NIBIR OS-LET OUR LOVE BEGINS (updated)

Posted: 10 years ago
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hello girlz...ufffs can i call everyone cousins...okay i am aishu guys...i recently i mean i am watching nisha and kabirs duo from the beginning and i loved it to the crore...i am a silent reader of this forum...today i wanna join with u galz...so i thought of writing an OS on behalf of myself...

so will u want me to continue????
OKAY HERE IS THE TEASER





NIBIRIANS OS-LET OUR LOVE BEGIN



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Edited by ashlok - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This os is based on the true love of nibir...and i am sarting it with the POV of Nisha,Kabir,Viraj...hope u guys will love it...plz do comment..its my first work in this forum....


From My Heart

A million stars up in the sky
one shines brighter I can't deny
A love so precious a love so true
a love that comes from me to you
The angels sing when you are near
within your arms I have nothing to fear
You always know just what to say
just talking to you makes my day
I love you honey with all of my heart
together forever and never to apart

NISHA


Days are growing older but I wish I could grow older with you kabir...whenever I tried to express my feelings...u seems to be far away from me...ur thoughts are only revolving around London dance school...maaa u told me that kabir will realize his love with time but time and fate had already thrown me down to the bush...bushes with thorns...they are piercing my heart...u are going kabir...away from me...far away from my love...plz come back kabir...i cant bear this pain...the pain of love...I wish I could scream and announce the world that I LOVE YOU...but I am worried what if u part away...


VIRAJ


Ms.Nisha soon u will be mine...soon our true love will unite...kabir is leaving us nisha...i think fate has favoured me...i wont hurt you nisha...I wont hurt you forever...i will give u whatever u want...ur happiness mean precious to me...just come to me...i am always there for you...my love will do everything for you...



KABIR


I never thought that I will land in INDIA...and getting married never existed in my dictionary...but I got married to you nisha...I day I realized I had fallen for you...i was in heaven...but only for a while...I know nisha u don't love me...and day by day I am falling madly in love with you...i am scared nisha...what if u reject my love...I wont be able to resist...i am leaving nisha for the sake of your happiness...for u not for me...i know nisha my soul will be with you in INDIA but I will do anything for ur sweet smile...I LOVE YOU NISHA...I LOVE U FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART...I wish this 3 months will never end...but now I am ending it myself for ur peace...



Only 2 months has passed in their marriage love but the bond seems stronger for more seven births...Nisha never belived in love neither in marriage magic nor in soulmate...but luckily she got a husband who cares for her...unlike Viraj who is Nishas first lover...kabir used to bring smile on her face by crook or hook...the mere thought of him makes her smile...a wonderful soulmate he is...but now he is leaving her...the tears are streaming from her eyes...she is getting hurt again...firstly byViraj and now by Kabir...but one thing is true when Viraj rejected her...she had the courage to handle herself...but she feels a part of her is being taken force fully...her love is betraying her...KABIR...she breathed a deep breathe...trying to pull the hurtful memories away...but she failed...tomorrow morning he is leaving...she looked at Kabir who is sleeping peacefully next to her...the pillows which she had placed seems laughing at her...

Kabir...even though he tried hard to become a bad son-in-law...he cant...because he is truly a lovely person...now her family respects him more than she do...she thought about their past...how Kabir helped her in revealing Sumits dirty deeds...and how he helped to unite Dolly and Saurabh...fianllly now Dolly and Saurabh have become DOSA...she laughed at that thought...her dance with Kabir flashed in her mind...how close they were...they were about to KISS...LIP TO LIP...she giggled...

"Arey nisha...why are you laughing at this hour like a ghost...let me sleep yaar...ohhh madam I think you are happy that I am leaving...so that you can sleep on the full bed"...the word leaving prickled her heart...she forced to smile...but the thought of sleeping alone without Kabir scared...but even she is scared of telling her love...specially after knowing that he is shifting from here to there...she heard him talking over the phone saying to the manager of dance school that he is unmarried...what does it mean...thats clear that he don't love him...but she wants atleast a hug from him...how????

"ahhh...chipkali...chipkali...lizzz...lizard Kabir" she screamed and hugged him tight controlling her waves of emotions..."what happened Nisha??? Where",Kabir too panicked...she hugged him tight as she could not let him go...thought of never letting his hands go...then she parted herself from him and said,"actually I saw...a lizard over there"...she finished at last...

The next morning welcomed both of them with the sound of alarm...Nisha waked up and saw Kabir getting dressed to go to airport...she made a soft mourn...and gets out to the bathroom to shed some tears..."Nisha...i am going nisha...do u wanna come to airport"...Nisha protests as she wont be able to see him leaving her away..."okay so bye...whenever u comes to London don't forget to call me", he said and gave her a bread-jam-butter hug, which he gave some days ago..."Bye",,,,she said in a low voice...

Kabir sits on the taxi and seems to lost in his own thoughts...ahhh yes I am coming to London with my wife...so make sure you make all the arrangements fine...right??? talk to you later...when he realized his love for NIsha he was about to propose her and to take her along with him...but before he plans...fate plans another to him...he saw Viraj at the door..."come in Bhai..."...he stepped in and said "Kabir I need to talk to you about Nisha...you are being stubborn Kabir...she loves me...today she told her by herself...plz let nisha be happy"...Kabir was shocked "no Bhai...u r mistaken..." "No...Kabir ...think by yourself...whenever I skipped my treatments Nisha used to come for me...that means she loves me and cares for me...am I right???...u cant hide the truth Kabir...accept it"

Now he is going far away from NIsha as she wants her to be happy...He cant hurt her...even though the thought of going away hurts him...he is ready to bear any pain for her...

Nisha was still weeping like a kid...her nose and eyes are red...and she is in a total mess...her phone ringed and she finds Saurabhs number flashing on screen...she answered.."hello" "hi Nisha...what are u doing" "nothing...as much" "Nisha tell me the truth...u r disturbed...are u crying.." " No yaarr...why I should..." "nisha tell me whats happening..." she told him everything from the beginning... "Are u mad Nisha instead of bursting ur emotions with Kabir u r bursting into tears...just go to the airport and tell him..."...she nodded and said "yes"

Kabir was still in thought..."arey duffer...where are you..." He heard Nishas voice and find herself in the airport..."what are u doing here Nisha..." "I want to talk to you"..."but I am getting late for the flight"...she stepped towards him and came closer...each of them can feel others breathe...their fragrance mixed...when she initialized their kiss...firstly the kiss was gentle but then it became aggressive...deeper...their love...can be seen...the passion for eachother...at that moment Nisha and Kabir finds many answers for their unasked question...

Now the whole world knows that KABIR AND NISHA LOVES EACH OTHER



galz plzzz do commenttt...do u want me to cont with writing

Edited by ashlok - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds interesting.👍🏼 plz do continue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice 😊 Do continue :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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good start.. update soon👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Aishu..welcome to the forum...!!!
Please do continue with OS.. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Aishu
Welcome to the forum
Ofcourse you can call us cousins
The teaser sounds great can't wait for the OS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yooohoo one moe nibir fan
welcome to the forum !!
Waiting for the OS
Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: niki2

Sounds interesting.👍🏼 plz do continue...

thanks alot dear...i am writing will post it in an hour
Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NAUCholic

Nice 😊 Do continue :-)

thanks 4 d support dear
will write ASAP

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