SS - In Love with You(IshRa) Chptr 7Contd.New part Pg.9 22nd May '15

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Hi People. Decided to pen a TS after I got some excellent comments for my OS Blush Blush.

This one is basically my take of the scene from the show itself where after Adi refused to dance with Raman at Shagun's Sangeet ceremony , Ishita leads Raman to the stage and they have a romantic dance. I am going to completely avoid the "Ishita getting arrested" drama and explore how things proceed from there between Raman & Ishita . The first chapter below is more of Raman's POV. Please note that I am not attempting to rewrite the epic Kya' , "aap hi boldo" scene. This one's going to be less of a gush fest for now.

INDEX

Chptr.1 - Pg.1

Chptr.2 - Pg.2

Chptr.3,4 & 5 - Pg.4

Chptr.6 - Pg.6

Chptr.7 - Pg.8

Chptr.7 Contd - Pg.9

Chapter - 1

Raman found himself a quiet corner in the party hall ,to catch his breath and take stock of what had just happened in the last 10 mins. Yes he was mighty disappointed when his own son had refused to share a stage with him. But before that disappointment could start hurting , he had seen his lovely wife walking towards him . Her confident stride and ravishing smile told him that she was definitely up to something and as if on cue Mihir's voice boomed on the mic announcing gleefully that Raman & Ishita will now perform on the lovely song Manwa Laage . Even before he processed this information inside his head , she had taken his hand and led him on to the stage, all the while keeping her eyes fixed on his. He was trying to read the exact emotion in her eyes but the opening beats of the song kind of jolted him back. He saw her starting to lip sync to the melodious voice of Shreya Ghoshal and move around gracefully. He realized that he himself had started to move rhythmically and it surprised him that it was happening without a lot of conscious effort. His heart was thundering as if in competition with the beats of the song . He swirled her ,back- hugged her, turned her around took 2 steps back, pulled her on to him and every time her body came in contact with his, he had involuntarily breathed in her scent and reveled in her warmth. For an onlooker it would have looked like he was taking the lead all throughout but only he knew that she was the one who was leading him with her eyes. The song ended with him holding her in a protective embrace, his head lifted up and her forehead touching the base of his neck. They were breathing heard by now but in sync with each other. The sound of the loud applause and hoots from the crowd brought them back to reality. They bowed down to the audience and got off the stage.

He was slightly disappointed that she had immediately walked over and joined their family without sparing a few minutes to talk to him or to even look at him. He saw Mihir, Mihika and Simi talking excitedly to her but unfortunately from where he was standing, he couldn't see her face. He himself was now surrounded by friends and other guests who were complementing him on their wonderful and sensuous performance. From the corner of his eye he saw Ruhi running to her Ishima , hugging her tight and showering kisses on her. He felt a strange kind of warmth spread across his body and it was so overwhelming that he felt himself welling up a little. Ruhi now ran to him excitedly. He picked her up ,kissed her forehead and held her in a tight embrace unaware that Ruhi's Ishima was now watching the father daughter duo , the same kind of emotions wreaking havoc inside her. Ruhi wiggled out of his embrace now, wanting to play with other kids. Raman realized he needed to be alone with Ishita right now , the party was the last thing he cared about. He wanted to go home now and talk to her . He took a step towards her and then immediately decided otherwise . What exactly was he going to talk to her? He felt so many emotions swirling inside himself ,denting the initial excitement a little bit. He needed to clear his head first and that's when he decided to find a quiet corner and do some soul searching .

Yes he had taken a lot of impulsive decisions in his life and had borne the brunt of those decisions as well. But his relationship with Ishita is now too precious and any decision related to that could not be taken on an impulse. He had been thinking for a few weeks now about his growing feelings for her. He had questioned and cross questioned himself repeatedly in a bid to find out his true feelings for her. He had imagined every possible hardship coming their way and asked himself whether he would stand by her. He didn't find it difficult to answer his own questions. He knew that he would stand by her no matter what .He still chose to do this rigorous soul searching because he had hurt her , insulted her, disappointed her many times in the past. He had acted like a complete jerk misunderstanding her relationship with Mani. The presence of Mani in her life and his own reaction towards their friendship had served as an eye opener to him. But his jealousy and past experience had gotten the better of him and blinded him to such an extent that instead of accepting his feelings for her and confessing the same he had accused her of having an affair with Mani . Enough was enough. He can't afford to make any more mistakes. He doesn't even know whether she has it in her to forgive him for all the hurt and pain he had caused her. Today when she took his hand to lead him to the stage what he saw in her eyes was a mixture of different emotions - a sense of ownership over him which is her right as his wife, tender loving care and just a spark of something else which she was trying hard not to show. This was all the boost he needed and he decided he will talk to her tonight as soon as they can get out of this place. He will have to choose his words carefully but he knew he didn't need a script. He would know what to speak when he faces her. But in all this excitement he was also quick to warn himself to be prepared for any disappointment. She may not be ready to move ahead and if that was the case he was ready to accept it and give her all the time in the world. With this last thought on his mind , he walked into the crowd to find her.

Thanks for reading . The second chapter will be out in a while.

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Awesum strt...beautifully written! Looking forward for the next part! Wonder how raman will strt up the conversation with ishita!

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Hello People .I am back with the second but not the final part.I am unable to wrap this up in 2 chapters. And at this point in time not sure how many chapters this will run into. Please read and share your comments.
Chapter -2

Ishita was now surrounded by Mihir ,Mihika and Simi, their teasing comments causing her cheeks to colour a little. Mihir was literally gushing over his bhaabhi pretending to side line Mihika. "Wah bhaabhi , aaj toh aapne stage pe aag laga di". This earned a playful slap on his shoulder from Ishita and before she could stop herself the words were out of her mouth. " haan haan aag toh lagni hi this, petrol Jo saath main tha"(Borrowed this line from the movie Mann).
"Kya kaha bhaabhi apne". Luckily the loud music in the background had drowned out her words and Mihir didn't quiet catch what she said. Ishita tried to cover up " kuch nahi, waise tumhare bhai bhi kuch kam nahi the. Waise bade CEO bann ke phirte hai par ab mujhe lagta hai ki woh chup chup ke Bollywood gaane ke dance steps practise karte hai". All of them burst out laughing trying to imagine that.
Just then Ishita's phone started buzzing. She saw Vandita's name flashing on the screen and decided to step out of the hall to take the call. Vandita couldn't contain her excitement ." Ishu I heard you & Raman set the stage on fire ".
" Akka kisne diya aapko yeh breaking news. Zaroor us Mihika ki bachchi ne diya hoga".
"Waise ek baat bata Ishu , aise performance tum dono sirf stage pe dete ho ya bedroom mein bhi..hmm..you know?"
Ishita was scandalised."Shut up Akka yeh pooch ne ke liye call kiya aapne? I think your pregnancy hormones are acting up. You should rest". Vandita started giggling at the other end.

While the Iyer sisters were engrossed in their conversation, Raman was frantically searching for Ishita inside the hall. A few minutes later when Ishita stepped back into the hall after hanging up she caught sight of Raman. It looked like he was searching for someone. She quietly made her way towards him and tapped him lightly on the shoulder. When he turned around she was quick to ask " aap mujhe dhoond rahe the?" fully prepared to hear one of those Raavan Kumar wala taunts. He did not smile but she had noticed his face relaxing the moment he saw her. And to her surprise he answered her question straight & simple " haan tumhe hi dhoondh raha tha". Ishita thought to herself "yeh ho kya gaya hai Raman ko , Raavan Kumar ka bhoot utar gaya kya?" Raman kept gazing into her eyes making her a tad uncomfortable. She cleared her throat and asked him "kya hua Raman ? Sab theek toh hai na?". He replied immediately " Sab theek hai Ishita ..its just that I want to ...I mean we need to talk..par yahan nahi". Her mind started racing now " itna urgent kya baat ho sakta hai". Seeing her tense up like that he put his hand on her shoulder and said "ghabrane wali koyi baat nahi hai. Bus hamara baat karna zaroori hai lekin is bheed mein nahi." She relaxed a little now. He continued "Simi ne Ruhi ko khana khila diya hai aur Romi aa raha hai dono ko ghar leke jaane ke liye". Ishita was really curious now. " toh hum kaha jaa rahe hai Raman?" She asked him.
"Ek jaga hai jahan hum araam se baith ke baat kar sakte hai. Zyada door nahi hai yahan se. Baat ho jaane ke baad hum bhi ghar chale jaayenge.Tum abhi fataafat khan khalo aur Ruhi ko goodnight bol do. She is very sleepy and getting all cranky to go home.Maine ghar par bhi sab ko bol diya hai ki hum dono long drive par jaa rahe hai aur late lautenge".
" Raman mujhe bhook nahi hai , aap kha lo tab tak main Ruhi ko dekh kar aati hoon" saying this she walked off to check on Ruhi.Food was the last thing on her mind now. Ruhi was already sleeping in Simmi's arms . Romi had also reached by then and they were ready to go. Simmi was bursting to say something but she chose to keep quiet seeing the serious expression on Raman's face..however before they left she managed to wish Ishita a very Happy looong drive! ! Ishita wasn't amused. Her heart was thundering insider her chest.

As soon as they left , Ishita heard Raman say he is not hungry either. He turned to look at her and said "chalein?". Ishita nodded wordlessly. They said bye to everyone and started walking towards their car. Raman felt more relaxed now as his Madrasan has readily agreed to go with him without her usual barrage of questions.He took that as a positive sign. They got in the car and he turned on the ignition , slowly easing the car out of the parking.A little while ago when he had made up his mind to talk to her, he also realised that he didn't want to do this at home. If things were to go horribly wrong , Ishita will move to her couch, turn around and pretend to sleep putting an end to their conversation. He needed more time with her and it didn't take him long to finalize the place. He decided to take her to their company guest house which was around 10 kms away. It was a secluded place away from the hustle & bustle of the city. The property itself was situated on a hill top and the backyard of the house overlooked a lovely expanse of lush green trees.He had been there a few times with some of his clients and had loved that place instantly. With the moon shining brightly tonight he knew the place would look ethreal.He turned to look at Ishita , who was now completely engrossed in her thoughts and also a little nervous. He didn't want to talk until they reached their destination. He wanted her to relax.

Ishita was trying her best to relax and keep her calm.Her mind had started racing as soon as they got inside the car. She was not so naive to not understand what this was all about. In fact she had been quicker than Raman to understand the change in their equation. She had fought those feelings initially with all her might. Inspite of the hurt & pain Raman had caused her she was quick to recover . Some of the hurtful words he had hurled at her in his blinding fury had opened up some of her old wounds which she thought had healed. And some of his playful taunts albeit in jest had fuelled her insecurities. Her mind had warned her many times in the past that she is a self respecting individual and a very average human being who could only take so much of pain & rejection in life. She still chose to rise above all this because somewhere deep down she knew that Raman could never hurt her deliberatly. In a way they both were victims of circumstances. With this thought in mind a few days back she had decided to just go with the flow taking each day as it comes.No , she will not deliberately try to strangle her growing feelings for him. She had decided to give life one more chance.A strange sense of comfort had trickled into their relationship now putting her mind at ease. The only threat to her peace of mind off late had been her growing physical attraction towards him and more often than not she had seen the same spark reflected in his eyes.Oops! Her mind warned her not to explore that dangerous territory now. Raavan Kumar ko kya pata what that dance performance did to her a while back. She came out of her reverie now and realised they were on a deserted stretch of road.Her mind was still restless. She decided to give one last try to calm her mind. She took a deep breath and decided to analyze the best & worst case scenario. What is the worst thing that can happen? Well , Raman might give me a rude reminder that the whole world might think they are a much in love couple after their sensational dance performance. But for him she will always be Ruhi's Ishima and nothing more. Now that would be devastating, she felt her heart sinking at that thought. Chuck it!
And what is the best thing that can happen. What if he says he is In Love With You???? Ayyo Murugan!!!!

Thanks for reading !! Will continue soon.



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Awesum strt...beautifully written! Looking forward for the next part! Wonder how raman will strt up the conversation with ishita!

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Nice update.
Waiting for their conversation in the next update.

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