Both : yeah we are fine , but who are you Girl : oh , hi , i'm riya mukherjee etf Both : hello mam , and thanks for saving
us Riya : no need , it's my duty , and don't call
me mam call me riya ok Both : ok Riya called the local police and handover
the goons to them and took kriya and
vishu with her in her car Riya : now tell me why were they trying to
kill you Both kriya and vishu explain the whole
matter to her Riya : hmmm , it seems serious . and may
be some underworld don is also involved ,
so , let's go to the comm. Office and i'll
arrange security for you . and also get
details of this case kriya : riya how you saw us as there was
no one around Riya : oh actually what happened few
minutes before was Riya was there to meet some of her
informers and when she was returning
she saw them and she just react acc. To
the situation Comm.. office Comm. : hello , miss riya , any important
work so you are here Riya : yes sir , and she explained
everything to him Comm. Miss riya we got to know that ,
sikender and pathan lala are behind this .
and it's really a very high profile case .
and he will try his best to kill them as he
knew about them and they are the
witness of his illegal work Riya : sir, i want to join the case Comm. : ok ,riya , but this case is really
dangerous , you are sure you wanted to
join Riya : yes sir Comm. : ok then but you and kriya have to
leave Mumbai soon as it's not safe here .
so ,i am sending you to delhi . ok , so pack
your stuff's and be ready Both : yes sir Comm. : it seems they don't know about
you vishakha , so you'll stay here and i'll
arrange security for you here ok Vishu : ok , but kriya will be fine right Comm. : don't worry about her , riya will
handle everything . now you can leave Then trio leave the comm. Office riya drop
kriya and vishakha at college campus .
and went back to etf . at campus kriya
decided to tell about her departure to
delhi to swayam and she also thought
about an excuse as she don't want swayam to be worried but when she went
to rehersal hall she found each and every
gang member talking rubbish about her
and swayam and rey were also not telling
anything to them and they even said that
they never wanted to see her again . she was so broken that she decided to left
without telling anyone anything , she
pack her stuff and shifted to vishakha's
house first and stay there for some days
and then left to Delhi with riya #######################
flashback ends
############################################ Vishu : swayam , tumhe yaad hai , kriya
ke jaane ke teen - char hafto tak toh
tumhe pta bhi nahi chala tha that she left
, and you got to know only when vp sir
announced that she have left the college ,
and you guys said that she left to make you feel guilty right , but if she had to
make you feel guilty she will never tell me to not tell you
anything about all this . you know what
guys you have killed kriya, and now it's
only kyra the super cop , whose only aim
in life is to finish crime and her only
family is her team and etf . Every gang member were shocked and
guilty and tears were continuously
flowing down shareyam's eyes not able to
handle it more swayam left from there
followed by everyone else . Vishakha was left alone at home and she
was lost in the memory lane of past which
was broken by ringing sound of her phone
. and she was shocked to see the caller id
Recap : whose call was that , a shocking news what was the affect of this case on ariya and why ariya were in a secret
relationship and how only kriya and sameer knows
about ariya relationship and how taani and arjun became so close rey and swayam's pov
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Vish(pov) why is he calling now , isn't
he is in office but he can call , so let see
what he has to say Vishu pick up the call and before she can
speak the person from other side started
to speak . Person: vishu , you can believe what
happened today , it is a breaking news ,
i'm going to faint , i can't believe it's truth
. pta nhi aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai , I'm
sure apni right place se toh nhi nikla hoga
, i don't know yeh kaise ho sakta hai , i think i'm dreaming ( and he just keep on
his blabbering ) Vishu : ( got irritated and shouted )
shreee , what the hell are you speaking ,
mujhe kuch samajh nhi aa raha Shree : voh toh mujhe bhi samajh nhi aa
raha , ki yeh kaise hua aur hume pta bhi
nhi chala , how is it possible ? Vishu : kya - kya pta nhi chala , aur tu bol
kya raha hai explain karne ki kripa
karega Shree : arjun sir , tere jiju hai Vishu : Whaaat ? Shree : arjun sir proposed rii and asked
her will she marry him Vishu : kya , omg what a shocking news
and when it happen , aur yeh toh acchi
baat hai toh tu itni natunki kyu kar raha
hai Shree : oye , yeh toh mujhe bhi pta hai ,
that it is a good news aur sir ne aaj office
mein sab ke samne ri ko propose kiya ,
aur mein nautanki nhi kr raha agar tujhe
pta chalega toh tu bhi aise hi react karegi Vishu : kya , kaise react karungi , paheli
mat bujha aur sidhe - sidhe bta na kya
baat hai Shree : baat yeh hai , that arjun sir and
riya were in relationship for more than 5
yrs aur hame kuch pta bhi nahi , pta kya
bhanak bhi nhi lagi , aur iss kriya ki
bacchii ko sab pta tha aur issne btana bhi
zaruri nhi samjha , huh Vishu : what , yeh toh nainsafi hai , tujhe
nhi btaya it's ok , par mujhe toh bta sakti
thi na Shree : oye madam matlab kya hai tera Vishu : kuch nahi , yrr in dono ki toh class
leni hi paregi Shree : haa bilkul , aur yeh bta na toh
mein bhul hi gaya , etf ne bahaduri se ek
bahut hi complicated case solve kiya toh
commisoner sir ne khush hoker humme 1
week ki leave di hai . so we are going for
picnic , given by arjun sir as a treat to us and we are going to Goa and mujhe
tumhe inform karne ki duty milli hai , so
kal milte hai arjun sir ke ghar par jaha se
hum sab sath me picnic ke liye jaayenge
aur waha pe unn dono ki class bhi lete
hai . Vishu : done , aur dhed saari masti aur
shopping bhi karenge Shree : tum logo ko sirf shopping hi sujhti
hai na Vishu : tumhe kya problem hai , tumhare
paiso se nhi kar rahe shopping Shree : whatever , bye Vishu : byee Vishu s pov Omg , arjun has proposed riyu di and they
are going to get married soon i'm so
happy for them . and this shree is just
mad can't he tell me this at starting
instead of his stupid blabbering . and i
can guess how much exited kriya must be after all it's her dear bhai's wedding .
and now this trip to Goa . i know we all
are like family to each other and this
small trip with all of us after so long will
just awesome . you are the best arjun
jiju . and now i must start packing . i'm super - duper exited. End of vishu's pov In ETF Arjun's cabin arjun was sitting in his cabin and
watching how choree , aayesha , liza and
shakshi were teasing riya and also they
were showing their anger on kriya and
riya for not telling them about all this .
arjun was smiling seeing their antics . arjun pov i have never ever thought that we will be
together after how i insulted you that day
and broke your trust but it is also truth
that i'm madly and irrecoverably love
with you miss riya mukherjee na would
be Mrs riya arjun rawte .and than he was lost in past memories ##################################flashback#################################### Riya and arjun were in secret relationship
for six months as arjun didn't wanted to
tell about their relationship to anyone as
he has just return from an undercover
mission and some of those criminals are
trying to harm him . so , he didn't want riya to be hurt , so he didn't tell anyone
about their relationship and asked riya to
not also .and that day when riya met
kriya . arjun was about to tell about their
relationship to everyone . but before he
can tell anyone about them . comm. Call came and he inform everyone about riya s
transfer to Delhi for someone's security
but he didn't tell them the reason and for
whose security too. Shakshi : riya , aisa kaise kr sakti hai and
she left her team in danger and in b/w
such an important , dangerous and
complicated case . if she didn't want to
join the case . she can tell sameer . if she
is scared but kisi minister ki security ke liye jana . disgusting . And it seems everyone believe her .
( seems everyone forget that they were
telling that coward who had swallowed
xora virus just to save people ) so , when
riya came everyone was looking at her in
anger . she didn't care and went to sameer to tell him about whole matter
but before she can arjun stop her and
shouted on her . Arjun : riya , i didn't knew you were such
an coward , you left your team in danger
just to save your life . disgusting Riya : yeh aap kya keh rahe hai sir Arjun : sach , aur kis minister ki security
ke liye jaa rahi ho , comm. Ne hume
bataya Riya : sir , mere baat toh suniye Arjun : kyaa sunu , i was right you don't
deserve etf tum research desk ke hi layak
ho ( he kept on speaking and said
whatever came in his mouth to riya .
seriously i thought he want an breakup ) Riya was so angry and hurt that she didn't
reply to arjun directly went to sam gave
her resigning letter and left . and arjun
was also angry so he even didn't try to
talk to her after that It was after two month riya left and she
never contact anyone here .and no one
tried to contact her too . one day sam and
arjun went to comm. office For some
work and find him tensed and always
talking with someone on phone . Sam : any problem sir Comm. : yes , and he told about kriya &
riya's meet to samjun then how he told
her about sik and lala's involvement and
how she join this mission knowing how
dangerous it is an it can cost her life too ,
and then how she destroyed phatan lala's whole business in delhi and arrested him
too ( samjun were feeling proud of riya
and guilty to for their behaviour that day
too) Arjun : but sir , it's good news then why
are you tensed Coomm : i know arjun , but i'm tensed
because after this much high security
sik's men attacked kriya and riya . and
riya's condition was critical as 3 bullets
hit her and kriya was also badly injured .
and i'm worried about the security at hospital . After listening to comm. Arjun felt like
someone snatched the floor beneath his
feet. His riya was in critical condition and
he is just sitting here helpless he just
want to see her . He was just thinking
about riya and told comm. That he will go Delhi and look after the security. Comm.
happily agreed to him, as he know if
arjun is there he don't have to worry
about security. arjun went Delhi as soon
as possible and he was blaming himself
on the whole way to Delhi as he felt if he has not shouted on her she might told
him the truth and then he would never let
her handle such a dangerous mission
alone . and as he reach Delhi he directly
went to the hospital and went towards
riya's ward all the officers present there saluted him , but he didn't reply them , he
directly went inside the ward and went
near her by looking at riya's pale face
and so many wires , dripps etc connected
to her body then the bandages made him
feel like someone stabbed his heart . he just can't see her in that condition and
went out of the ward . then the main
officer at the security speak Officer : sir , we were about to tell you
that is riya mam's ward , kyra mam's
ward is that and she is getting her
consciousness you can meet her ( arjun
look at the officer confused but remain
silent and went towards kyra s ward ) In kyra's ward Arjun came near kriya's bed and saw a
innocent and sweet girl of 19 - 20 yrs
lying on the bed and she was slowly-
slowly gaining her consciousness . and she
got scared as she saw arjun as soon as
she open her eyes . arjun sensing that Arjun : hey relax , i'm ACP Arjun , you
don't need to be scared kriya : oh , so you are ri s arjun sir , she
talked a lot about you ( then she
remembered how goons enter their
house and how ri got shot you guys
remember kriya's dream in first chap if
not than you can go and read it again ) kriya then tried to sit but due to pain
can't as goon stab her in her stomach , so
arjun help her to sit . After sitting her first ques she asked was
how is riya and arjun replied she is out of
danger but still is weak. Arjun : kyra tumse ek baat puchu yehh
security officer mujhe tumhare ward
mein kyu laye kriya : voh na comm. Sir ne mere security
ke liye mera identity change kr diya aur
mujhe aapki sis bna diya , so everyone
here know me as your sis Arjun : oh , toh tum mujhe bhai kyu nhi
bulati and i should thank comm. sir as he
have given me such a sweet sis kriya : ok bhai ( and she smile a little )
par apne na ri ko bahut hurt kiya isliye
mein aap se naraz hu Arjun : pta hai , aur na mujhe nhi lgta voh
mere baat manegi aur mujhe ek aur
chance degi , kya tum apne bhai ki madad
karogi apni bhabhi ko manane me kriya : hmmm , well riyu mere bhabhi
banegi toh fayda mera hi hoga . so yes Arjun : ok , so mein apni sis ko kya bulau kriya : mera naam kriya hai so aap
mujhe kriya bula sakte hai , riyu bhi
mujhe kriya hi bulati hai Arjun : ok par mein tumhe princess
bulaunga kriya : ok done bhai That's how kriya an arjun meet and came
close at just there first meet they don't
know why they felt comfy with each other
. and after each meet they came more
close day by day and there relation grow
more strong then real bro - sis relation , kriya help arjun in manofying riya and
made riya gave another chance to their
relation but riya told arjun to keep their
relation secret till she don't trust him fully
again . and then riya got promotion as
ACP due to her bravery in this case and became cheif of delhi etf and kriya also
stayed here as kyra and completed her
studies she joint police academy and was
the best cadet of her batch and she gave
credit of her achievement to her arjun
bhai and arjun was really proud on his sis . she got chance in ETF Delhi and soon
became second in command in ETF Delhi
because of her excellence in her work and
bravery and Arjun was always in touch
with them and went to meet them
whenever he got time End of fb Arjun pov I know how i felt when i saw riya in that
condition , i felt like someone stab my
heart and i know it was my mistake if i
didn't believe in shakshi's words and let
riya keep her side than she never have to
handle this much dangerous case alone and she would never have been in that
hospital in that condition but i'm happy
too because of that i've got a so sweet sis
like my princess . i know i've to do a lot of
hard work to make riya believe in me
again but all it's worth as due to this our relation has grown more strong and i just
can't wait to make you mine riyu His pov was broken by sam voice Sam : aree wah , toh tune akhir mere
behen ko pata hi liya , pta nhi usse kya
dikh gaya tujh mein Arjun: hmm , jaise tune aaisha bhabhi ko
ptaya , aur mujhe bhi nahi pta aisha ko
tujme kya dikh gaya Sam : whatever , par arjun yeh tune goa
ka plan toh banaya par iski prep hui bhi
ya nahi Arjun : toh mein konsa akele saari prep kr
raha hu , saale tu aur shree mere madad
kr rahe ho , samjhe ya samjhu Sam : tu na kabhi nhi sudhrega , help
tujhe chahiye phir bhi tu aaram se pooch
nhi sakta sidha oder de raha hai , pta
nahi mere bichari behen kaise jhelegi
tujhhe Arjun : uski chinta tu mat kr , ayr tut oh
aise bol rahahai jaise sabse bare pyaar se
poochta hai Sam : tujhse toh acche se hi poochta hu Arjun : beta itna jhoot nhi bolte ( there
argument was broken by kriya ) kriya : yaha pe kya ho raha hai ? Samjun : kuch nahi , kuch bhi nahi kriya : whatever , thank god bhai akhir
apne bhabhi ko propose kar hi diya , now
i can call her bhabhi officialy Arjun : pleasure is all mines sweetheart kriya : and yeh goa ke trip ka plan is
awesome , we will have loads of fun , love
you bhai and you are the best Sam : love you and best dono usi ko , mein
toh yaha hu hi nahi haina kriya : nahi , i love you too bhai and you
are best too Samjun : chalo ghar chalte hai , we have
to pack our stuff for trip otherwise
tumlog hi kahoge ki we didn't give you
time kriya : yeah , lets go They all went to conference room and
then to the ir respected homes . Precap : swayam and rey's pov Trip to goa and lots of fun

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