MaNan SS- Diary Of Nandini Manik Malhotra (2nd chap updated) pg 2

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NANDINI'S POV :
" i'm nandini murthy or should i say nandini manik malhotra, wife of great business tycon as well as the biggest musician of india. yes, im married . 2 saal hogaye ha humari shadi ko, in do saalo me najane kitni bar humara breakup-patch hua ha. kitne baar ma gussa hoke chachi ke ghar chali gayi aur mere pati akar mujhe lekar gaya ha. in sab nokh jhok k bawajud bhi um blessed to have him, my husband, mera monkey manik.
Sadu hai, angry young man ha but hes nothing but best... anything i could ask for. jab jab gussa karta ha, tab tab akar sorry bolkar manata ha chahe uski galti ho ya meri woh mujhe udas nahi dekh sakta. har sunday subhah se raat tak mere sath rehta ha, meri har din uska chehra dekkar hota ha aur har raat... well you know what i mean...
Manik ke anese se pehle main bass ek aam ladki thi, manglore se akhome kuch sapne lekar mumbai jaise bare sheher mein kadam rakha tha. apne bhai rishab ka ilaj, parhai , mera career yeh sab kaise hoga kuch nahi janti thi.. par jab manik aya esa laga ke zindagi kitni haseen ha, bas mane abtak usse theek se dekha nahi.
zindagi ke kuch haseen pal mane beetaye hai manik ke sath. shayed kabhi agar meri yeh diary manik parega toa sabse pehle blush karega aur kahega nandini, ur impossible..aur phir bolega i love you... aur mujhe pata ha ke tum yeh kabhi na kabhi paroge zarur... "

PEHLI MULAKAT
meri aur manik ki mulakat, kya kahu ? hum kya pura college yaad rakhega.
FLASHBACK
nandu=excuse me , principals office ?
girl=new girl ??
nandu=yes.. stairs lekar first right first door
nandu(smiing)=thanks
after nandu leaves girl gives high five to a boy
boy=mukti... pehlehi din usse boys loo bhej dia
mukti=cabir, ab freshers ha aur woh bhi itni behenji so..thora maza toa lena parega na...
cabir=so true, aur itni sidhi sadhi, excuse me please ... truly lol. wase druv ? manik kaha ha ???
druv=manik library me ha, guitar strings change karraha ha..
mukti=manik aur uska guitar
aliya=its his life..woh apni life se zyada guitar ko pyar karta ha
cabir=i know, par dekhlena ek din esa koi ayega jo manik keliye uske guitar se zyada important hoga...
staircase
nandini was walking according to mukti's instruction. from the opposite side a tall handsome guy was coming with guitar on his back and looking at his watch. Both crashed to eachother. nandini dropped her bag and hit her forehead to manik's chest.
nandu=ouch, akhen ha ya button. dekke nahi chalsakte.mera bag gira diya
manik glared at nandu but she was too busy calling her ayippa she didnt notice her glare.
m=same dialogue main tumse bhi kehsakta hu ms. ayippa
nandu hearing ms ayippa looked up and saw manik standing , his hands crossed around his chest. she took her bag and stood up
n=excuse me, mera name ms ayippa nahi ms nandini murthi ha samjhe ??
m=as if i care ?? ms ayippa
n=what ?? tumhe samajh nahi ata...
m=nahi, jaise tumhe dikhai nahi deta, wase dikhai dega kaise... tum toa
manik indicated she was short, seeing this nandini made a angry look with her regular pout face. manik smirked seeing her chubby face
n=tumse zyada ziddi aur sadu maine kabhi pehle nahi dekha
m=what sadu????? ma???
n=yes !! mr sadu
m=listen you..
n=pehle tum meri baat suno, mera bohot sara tym pehlehi kharap hochuka ha tumhari bakwas sunke.. mujhe principal se milna ha so please let me go
nandu didnt let him say anything and began to walk. manik holded her arm and pulled her back
n=what the.. how dare you
m=tumhe princi se milna ha???
n=haa.
m=wrong direction, second floor end of corrider
n=aur tumhe kyu lagta ha ke ma tumhari baat believe karungi ?? mujhe rasta pata ha samjhe ?? mujhe tumhari help nahi chahiye
m=are par
without letting him finish nandu started to walk , manik made a face
m=mujhe stubborn kehti ha khud kya ha ?? aur yeh waha kaha jarahiha.. zarur cabir ya mukti ne wrong direction diya hoga..
nandu took the right turn and opened the door of the room.. and what she saw made her go mad, shocked. boys standing, in bare chest. nandu closed her eyes and ran from there.. she came back to the corrider and again crashed to manik. this time her eyes were closed and her face hidden with her hands. manik smiled looking her.
m=kya hua ?? ms ayippa?? princi se mili ???
nandini slowly moved her hands and opened her eyes and found manik smirking at her
n=woh...actually...waha
m=pehlehi din mens loo... not a good place to begin
n=woh neeche mujhe...
m=ragging thi tumhare jisme tum barabar pass hui i must say
nandu was feeling to cry, she was so embaressed, looking here and there. manik understood it was uneasy for her
m=listen its ok, kuch nahi hua. chill.
nandu looked around and saw students were standing and watching them. manik glared at them and they left
m=chalo, ill take u to princi's office
nandu nodded and both began to walk together to princi's office
m=im manik
manik started the convo and forwded his hand, nandu looked at him and then at his hand. thinking for a moment she shook her hand with him
n=nandini, nyc to meet u
m=same, new to this college ??
n=hmmm... aj first day ha
m=its not hard to guess that
n=wase, um sorry... i was
m=its ok... hojata ha aur wasebhi ek tarah se acha hua
n=kya accha hua???
m=first meeting humari ekdam alag aur hatke thi... humesha yaad rahegi, hum ko aur college me sabko
FLASHBACK ENDS
sahi kaha tha manik ne, ekdam alag thi humari mulakat ... ajbhi mujhe yaad ha, jab pehli baar mane manik ko dekha tha, black shirt white coat aur uske hath me guitar... mera angry young man


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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful update ...do continue soon...i love the concept 😛
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it was soo cute..
plz cont soon
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concept was fab... loved it...! so sweet update... continue soon
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Wow Manik helped her
Miss stubborn meets Mr. Stubborn
Good start
I hope you write more in english my hindi is so bad 😔
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beautiful concept...loved it..pls continue soon..take care
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Chapter 2

Nandini's pov
hmm.. college to join karliya, ab parhai ke sath sath project aur exams ki tayyariya bhi zaruri thi. ayippa ne ekdam sahi tarah se mujhe aur manik ko presentation ka partner banaya. The manik malhotra and me. wase is beech me ek cheeze accha hua, chachi ko unka man pasand damad mil gaya. lol, meri chachi.. ek num shahrukh ki fan aur total bollywood obsessed. manik ko dekhtehi unke man me mere aur manik ka future jag utha... manik ka mere gharme pehla dinner kafi accha tha

FIRST PRESENTATION TOGETHER

Space Academy. manik and nandini were walking together in the library
n=manik, what will we do ?? we have to think of a great music concert were investors will be eager to spend their money on it, moreover we have to think of our given money and our profit
m=nandini, why are you being so much panick?? main hoo na.. hojayega. tum mere ghar chalo. sath me planning karte ha aur report banate ha.
n=tumhare ghar ??
nandini was a bit uncomfort with his sudden proposal.
m=ha.. kyu?? koi problem ha ???
nandini was looking here and there, up and down . not knowing how to say no to him
m=agar koi problem ha to kehsakti ho.
n=manik woh, ese kisi ladke ke ghar mein.. i mean chachi kya sochegi.. aur late hojayega
m=okk i understand... its okay
n=manik mere pass ek solution ha, tum mere ghar ajaw
m=what?? main??
n=ha... kyu nahi?? dinner bhi karenge aur parhai bhi. whats say??
m=i dont have any problem unless tumhari chachi ko problem hogi cooking mein
n=not at all, chachi loves to cook and feed everyone. shell be very happy... so done. aj raat mere gharme
m=cool
8 pm , Murthy's
c=nandu, tu kaha ha beta??? dekh maine kya kuch nahi banaya ha
n=chachi itna sab kyu?? bass mera ek frend hi araha ha aur woh bhi parne
c=hay hay, toa parne araha ha.. main usse kuch khane na du ?? mere hath ki chole bas woh ek bar khayega naa.. tu dekhna har din ayega.
rishab comes [ rishab is nandini's brother who cannot say or hear.nandini wants the best doctor to treat him]
n=rishab tune medicine li??
he nods in the affirmative. at that time the bell rings
n=main dekhti hu shayed manik aya ha
nandini opens the door and sees manik standing with a smile on his face
n=hi
m=hello...
n=ao na andar
manik comes in and chachi comes to meet him.seeing manik a big smile comes on her face
n=manik, yeh meri chachi ha
m=namaste chachi
c=hayyy.. kitna sona munda ha. namaste beta. kitne acche sanskar ha tumhare
manik giggles while nandu was feeling shy.
n=chachi.. hogaya usse andar to ane do
c=ha beta ajaw.. betho..
m=chachi ap bhi bethiye naa..
c=ha main tumhare lie drinks lati hu... par yeh kya ha tumhare hath me ?
she points at the packet which manik was holding
m=ab chachi yeh cake ha, ap sabke liye
n=manik iski kya zarurat thi..
m=are... hum sab khayenge kyu chachi ?? apko accha lagta ha chocolate cake??
c=tum itne pyarse layo ho..main to zarur khayungi. law me fridge me rakh deti hu. nandu tu manik ko lekar beth ma abhi ayi
manik seats on the living area. rishab comes and smiles. manik forwards hand
m=hii..
rishab shakes hands with him and sits beside him.
n=he's my brother, rishab. yeh sun nahi sakta aur kuch bol bhi nahi sakta
m=ooww...
manik smiles at him, rishab was saying something through his hands. he was asking how manik was. manik also replied in the same way he is okay. nandini smiled seeing how easily manik and rishab were becoming friends whereas rishab isnt comfort with everyone. chachi comes with drinks and sees the boys chatting through their own way.
c=rishab kitna khush lagraha ha na???
n=haa..
c=manik, yeh lo beta.. drinks lo
m=thank you chachi. aap bhi bethiye na
c=mujhe kitchen me kam ha. tum log parhai karo bate karo. main ati hu
n=manik hum upar chale?? dinner time niche ajayenge
m=okay.
manik and nandini came to nandini's room. manik took a look around the room and smiled. it was tidy up. and there was pic of her ayippa . nandini came with her laptop and books
n=shuru kare??
m=huh??
n=kya dekh raheho??
m=kuch nahi..so yeh ha tumhare ayippa??
nandini blushed while manik was teasing her.
m=how come you believe all these???
n=matlab?? manik.. we all should trust him.
m=i dont. yeh kuch nahi karte siwa humhe takleef deneke. inko agar kuch karna hota toa mere sath bohot pehlehi karte
n=matlab??
m=kuch nahi..phir kabhi bataunga. chalo, shuru kare
manik and nandini began to do their presentation. while doing there was lot of sweet cute arguments regarding the presentation were manik won and nandini had to give up with her pouty face, many sweet romantic eye contacts, hand touch
later on everybody were having dinner together. chachi was treating manik like her son-in-law. nandini was smiling so was rishab
c=manik, kuch khaw na.. tum accha nahi laga ??
m=chachi, bohot yummy ha sachme. yeh paratha aur chole.. i must say.
c=are toa aur lo na..sab tumhare lie hi ha..
m=thank u so much chachi, mujhse control nahi horaha ha... main to har hafte aunga apki hath ki khana khanekeliye
c=are neki aur puchpuch... ajana jabhibi man kare... tumhara hi ghar ha.
m=thank u chachi...
after dinner nandu was helping chachi while manik was playing video games with rishab in his room.
c=manik ladka accha ha
n=ha chachi...
c=tera accha dost ban gaya ha na??
n=hmm.. ekhi class me ha. woh aur ma sath me partners ha project me, aur
c=aur tujhe woh accha lagta ha nahi ??
n=ha..woh..
nandu looked at chachi who was blushing and teasing her
n=chachi ap bhi na ..kuch bhi
nandini blushed and began to wash the dishes
c=teri chachi hu.. aur shahrukh ki sabse bari fan mujhe kuch samjhane ki zarurat nahi ha tujhe...
n=chachi...
c=chal yeh kulfi jake manik ko deke aah. woh rishab ke room me ha
nandu took the kulfi and went upstairs to rishab's room. she peeped in and saw manik and rishab asleeped on rishab's bed. both were holding video game remotes and sleeping like children. nandu smiled and switched the game off. she came upto rishab to check if he had taken his medicines. then she went upto manik who was looking as innocent as a new born baby. nandu unknowingly caressed his hair and put the blanket over them. then she switched off the lights and came out closing the door.
n=chachi app
c=dono so gaye??
n=ha... khelte khelte sogaye
c=rishab ko manik bohot accha laga... ghul mil gaya
n=hmm
nandini smiled thinking about manik
c=ek baat kahu???
n=ha kahiye na chachi
c=humari taraf se... haa hain. manik ekdam perfect ha
n=chachi app phirse
c=woh toa time hi batayegaa... yaad rakhna
FLASHBACK ENDS
kehte ha na, ke ladki ki family ko impress karneme bohot pareshani hoti ha.. par jab baat ho mere sadu sweet pati dev ki toa uska yeh baye hath ka khel ha chachi ko impress karna.


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awesome...chapter..loved it..especially manik and chachi and rishab and manik bonding...
pls continue soon..take care
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aww #manan_kashian awsum ss ha yr😃😃😃 sadu patidev😆😆😆 n frst encounter my mens loo rofl😆😆😆😆 aww bicahrii plzz update it soon
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Lovely story
but plzz enclosed present track

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