RIMA OS: Seducing Mr. Perfect - Page 5

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

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Wow sudha amazing os loved it to the core

Nd i laughed a lot at hi fi part 😆

Originally posted by: AzraZaidi

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yipppe Iam so happy that I came on the first page !!!!
I was so bored of studying so thought to check and guess what i saw OS !!!!!
first better late than never ... New year gift ;)
Now the OS ... it was super duper awesome
I enjoyed reading and madhus thoughts were so funny !!!
So rk was the one who kissed her and madhu seduction fail but not !! so rk was sort stalking madhu at the club ??
and yes niw i remember the bathroom part was so funny ..
Trishnas awesome timing to go and madhu forgetting the keys !!
and yes the hi-fi part ... lol
Overall I loved reading it
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: rima4ever

awesome title

Originally posted by: muzikk93

Haha short and cute story. It was a bit rushed but I liked the concept. It was funny😆

Originally posted by: ratna232

<font size="2">lovely os.</font>

<font size="2">madhu is really crazy.</font>

<font size="2">i enjoyed reading it.</font>

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Lovely cute OS.

I was laughing all the time.

enjoyed reading it.

keep writing.

Originally posted by: uma88

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oh my!!! I have no words to say, byt accordi g to me this madhu is more naive, who lost her orevious boyfriend just because she didn't allow them beyond the line, how I waited that rk had drove them off from madhu, but its not that way.

First for madhu

Oh my poor madhu, before u could set ur eyes on him, he decided to make you his, you forget to whom u bumped into, its rk, he wil always be ahead than u, ur pout and vodka know there is a silent partner foryou, but its only u who doesn't know that, you bumoed onto him in ge ts toilet, wait, what if somebodya was there in his place, and what if u entered inside without listening to him, omg. Poor trish, she is held up btw u and her sikky, though her first pref was sikky, she never leave u. U r such a great employee who turns up an hour late on the first day to her iffice, and u were confysed with ur first step without being known to the fact that u would be thrown out, if he had not set his eyes on u and ur mission of seduction, 😆 , girl how u being so naive got to know that saree was the best dress to seduce, you might have got that from movie, right? And girl u shamelessly hugged him, when ur saree was peeled off without knowing that was what he was waiting to do from the morning.

And now for rishab

Man, I know u would get what u liked by hook or crook, but u wasted so much time maintaining ur control, worrying that she might quit the job, but what u were not aware was she was smitten by ur looks and smirks, and even if u pushed her out of ur life, she would never go away from u leaving u in peace, as u know what her new year resolution was, and poor ustruugled hard seeing her Iin saree first then only in shirt, thank god u confessed, or she might have ended with something more less dressed which would make sudha very uncomfortable to write, and ur confession just seemed to bea permission seeked before ur kisses. Finally u have got ur personnel seductress, and u both can seduce each other heartily 😆

Sudha, I know I have to less diwn my words, else ppl would think I have posted a os next to urs, I came first, and I forgot to enjoy as I was so busy in giving my view, well thsts fine, I would try to come first in ur spl os and I would celebrate it there, a complete package, hearing ur title I thought, a perfect seduction ftom madhu, but seriously I laughed out at many places, like madhu hifi rk for both being orohsn, no sane person could do that, but she is ur madhu, so its acceptable. And when he paid for his sketch, I was lol thinking how sincere she was in her work, and elevator scene's rk thoughts were pictured well, on the whole, u scored century in humor with this story.

sorry for this short comnent, can't help it.

Originally posted by: anish17

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woohoo i came 2nd sudha 🥳

awesome and hilarious os

i couldnt control my laugh at 3 places

1.y she was doing kathakali at the entrance of the office🤣

left or right 🤣dash 🤣

2.wen rk said that she should accompany him everywhere

in short i play the role of the dog in hutch adv.🤣🤣

seriously sudha the same thought came on my whether she should play role like hutch dog 🤣🤣

3.Hi fi part 🤣

oh girl is she born at some mental hospital? 😆

anyone could do hi fi for being orphan🤣 omg 🤣

aww sudha u and ur crazy madhu 🤣

enjoyed this os and madhu's mind voice 😆

rk was too smart and loved his attitude 😳

poor boy not able to control his urge 😆

wat he couldnt do was done by the lift 😉

loved this os sudha 😊

thanks for the pm but i res before ur pm 😃

Originally posted by: Love-Blossoms

ohh my i think my google browser was more excited for reading ur os it opened if without my consent how cool aint it n i was lucky that u have posted ur os lol
okay coming to os
have i ever told u that u can write crazy madhus the best if not then i wld say it now
but as usual i love rk more
n this time i have hatke reasons
one being his self control lol
even wen her saree stripped off the man controlled his urge n ofcourse that smirk after forcewaala kiss was so hawt
supersexy os
loved it n u ditched me u posted it before ur said time poor me cldnt get front page