Vibharth OS- Vo barsaat ki raat

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It was raining heavily and people were running here and there for cover. But the rains were not affecting her, nor the chaos of people.
She was lost in her thoughts and suddenly a speeding car started coming towards her. She was so lost that she did not even see the car but as soon as the car came closer to her someone pulled her from behind and they both fell on the other side of the road.

Vibha Mam, Aap thik to hai na? Aap ka dhyaan kaha tha? said parth.
Kuch nahi parth bas mera dhyaan nahi tha aur maine gaadi nahi dekhi. I am sorry. Thanks tumne muje bacha liya.

Parth: Par mam aapko dhyaan rakhna chahiye agar aapko kuch ho jata to? Agar main time pe na aata to kuch bi ho sakta tha.
Vibha: I am sorry.
Parth angrily: Sorry bolne se kya hota hai. Aap itni badi hokar bi road pe dhyan se nahi chalti hai. Aap janti hai agar aap kuch ho jata to aapki family ka kya hota hai, School ka kya hota aur mera kya... Parth just realised what he was about to say and stopped.
Vibha looked surprised on this statement. Parth could no longer see her eye to eye and started looking here and there to avoid eye contact.

They wanted to go back to school but it was raining very heavily.
So they decided to wait on a tea stall and have some hot tea.

Vibha taking a sip from her glass asked parth aur exam ke preparations kaise chal rahe hai?
Parth: Acche chal rahe hai mam.
Vibha: Tum itni raat ko school ke bahar kya kar rahe ho?
Parth: Mam, school ka phone kharab ho gaya tha to main bahar aaya tha phone karne ke liye.
Kamini mam ne muje permission di thi.
Vibha: Ok.
Afte a small pause Parth asked vibha, mam kya aapko baarish pasand hai?
Vibha: Ha kyun?
Parth: Aap baarish ko dekhkar muskura rahi thi isliye muje aisa laga.
Vibha: Ha muje baarish bahut pasand hai. Aur tumhe?
Parth: Nahi muje baarish itni pasand nahi.
Vibha: Tum ladke hote hi aise ho.
Parth: Aise matlab?
Akdu aur stupid, said vibha jokingly.
Parth: Mam par aap ladkiyaan bi kuch kam nahi hoti.
Vibha: Kya matlab hai tumhara?
Parth: Yahi ki ladkiyan bahut hi fool hoti hai
Vibha raised an eyebrow
Parth: I mean emotional fool. Baarish dekhkar khush ho jati hai strange.
Vibha: Nahi parth, baat baarish ki nahi hai baat hai khush hone ki vajah ki.
Zindagi me hume inhi chote chote palon me khushiyan dhundni chahiye. Inse hume zindagi me aage badhne aur ladne ki himmat milti hai.
Parth was staring at vibha. She was looking very beautiful in her blue colour salwar kameez and silver earrings.

Parth trying hard not to look at her that way and to avoid this awkwardness said, mam aap se baat karke muje hamesha bahut accha lagta hai.
App ki aur hamari age me jayda difference nahi hai phir bi aap kitni mature hai. Kash main bi aapki tarah...
Vibha stopped parth before he could complete his sentence, Nahi parth I wish kabi tumhe vo sab face na karna pade jo muje karna pad raha hai.
Main chahti hu ki tum sab, warrior high ke saare students hamesha khush raho aur tum sabki saari wishes puri ho jaye.

This left parth awestruck for Vibha. She is really sweet and she cares for everyone. She is so like my mom. She bears with my step father and cares for him even he is not worth of that. I always wanted a girl like her in my life.
But she is my teacher and I should not develop such feelings for her. But is liking someone who is so good at heart is wrong?
Parth was stuck in the dilemma of his own feelings while Vibha kept looking at rain and smiling.


Hello guys, well this is my first attempt of writing something and I know it has not come out that well but I felt like sharing it with u all.
So i am all ears for ur comments, criticism and suggestions. So do tell me.
Thanks for reading...

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ankusanu thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful..
Jst loved it...
U hv written it so nicely..
Plz do continue..n update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc dr... its good...
u know the dialogues of veebha jst seems so real as in the show...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing..
Loved it !!!
U write soo well
do write more😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow..loved it..
u did a good job.. 😊..please write more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice sneha next time i want vibharth confession scene
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os sneha.😳😳.keep updating..gud job 👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u so much guys for all d appreciation. i will definitely try to write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Susi_sneha_fan

Nice sneha next time i want vibharth confession scene

yaa confession scene is a gud idea. i ll try to write one.
Edited by snehaHCAPK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It is beautiful 👏 Do write more❤️

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