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Posted: 10 years ago
restlessness that is what geet is feeling now...she has realized now what she feels for him is love and it has grown on her this past two weeks with him...she realizes how selfless he is in his love taking such care of her that is beyond her dreams...she is missing him and is scared for him and for herself she cannot think of a life without him now...beautiful...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional part
Geet is restless regarding maan not returning home...she thought how he always supported her in every situation and how he proved his unconditional love..she also realised her feelings for him and she wants to see him as soon. As possible...she called John and told him about maans missing...he assured her he will look for maan and asked her not to go out ...geet couldn't sit and wait for maan so she decided to go out and search for him...hope maan is fine..eagerly waiting g for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
nothing should happen to maan...

painful update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update loved the way you express geet pain n love for maan
so now she is in mission to search maan
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice concept

great characterization

I just started it and it seems intriguing.
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Posted: 10 years ago

|| Chapter 6 ||

Geet adjusts her gloves rubbing both palms together creating friction continuously to keep them warm. She has been walking in this snow for 10 minutes, all she can see it just snow and snow covered trees. Geet felt she is circling the same ground repeatedly. Hardly can she see anything 5 meters radius. Not a single living thing encountered her yet but she kept walking getting more and more determined every steps she takes.

Geet walks another 10 minutes with great difficulties in roaring storm. Couple of times geet fell and got up trying to stand straight but each time snowy wind knocks her down. Her only goal is to find maan and that kept her strength to go on even though she felt like literally dyeing because of not finding enough oxygen to breathe and chilly wind knocking her back each time she try to takes a step forward

Babaji meri madad kariyena...mujhe ek baar maan se milvado..bass ek baar .. Geet slides on snow when her feet hit something hard on the ground. Geet is breathless and all her energy has dried up, she try to stand up but all her tries will go in vain as her feet might have sprained or fractured.

Then geet sees someone, a blurred shadow coming towards her. Geet is desperate to find maan and she isn't worried about anything or anyone..Even her foot has given up on her but she is not going to give up. She yells for help "Heelp..!" but her voice is not audible enough to reach that someone in this windy storm.

Geet "hel...helllp...helppp! Pleasseee help!" she waves her hand at the shadow still lying on snow covered ground.

Geet is in verge of losing her conscious any moment but will of finding maan have kept her awake until she sees him safe. She tried to stand straight trying to see the person who is coming towards her. As the person covered the distance between them, his silhouette became clearer. As the person walked closer geet's heart beats just increased, she felt a strange relief wash over her like finally she found him. Her maan, her husband is safe and he came looking for her. Her eyes grew tired, now it can rest because maan is here her body gave up losing conscious. Maan catches geet before she hits the gorund.

Maan "Geeet...Geeet.. utto...geett.." maan pats her cold pale cheeks gently but geet is nowhere near to wake up. Maan's voice trembled looking at her pale tear stained cheeks " Oh...Geeet...what you have done to yourself.." The fear of losing geet had made him to panic. He picks her up swinging over his shoulder and starts half running and half walking towards their cottage.

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At Cottage

Maan lays her on bed, taking off her wet coat and shoes. Maan increases the heater temperature and takes off his wet cloths changing into warm cloths. Maan hesitates to take off her underneath wet cloths. He doesn't want to do anything which embarrasses geet later but this is not the time to pounder on those things. At this moment his main concern is geet's well being.

Maan gently calls her name "Geeet.. Geeet Ankhey kholo..." but geet murmurs something in subconsciously.

Maan "Geet meri baat sunnrahi ho?"

Geet "hmm umm..haaa ahhh umm"

Maan "geet I have to do this or else you will get sicker than now...I am sorry main tumhare marji ke bina muhje hey karna hoga...Hope you will forgive me" he leans over her to kiss her forehead.

Geet is too tired to open her eyes but she can hear his voice even in subconscious state. A tear slid from her still closed eyes hearing his gentle voice. She wanted to see him, hug him, and kiss away all his doubts. She gathers the left out strength to move her hand to his. Maan catches her tear drop on his finger before it falls on the pillow.

Geet's voice came out meekly "maaa aaan .."

Maan misunderstands her tear that she doesn't want him to help her in changing and he tries to get away from her but geet stops maan holding his hand.

Geet shakes her head for no slowly indicating him to not to leave her. Maan sits beside her on bed waiting for her to say something anything.

Geet slowly opens her swollen eyes to look at maan,. A sob escapes from geet; she hugs him suddenly sobbing crying out loud.

Maan hugs her back feeling helpless. He was too scared to let her go. He made a big mistake leaving her alone in cottage. He wanted to give her chance to sort out her feeling but he froze next moment hearing geet's words.

Geet cries hugging him tightly "maan...maaan maaan.. you are back...your are back..oh babaji my maan is back...my maan is safe...you are safe..."

Geet "Don't you ever ...ever never ever leave me again like this...warna main marjav"" maan closes her mouth before she completes the word.

Maan "Geeet... meri kasam ..phir kabhi wo shabdh tumhare moose nahi nikalna chahiye.."

Geet hugs him tightly crying "nahi kahungi..kabhi nahi.."

After couple of minutes geet pulls back from maan's arms "Aisa kohi karta hain kya...aap q aise mujhe chodkey chale gaye...aapko pata hain mujhe per aur meri dil pe kya bithi hogi iss char(4) ganthon main.." asks him hitting on his chest lightly.

Maan wipes her tears pulling her back in his arms "Main sirf tumhey kuch waqt dena chahata geet ...wo saari bathein jo maine tumsey kaha...main tumper kohi dabav nahi dalna chahatha geet...tumhey poora haq hain tumhari zindagi per..jo bhi paisla tum logi wo mujhe manjoor hain geet..Haaa main tumse haddh se zaada ..kuddh se zaada pyaar karta hun...aur hamesha karta rahunga...per meri pyaar tumhareliye majboori na banna chahiye... isilye main kuch dher keliye bahar gaya tha..per meri car raaste pe break down hogaya tha..aur cell ka network bhi nahi milraha tha tumhey inform karney keliye. Snow storm ki wajese mujhe ek jagha rukkna pada jab takk snowfall kamm na hojahey"

Geet taks his face in her hands "aapko ittna bhi nahi pata ki meri dil main kya hain? Meri ankhon main aapko nahi diktha ki woh kya kehathey hain?" asks him tilting her sideways.

Maan holds her hand "Pata hain geet..mujhe sabb pata hain..tumhare dill main meriliye ittna tho jagha maine apneliye banaya hain per main tumhari uss chotisi ichkichat(reluctance) ko door nahi kar paya"

Geet "Meri ankhon main dekhey batahiye maan kya aapko abhi bhi aisa lagtha hain..ek baar meri ankhon main ankhey dalkey dekhihey maan...sirf ek baar"

Maan looks at eyes and finds his reflection in her eyes. Her eyes are window to her soul and those eyes are speaking volumes today. They were twinkling like stars in clear sky filled with warmness of love, just love. Maan have no words to describe how he felt looking at her eyes and finding it filled with love for him. He wanted to laugh ...he wanted to cry..he wanted to scream to the whole world to let them know that geet loves him..only him..Finally she accepted him with whole heartedly. Maan felt overwhelmed and his eyes filled up instantly due to happiness. He can't express his happiness in words nor he able to talk at the moment.

Geet wiped his eyes before tears rolls down "Haaan maan main aapse bahut pyaar karti hun..shaayad bahut pehale se karti aayi hun per uss pyaar ka ehsaas mujhe aaj huwa...aapki hey pyaar mereliye majboori nahi ...bahut jaroori hain...aapkey bina mujhe saans lena bhi mushkil hogai thi..maan.. shaayad meri pyaar aapke pyaar ke saanme kabhi muqabla nahi karpayega...per hey mera waada hain aapse...main hamesha aapki thi ..aapki hoon aur aapke hi rahungi...aapke geet ki har subha aapse shuru hogai aur har raat aapse katham hoga"

Geet kisses his forehead "I love you the way you looks at me" Then kisses his both eyes one by one "I love you the way you call my name" Then kisses his nose "I Love you the way you cares for me" and kisses his both cheeks "I love you the way you always thinks about me" then she kisses on his chin "I love the way you makes me feel" and then she pauses at his lips keeping an inch space between them.

"I love the way you love me" and then she kisses on his lips. Her kiss is so innocent like her but it created havoc in maan. He let her kiss him waiting patiently but his passion is not in his control anymore. It has been unleashed by geet and he don't want to think where it is leading them to. He pulled her head closer getting Impatient to taste her delicious mouth sucking her full lips lightly first and then harder. Geet put are arms around his neck pulling him to her closer. The fear of losing him had left a huge impact on her mind it will be calmed only by maan's nearness. Maan licks her sweet lips savoring the taste of it slowly and then biting it hard enough to make it warm. He has been thirsty for the nectar of her so long. Geet whimpers when she is short of oxygen and maan breaks from kissing letting her to breathe.

Maan touches his forehead with hers breathing hard and whispers "I love you too"

Geet lowers her eyelashes leaning back on the pillow turning her face sideways, maan leans over fanning hot breathe over her pink cheeks

"Geeet.." maan wants to make love to her but he could never let her given in to him just to prove her love. Geet can hear his unsaid words, which she has learnt read him like an open book in these two weeks.

Geet nodes her head shyly without meeting his desire filled eyes. But Maan is worried about her health as she stayed out in snow storm god knows how long and fainted in his arms.

Maan "Geet..I"" geet silenced him keeping her index finger on his lips. "Shhh... love me...just love me maan...make me yours for the eternity maan... let me be your shrimati in every possible way..Complete me maan...just love me" Maan is speechless with her confession but still he has to try for one last time to convince her that they have all the time in world for this. But geet have another opinion on this waiting for perfect time.

Geet "Time never waits for us maan...life is unpredictable maan and there is no perfect time for anything...I almost lost you today.. I don't want to wait for perfect moments to come to us ...I want to live each moment of my life loving you and loved by you...please make this moment perfect for us.."


Maan lost his self control which was hanging on thin thread. He didn't wait for her to beg him, he just couldn't. His head bent lower and nibbled along her neck, making her body hum with desire.


Maan whispered in her ear between kisses "I am going to make love to you geet..I will make you mine tonight..for this life and other 6 lifes..you are mine ..only mine"

Geet shivered when his cold hands touched her bare waist. She looked up into his eyes with equal passion oozing out through her eyes for him. Maan moved his hands to her shirt buttons opening them slowly one by one. Geet shut her eyes tightly feeling each touch of his filled only with tender love and care.


One by one their cloths fell on the floor in a heap beside their bed. Geet's world tilted when maan covered her mouth with his kissing. He let go of her lips to stare at her beautiful face. Geet shies away like a new bride turns to lay on her stomach. Maan "you are so beautiful" said staring at her bare back. Maan moves her silky straight hair to side to get a clear view of her milky back. He leaves trails of wet kisses on her bare back. Geet crushes the spread in her hand feeling the pleasure he is giving her with just kisses.


Geet felt like everything cell in her body is burning with his kisses awakening her senses fully. Maan moves down over her body kissing sucking the bare skin.

Maan "your body is made up of sweet cotton candy..I could never get enough of tasting it...'

Geet turns around pulling the spread over to cover up the nakedness. Maan pulls away with her sudden movement. His fingers tangled in her hair smoothing down the silky tresses.

Maan "Don't hide yourself from me geet..I want to see u whole..I want to love you whole...let me see u...let me love you jaaan"

Geet felt her eyes burn with tears hearing him call her jaan. Geet circled her arms around maan and pulls him to her to kiss him.

Maan takes her hand around his neck and pins them on either side of her head with his. He moves gently trying not to hurt her but geet yelps in pain. Maan holds himself still trying to offer her comfort in the only way he knew how by kissing her tears and whispering sweet nothings. The desire is just as strong, just as consuming but they took their time, explored, both of them fighting for control with their kisses and touches.

Maan sets a phase with a steady strokes making sure that geet is enjoying as much as he is. Geet bit her lip as her trembling increased due to the pleasure he is giving her. Maan's back and forehead covered with sweat as he fought to hold back his own pleasure while he coaxed geet to hers. Maan brought their pace higher, faster when he felt her trembling in pleasure. Not a second ago maan's body splintered apart as he felt his climax along with geet.

Maan pushed against the mattress, trying to give her some room and not to crush her. Geet was so slender, so beautiful and he couldn't believe how she'd made him lose control like that. He pulls geet into his arms once again still breathing hard "I love you geet..I love you so much"

Geet smiled feeling content and whole in his arms "I love you too maan..." Her insecurities, doubts and society's illogical theories disappeared along with her fear. Now nothing matters to her as long as maan is there to love her and cocoon her in his strong arms to keep her safe from this cruel world. Someone has truly said, love have no boundaries; nothing matters if the love is meant to be. Love conquers everything.

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|| Author's Note ||

Hello Readers

Finally I am able to update today. This is the final chapter of this story. I am very new at writing intimate scenes and I tried to pen it down as modest as I could. Hope this chapter is as per your likings. I don't want to make it more dramatic so kept it light and more realistic. If you want epilogue, I demand comments from you all readers (including silent readers too). Each updates takes time and creativity which drains out writer's energy like anything, so all I ask is just a comment about how you felt reading this story. It motivates us to more. Thanks for liking this story and commenting. It's been a very pleasant experience writing this story and reading all your feedbacks, comments on it

Ignore mistakes and grammars, Press like button and leave long comments.

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 a wonderful SS! LP was brilliant! Geet goes 2 look 4 him bt she is fainting! Maan rushes 2 her n takes her to the cottage! Maan worried abt her! Maan needs 2 chage her wet clothes! he is hesitant bt has 2 do it! he tries 2 tell her n den seeing her expression abt to go bt she stops him! She confesses her love! beautiful confession! she also wants to b his in every way! Maaneet became one! she is his! Maan is so gentle with her! Geet awed! well written! waiting 4 epilogue
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update😊 ...waiting for epilogue with full of romance😳
thx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome ss...come across just now...
N its soo gud n lovely...
N last upadate is too.romantic... _ ;)
Really want n epilogue...
Plzz continue soon
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