Pyar mein twist #Th-3 *COMPLETED*

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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Priyanka.saha
Oh god kya kya twist dikhaya tunne...
but finally happy ending
but aaisa surprise,jaan lene jaisa hai

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Agrima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Hey... I read the whole ff together and I just loved it ... It is written really well... Post soon... Will be waiting... Well done 😊

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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: ikshu
this was just splendid👏
thanks fr the pm

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: agrima19
Hey... I read the whole ff together and I just loved it ... It is written really well... Post soon... Will be waiting... Well done 😊

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Aayushi

@A.Green

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

lovely ending..😉

post epilogue soon will be waiting!

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

lovely ending..😉
</div><div>post epilogue soon will be waiting!

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shalbi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

nice update.. Will wait for epilogue

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

~Epilogue~

Sanyukta's pov

Our story,which started with slaps and fights ... Has now completed twenty years ... I had never thought that randhir could love me this much ... How can some one love anyone upto this extent ... He was ,is and will be the angel of my life ... He is not only angel of my life ... My SaRan ... Ahh ... Ziddi ladki ... She is the second angel of my life
She has my beauty and randhir's style to attract any one
She has my style and randhir's sweetness which wins everyone's heart
She has my anger and randhir's attitute ... Enough to keep any boy away from her

"Mommy ... I am going ... Byby ... love you more than dady"- Saran said kissing my cheek

"Oh hello miss. Saran shekhawat ... No one can love her more than me"- Randhir said smirking

He is of fourty five now,but still handsome,possesive and loving

"No dady,i love momy more and your wife too loves me more than you"- Saran said with a diva stlye

"No ... She loves me more than you ... And I love her more ... Tell na sanyu,why are you sitting quitely"- Randhir said looking at me

"Now you tell momy,who is right?"- SaRan asked

Niharika Mom and papa who were sitting quitely till now,laughed looking at my flushed face ... I think i forgot to mention that now they are together ... On our reception party,we anounced that mom and papa will do remarriage and will live together with us ... Firstly they denied ... Alott ... But we all forced them so they aggreed ... Anyways,soon i too joined mom and papa in laughing

"Chill dady,i was just teasing you"- SaRan pulled randhir's cheeks while laughing

"You are so mean ... And cut your nails,they hurts my cheeks"- Randhir said keeping his hands on his cheeks,creasing them

"Saran ki bachi ... Kahan reh gayi ... Jana nahi hai collage?"- A voice came from outside

And we all recognised this voice ... This voice comes from outside every morning ... He is raghu and priyali's ... Raghav ... Remember this name? Yeah its the same name ... And they all still teases me ... They have this name to him only for teasing me ... Crazy they are ... But now it doesn't matters me much ... I know my randhir is with me

"Coming ... Bahar hi khada reh ... Abhi ayi mein"- Saran shouted picking one sandwich from plate

"Bahar kyun rahega wo ... Mein bula kar lati hoon use"- I said to saran

"Momy use andar mat bulao ... Phir aap late karwadoge use bhi aur mujhe bhi"- Saran said

"Andar aja beta"- I said going near door ... And he came inside

"Thank you aunty ... You are so nice ... Aur ek ye hai ... Ladaku kahin ki,andar ane k liye pucha nahi,aur upar se mujhe bahar khade rehne k liye bol rahi hai"- Raghav complained to me

"Koi baat nahi beta ... Bachi hai"- I said ,he smiled

"Hogaya?"- Saran asked rolling her eyes

"Abhi nahi ... Jaldi se milk p aur collage ja"- I said giving her glass of milk

"No mom ... I am not gonna drink milk ... I am going bye"- Saran said

"Tujhe yr peena padega ... Aur aj toh tere collage mein function hai na,toh tujhe sab kuch yaad rahega apni performance k bare mein"- I said

"Stop it mom ... Everyone makes fun of me ... K itni badi ho gayi saru,aur abhi bhi milk peeti hai ... Apka bas chale toh usmein complain air bournvita bhi dal do"- Saran said making faces

Everyone laughed ... Saran gave a hi-five to her grandpa and grandmaa ... They both are her partners in her mischevious things

I moved towards saran,but she ran away ... she kept running and i was running behind her ... Sometimes we becomes tom and jerry

"Randhir help karo meri"- I glared him

"Hann ... Mein pakadta hoon use"- Randhir said getting up from his chair

Randhir came in front of her and i was on her back side ... She was trapped ... I smirked at my victory

But she is also saran ... Means sanyukta + Randhir ... She is more intellgent than us ... we were moving towards her ... She sat down and me and randhir collided ... The way we used to collide in collage ... I was about to fell,but randhir saved me from falling ... Like always ... We were so lost in each other that we forgot that four pairs of eyes are looking at us

"Tum mujhe har baar bacha lete ho randhir ... Haina?"- I asked looking insto his eyes

"Wo isliye because no one has right to hurt you ... And if anyone will try to hurt you ,then that person aor thing have to face me first"- Randhir said

"Ye cheesy lines marna kab band karoge ... Collage time se ab toh bahar ajao ... Now you are of fourty five"- I said

"Kya karun,tumhein dekhte hi collage days mein chala jata hoon ... when i first saw you ... Aur ye lines apne aap ajati hain zuban par"- Randhir said

"Kabhi nahi sudhroge na tum"- I asked

"Ab itni beautifull aur hot beewi k hote huye,koi sudharne k bare mein soch bhi kaise sakta hai"- Randhir said

We came out of our word by sounds of ahem ahem and all ... We were standing still from them movement he saved me from falling
Everyone was looking at us ... We stood properly ... Just then i noticed that saran was drinking milk

"Agar peena hi tha toh itna pareshan kyun kiya"- I asked

"Wo momy,mujhe laga k apne weight put on karliya hai ... Toh kyun na apko excercise karwayi jaye"- She left winking at me

Gosh this girl ... Everyone started laughing

Their laughs are the music of my life ... i wakes up laughing with them and sleeps while laughing them ... They are my life ... My randhir,my saran,my papa,my mom ... They all are my life ... I had never thought that life can be this much beautifull too ... Its true,when you have only loved ones around you😊

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