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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Pehla Nasha pehla Khumar

Once thr were two frnz...who knew eachother even begore they were born...actually thr parents were best frnz...

Now they r fashion desighners...

Girl- Besti dekho naa aapka beta parehsaan kar rha hai

Boy- Mom yeh ridhima paagal hai...beautiful aap apni beti ko dekho

Yess the girl is ridhima

Ridz- Besti yeh armaan ek dum jhoota hai...mom u only loves this idiot

Yess the boy is Armaan...and besti is armaan's mom ananya and beautiful is ridz mom Smriti

Smriti- armaan kyun meri beti koh pareshaan kar raha hai...

Armaan- mom aap humehsa basket ki side leti ho...iss jungli billi ki

Ridz- kyaa kaha

Armaan- behri ho gayi hai kyaa...jungli billi...ab samjh aya??

Ridz- dekh jyada naa bol...

Smriti- ridhima!!!

Ridz- kyaa mom dekho yeh mujhe jungli billi bula raha hai...

Suddenly a girl and boy comes they r anjali and atul

Anjali- bass akro tum dono kitna ladte ho...kaun kahega u two r bestfrnz

Atul- aur kaun kahega u two r one of teh ebst desighners...

Rahul comes

Rahul- exactly

Muskaan- dekh khotte tu hero(armaan) ko kuch mat keh

Ridz- haawww...matlab muski tune party badal li...

Anji- hwww...muski...

Ridz and anji together- dost dost naa raha...pyaar pyaar naa raha

Nikki and Abhi comes

Nikki- chup...tum logo ko drama company mai hona chiye tha kaha fashion designer ban gaye...

Abhi- leave it aaj hum bahar jaa rahe hai...monte carlo club (it exist or not i don't even know)

Muski- yeh toh vahinhai naa jo beach kai paas hai

Rahul- haan

Muski- chuchundar tu chup reh

Anji- hmm...chalo sab tayiyaar hote hai...

They gets ready and leave

As they enter in the club...the atmosphere was noisy yet romantic...fast yes peacefull...as love songs were playing...

PEHLA NASHA PEHLA KHUMAAR

NAYA PYAAR HAI NAYA INTEZAAR

(Armaan asked ridz hand for dance and she accepted it...he put his both hands on her waist and and she put her both hands on his neck...she was feeling goosebumps)

KARLU MAI APNA IZHAAR

AYE DILE BEKAAR

(Though they had been dancing like this many times bt now days it seems different...ridz was all feeling shy as armaan's intense gaze was on her continiously...and ridhima's cheeks felt her blood on them...her cheeks beacame beetroot red and she was blushing)

MERE DILE BEKARAR TU HI BATA...

PEHLA NASHA PEHLA KHUMAAR

(Armaan too was liking this...they both were realizing thr feelings as both were swaying on the tune)

USNE BAAT KI KUCH AISE DHANG SAI

SAPNE DIA GAYA VO HAZARO RANG KAI

(Armaan twirled her and then pulled her and she banged into him and was feeling really shy...armaan was lopkin atbher with all love)

AA JAU MAI JAISE MAI HAAR KAI

AUR CHUME WO MUJHE PYAAR SAI

(As her one hand was in the air due to nervousness as she was really nervous to put her hand on his shoulder...he took her hand and put them on his neck)

PEHLA NASHA PEHLA KHUMAAR...

(Armaan then took her out from the club and went outside to the beach)

Ridz suddeny was shocked due tonhis behaviour...she was askin bt he was not rplying...

Suddenly armaan stopped and sta on his knees and said...

Armaan- basket!!tum toh jaanti ho tumhara yeh idiot best frnd kitna careless hai aur usse koi sambhaal sakta hai toh tum ho...u know basket uss din jab tumhe yaha sia bahar jaana pada tab mai bohut sad ho gaya...aur mujhe realize hua I LOVE U...haan basket mai tumse pyaar karta sooo Miss Ridhima Gupta would u give me Armaan Malik the opportunity to be with u foreva...each second,each moment,each night,each eve,each morning. Every week,every day...Bolo kyaa dogi mera saath...and with this he took out a ring and asked her whicle showin it...Bolo Basket Ridhima Gupta will u marry me Armaan Malik and will become MRS. BASKET RIDHIMA ARMAAN MALIK...

Ridz was shocked tears were flowing from her eyes...she wiped them and looked at armaan with full love nad trust and to lighten the moment he said- jaldi bolo basket...mere ghutno mai dard ho raha hai...

Ridhima gave him her hand and he took and slid the rind in her index finger and kissed her hand...and ridhima she looked away as she was too shy...

Armaan stood up nad holded ridz from her waist and ridhima's hand were fidling fith its fingers and she was lookin down...

Armaan- jo mai sunna chahta hoon...vo nahi bologi...

Ridz- k..kk...kyaa...

Armaan- tumhe pata hai kya..,bol bhi do ab basket...

Ridz hugged him and hid her face in his crook of neck and said I LOVE U ARMAAN

armana too reciprocated too her hug and hid his face in her hair smelling her strawberry shampoo...

Armaan said- Oyeee hoyeee!!!

And others came (Anjali,atul,rahul,muskaa,nikki,abhi) and said- Finally DIL MIL GAYE...

With this teh OS ended...Its not ending of a chapter its the begining of thr lives...

With this I sanju took ur leave

and lets take a DMG wala leave

HUMSE HASEE

HUMSE KHUSHI

HAI HUMI SAI ZINDAGI

TAREN HUM ZAMEEN PAR LAI AYE

HUM LAYE HAI ZINDAGI

DIL JAHAN DOST WAHAN

AISA MANZAR AUR KAHAAA

HUM TOH CHALE THAI DOST BANKE

JAANE KAHA DIL MIL GAYE

HUM TOH CAHLE THAI TPDOST BANKE

JAANE KAHA

DIL MIL GAYE

LAA LAA LALA LAAL ALALAA LAA LALALA LALALLAAA

hope u like it

Do cmtn

With love

Sanju

Edited by sanjudmgian - 10 years ago

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San

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Mujhey teri zaroorat hai(os in 3 parts)

Part 1

Armaan and Riddhima were about to get married. There was 2 months left to their marriage. Both having
Different professions, didn't get time to understand eachother. It was arranged marriage for them, but knowingly rather unknowingly, it was a love marriage.

Armaan being a acp/police officer had missions, which he had to go out of station for. And riddhima being a doctor sometimes had night duty. Whenever they met, they would rather be with family or friends, never alone.

GUPTA HOUSE

Armaan and his family had came over for dinner. Riddhima was in the kitchen making dinner while armaan was outside in the lounge drinking tea and coffee with everyone.

Anjali and Atul had also come. It's been a almost one year they had been married. Malliks considered Atul as their own son even though he was adopted, but he lived separately.

KITCHEN

Riddhima was making dinner, when Nikki and Anjali came.

Ni: (sniffing) hmmm bhabzz kya ban raha hai?
Ri: rajhma chawal (rice) and hot & sour soup
Ni: wow apko pata hai bhai ko Hot and sour soup Bohot pasand hai!
An: arre pasand kaise nahin hoga? Appni to bhi wife ke hatoon ka khana har kisi ko pasand hota hai!
Ni: anji bhabzz ur right but ajj armaan bhai dinner khainge to haat mein gun ki bijaye Cupid ki arrow pakad leinge!! (Laughing and smiling evily)

Riddhima Knew what was coming so she carefully tried to slip out of the kitchen but Nikki and Anjali both held her arms.

An: arre kahan chali meri behana? Khana to banalo!
Ri: di main Bahar jari thi (fumbling)
An: ohhh but you know sister shaadi se phele itni beqarari achhi nahin hoti!!!

Nikki and Anjali giggled. While riddhima turned beetroot red.

An: acha Nikki isse chor yeh bata ke panditji ne in Dono ki
Shaadi ki date konsi final ki?
Ni: next month ki 23 ko, yani 23 February ( KSG b-day :-p)
An: hmm to ab to intezaar ki gadhi hai! Najane kab khatam hogi? (Acting dramatically, putting her one hand on her forhead)

Ni: gin gin ke Guzhar Rahin hain din aur ratein!!!
Ri: will you both shut up!!!
She was blushing very badly.

An: meri choti si ridzi ko sharam arahi hai????

She hid her face in Anjali's embrace.
While Nikki just admired her bhabzz blushed face.she sent a silent prayer to God asking him to always keep her bhai and bhabz in his protection and grant them all the happiness.

Ni: waise anji bhabzz apko nahin lagta ke in Dono ko akele mein time spend karna chaiye?
An: haan ridz she's right! Aage jaake bache hojayenge to kaise manage Karo gi with your oh-so-professional jobs?

Riddhima blushed while Nikki nudged her. They went back to making dinner and teasing riddhima to the core.

WHILE OUTSIDE

Armaan was sitting with Atul and every body else was sitting a bit away from them.

At: so yaar kaise chal raha hai
Ar: Kya
At: tere aur riddhima ke beech?
Ar: kuch nahin yaar
At: tu pagal hai be? Shaadi hai Teri usse ek mahine mein aur tum Dono ne akele mein baat tak nahin ki?
Ar: nahi yaar time hi nahin milta
At: armaan tu sach mein arranged marraige Kara hai ya tujhe usse pyar hai?
Ar: pata nahin yaar? Kar to arranged raha hoon par I'm still confused with my feelings!! Jab tere anji se shaadi hoyi thi to tujhe kaab pyar hoa?
At: hoyi to humari bhi arranged par shaadi se pehle Valentine's pe we confessed each other.
Ar: par tujhe kaise pata Chala ke tujhe usse pyar hai!
At: dhek tujhe jab kisse se pyar hota hai na to tujhe iski har cheej achi lagt hai:

Tujhe uske haat ka khana bhi acha lagta hai, which you don't even like to eat on regular basis

Tujhe uske har baat par hasi aur har zakham par dard milta hai

Tujhe woh har Surat mein achi lagti hai!!!

Tera mann karta hai ke tu har Wakt ussi ke Saat
Ghujare

Ar: (mind) khoobsurat to woh hai, khana bhi woh kamal ka banati hai!! Aur mera dil bhi karta hai ke
Main usse har pal milon!!!

Atul looked at his confused face.
At: dude tujhe riddhima se pyar hogaya hai
Ar; your right Atul I'm in
Love!!!

At; shukar hai baghwan in Dono mein se kissi ko to ehsaas hoa apne pyar kaa!
Ar: Kya matlaab?
At: matlaab ye ke riddhima bhi tujse pyar karti hai but abhi usse ehsaas nahin Hoya
Ar: really??? (Getting all excited)
At: haan yar

They kept talking but unknown to them someone had heard their conversation. It was none other than our very own riddhima!! She was shocked if armaan liked
Her than why didn't he
Tell her.

They had dinner and mallik family went back to their house.

NIGHT TIME, RIDDHIMA'S ROOM

she was leaning against the window.

Roz tera intezar hota hain,
(She remembered when she was making dinner fast so she could spend some time with him)

Roz yeh dil be-qarar hota hai
(She remembered when Nikki said she's counting days)

Kash ke tum samajh sakte ki
(She remembered about armaan confused about her)

Chup rehne walo ko bhi
Kisi se pyaar hota hain...!

FLASHBACK

At: riddhima bhi tujse pyar karti hai but abhi usse ehsaas nahin Hoya

FLASHBACK END

Ri: (mind) kya main sach mein armaan se pyar karti hoon!???

Ok guys so this was the first part of my os as its 3 shot. This os is specially on the request of Aayooo who influenced me to write one!! So Aayooo I hope you like it! Sorry correction I hope you LOVE it! Hehehehe!

Love Humaira

P.s. - sanju

Edited by sanjudmgian - 10 years ago

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San

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Mujhey teri zaroorat hai(os in 3 parts)

Part 2

NEXT DAY, SANJEEVANI

Riddhima was sitting in her cabin, reading a file.
Anjali came in.

An: ridz
Ri: haan di
An: woh mujhe mrs sharma ke baby ki reports chaiye!

Ri: ok di! Main baad mein apko dedongi!

Anjali went outside and riddhima was going to go back to her work but the phone rang.

Ri: (without looking at the caller) hello
Ar: hello riddhima!
Ri: kon?
Ar: kya baat hai humare ekk mahine mein shaadi honay wali hai aur apko abhi bhi nahi pata main kon bol raha hoon!!

Ri: armaan???
Ar: shukar hai apko mera naam to yaad hai!
Ri: nahin woh baat nahin hai, mujhe pata nahin tha ke aap abhi phone kareinge! Koi kaam tha?

Ar: ab apni honay wali biwi sey baat Karne ke liye bahana chaiye kya?

Ri: nahin Maine aisa kaab kaha!
Ar: acha ye batao kya Kari thi?
Ri: kuch nahin woh ekk patient ki report par rhi thi. Aap Kya kare thay?

Ar: (mind) tumhe yaad karha tha!!
Ri: armaaan!!!
Ar: huh! Kuch nahin woh kuch cases nipta ke aya hoon! Acha mujhe Jana hai abhi!

Ri; ok apna khayal rakiyaga!
Ar: acha suno ajj shaam ko mil sakte hain kya? Akele mein?

Ri: aaj shaam? Akele mein?
Ar: haan koi problem hai?
Ri: nahin! Shaam ko! Kahan par?
Ar: chillie's sea side restaurant!
Ri: okk! Shaam ko Milte hain!
Ar: acha theek hai!! Apna khayal rakna aur-
Ri: aur?
Ar: main tumhara intezaar karonga!

She blushed at this comment. Armaan on the other side was dreaming of her while talking.

Ri: m-mujhe Jana hai! Bye!
Ar: bye

He cut the call and whispered to their engagement picture which was on his desk in beautiful round frame: I LOVE YOU RIDDHIMA!!!

EVENING

Riddhima was getting ready when armaan called her.

Ri: hello
Ar: kitna time lagao gi??
Ri: apko kaise pata ke mein abhi ghar se nikli nahi hoon?

Ar: tume dekhne ke liye ankhon ki zaroraat nahin hai!... then he just realized what he said so he quickly added... mera matlab hai mujhe pata larkian kitna time leti hain!!

Ri (mind): ap bhi bhuddu ke bhuddu hi rahein gey! Jab itna pyar karte hain to bolte kyun nahi?

Ar: hellooo??
Ri: huh?
Ar: riddhima yaar jaldi Karo na mein kab se yaha wait Kara hoon.

Ri: main bus 20 minutes mein pohonch jaongi!
Ar: jaldi Karo mujhse aur wait nahin horaha!!!!

Riddhima blushed and said... bye!!!
Ar: bye

SOMEWHERE ELSE NEARBY...
Man: dekho ajj inspector armaan aur iski honay wali Patni chillie's seaside restaurant Jane waley hain!!

Man 2: lekin humare plan se armaan ki Patni ka kya Lena dena hai sir?

Man: hai! Lena dena hai! Hume armaan ki sabse keemti cheez chaiye aur woh hai uski honey wali Patni!!!

The man smirked.

CHILLIE'S SEASIDE

Armaan was sitting waiting. It had been 1 hour since riddhima called. Just then riddhima's number flashed.

Ar: riddhima kahan ho main kabse intezaar karha hoon!!!

Ri: armaan mujhe bacha lijye please!! Ye log mujhe mar dalen ge!!
When he heard her crying voice he panicked.

Ar: riddhima kahan ho tum- tum mujhe batao kon mare ga tumhe?

Just then the man snatched the phone from riddhima and said...

Tck...tck... armaan intna besaabra kyun hota hai! Teri honey wali biwi bilkul theek hai aur main iska Bohot khayal rakhra hoon! Pareshaan honey ki koi zaroorat nahi hai!

Ar: tu jo bhi hai, main tujhe chooronga nahi! Ekk baat mere haat mein to aa! Tera woh haal karonga ke tujhe Khud ki bhi pehchan nahi ayegi! Teri himmat kaise hoyi meri biwi ko haat lagane ki?

Man: tck... tck... armaan, armaan, armaan! Kaise bhool sakte ho ke mein kitni himmat tak ja sakta hoon! Shayed tumhe yaad nahi!!

Ar: kaun hai tu?
Man: chalo achi baat hai tumhe main yaad nahin hoon lekin Maine tumse wada kiya tha ke
Main zindagi mein kabhi na kabhi tere se Tera Sara kuch cheen longa!!

With that the call ended.
Armaan's eyes were swimming of tears.
He called Atul as fast as he could. Atul came and armaan told him everything.

GUPTA HOUSE

Armaan and Atul came and were surprised to find everybody there.

Ananya: arre armaan aa na! Dhek kitni achi sarees humne riddhima ke liye select ki hain?

Billy: armaan riddhima kahan hai? Woh Teri Saat thi na?

Tension was spreading across the house.
This time Anjali asked...

Armaan riddhima kahan hai! Usse kya hoa hai!

At: riddhima ko kisi nai kidnap karliya hai! (Atul said in a chocked voice)

Padma: nahi aisa nahin hosakta!!!

Her eyes started to swim with tears.

Ar: I'm sorry Aunty! Main- main Bohot bura hoon!! Main har kissi ki jan bacha leta hoon lekin riddhima ki nahi bachapaya!! Main Bohot bura hoon!!!

Shashank came foward and hugged armaan tightly while he had tears too.

Sh: armaan beta chup hojao! Ismein tumhari koi galti nahin hai!!!

Padma and ananya were crying very badly...

SOMEWHERE ELSE...

Riddhima was tied to a chair. Her mouth was covered with cloth and her hands and feet were tied with a cloth also.

Time was passing by and she was remembering her conversation with armaan this morning.

Ri (mind): armaan kahan hai app! Mujhe apki zaroorat hai! Yahan se leyjayi mujhe!! Mujhe nahi rehna yahan!

Tears were flowing out of her eyes.

Man: tck... tck... udhar armaan besaabra aur idhaar tum!!! Use to khawab bhi nahi aati ke Maine tumhe kidnap kiya hai!

FLASHBACK

Riddhima got out of the car and proceeded towards the restaurant but someone pulled her and tied a cloth on her eyes.

FLASHBACK END

GUPTA MANSION

At: armaan humein ridzi ke call trace ki hai! Abhi woh highway 17 ke Kareeb hai!

Ar: oh no!! Highway 17! Wahan to jheel hai!! Kahin woh riddhima ko-

Bi: armaan!!! Shub shub bolo!!! Aur ja jaakee dhoond!

Armaan and Atul sat into the car and drove of!!

Zaroorat from Ek Villain
Singer: mustafa zahid
Lyrics: mithoon

Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye
Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiyein
Kyun rooh meri ye sahe
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Hardum ye keh raha hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai (x2)

Andheron se tha mera rishta bada
Tune hi ujaalon se waaqif kiya
Ab lauta main hoon inn andheron mein phir
Toh paaya hai khud ko begaana yahaan
Tanhaayi bhi mujhse khafaa ho gayi
Banjaron ne bhi thukra diya
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Khud par hi ik sazaa hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

Hmm.. tere jism ki woh khushbuein
Ab bhi inn saanson mein zinda hai
Mujhe ho rahi inse ghutan
Mere gale ka ye phanda hai
Aaa..

Ho.. tere choodiyon ki woh khanak
Yaadon ke kamre mein goonje hai
Sunkar isey aata hai yaad
Haathon mein mere zanjeerin hain
Tuhi aake inko nikaal zaraa
Kar mujhe yahaan se rihaa
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Ye sadaayein de rahaa hoon (sadaayein: awaaz)
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

Love Humaira (mairu or humzz)
Ok soo this was part 2!!! Ik it was intense but thoda action and Drama bhi to hona chaiye na? Kyun?
Next part will be the last one!!! Hope you love this part as Maine isper Bohot mehnat ki hai!!!!
Criticism is accepted as always!!!
AND Aayooo this is OS is specially dedicated to You!!!! And others also plz read and comment!!! Now enough of my baqwas and enjoy the part!!!

Edited by sanjudmgian - 10 years ago

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Hey,

Nice OS

Loved both,

Thanks for the PM

Take care...😊

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

amazing one
miss kajen so much

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San

@slippedaffairs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: SanKsgian
amazing one
miss kajen so much

thnx...mee too miss them

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San

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Jess2014
Hey,
Nice OS
Loved both,

Thanks for the PM

Take care...😊

hey hii

thnx

glad u loved both

welcm

with love

sanju

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

helllo i know i know i m late but i was busy ok you know the reason too exam Both the os nd ts are absolutely awesome
os is really cute best friend turn loved ar cute fights
the gang scene is fun to read
loved how armaan proposed ridhz
the words r beautiful
this os is really Sweet cute nd lovely
loved
humera ts is also though i already read it but it's amazing
loved the concept
armaan his love nd ridhz shying its beautiful loved it
wonderfully written
i know comment short h but adjuat karna padega thode din ki baat h
okay now gotta go
bye tc see u
love u

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San

@slippedaffairs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: palakajenian
helllo i know i know i m late but i was busy ok you know the reason too exam Both the os nd ts are absolutely awesome
os is really cute best friend turn loved ar cute fights
the gang scene is fun to read
loved how armaan proposed ridhz
the words r beautiful
this os is really Sweet cute nd lovely
loved
humera ts is also though i already read it but it's amazing
loved the concept
armaan his love nd ridhz shying its beautiful loved it
wonderfully written
i know comment short h but adjuat karna padega thode din ki baat h
okay now gotta go
bye tc see u
love u

hello..noo u r not late...

glad u liked them and loved them both...

love u tooo

bee

seeyaa

all the best for exams ani know u will rock...

with love

sanju

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

lol you just update after my comment its called hit nd miss
acha next part also posted its as always superb loved armaan asked ridhz for a date
awesome part loved it continue soon