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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue.
Cont soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting start!
Can't wait for you to continue!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: saakhi01

Nice prologue.

Cont soon.

P.S- hi, I know I am very late in commenting as well as reading the update bt I just started with a new project n I am very busy...
Thus irregularity of mine will cont till mid may , so pls don't stop sending me pm's...
I am trying to read n comment on updates as much as possible n as soon as I can manage...



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Posted: 10 years ago
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sounds interesting
looking forward to u continuing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1



After accusing Khushi for every ill in his life, Arnav
left from there leaving behind a shattered khushi, who
just rooted to the spot remembering his every words
again and again which her Arnavji spitted like a
venom on her, as realization hit her what just happened.


Arnavji, her Arnavji blamed her for every wrong in his & Di's life.
After everything happened he still hold her responsible for everything??


Here Arnav was driving the car rashly thinking about
the happenings and just like that he realized what he
just did, he accused Khushi again, he had hurt her again.
Mentally kicking himself for his stupidity the girl who did
everything for the happiness of his family and him,
the girl who nearly lost her life in saving him., girl
who have to bear so much pain because of him,
who was already breaking from inside by the behavior of his family.



And now when she needed him the most,
when she needed his support, yet he again failed her.
Taking a "U" turn he drives towards Shantivan fastly.



Reaching home he runs towards his room to see the site he feared.
khushi was busy in packing her bags.


At first he was shocked to react something, his fear is going to come true she's going to leave him alone, Alone in the darkness he lived before.
Right then khushi turns towards him and their eyes
met his eyes showing the pain and her a determination which scared him.



The empty and determined look in in ever so lively
look in her eyes scared him. he wants to hide himself ,
he can't look in those eyes, but he have to.


He have to otherwise she'll leave him.
Arnav: khushi! what is this? where are you going?
khushi: Far away from your life, so you can leave in peace Mr.Raizada (that hurt him , he cringed at her straight tone of speaking)

Arnav(chocking): Mr.Raizada?? khushi its Arnav ji for you.

khushi: No it was always Mr.Raizada.
The mighty Arnav Singh Raizada, Arnavji was just my
illusion nothing more.
(Arnav closes his his eyes feeling her pain)



Arnav: khushi! i didn't mean that.
Khushi: no Mr.Raizada! now i very well know what did you meant, so i am leaving, i had enough..



To be continued...


I am ending it here but next, i'll post Pert 2 & 3 together😉


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Edited by arshiforever92 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2



Arnav: Khushi! Khushi please try to understand i was just tense for di. so i (cutts off by Khushi)
Khushi: so as always you did what you do throwed venom on me. because you think that I don't have heart , i don't get hurt, oh ya a middle class girl like me, can't have emotions. they are also for rich persons like you and your family.

Arnav: khushi No! please don't say like that. please just listen to me. don't go khushi please...
don't...


khushi: No! I just want to leave now, i no more wish to be your play toy according to your wishes and mood. saying this she starts moving but Arnav holds her wrist and closing his eyes he did what he thought best to stop her that moment (unwillingly) he know that it'll hurt her but he thought to mend it later not knowing that it'll stab her heart more brutally.


Arnav: khushi! you can't go u're still in contract with me and when he turn to look at her prepare for
another outburst but none came to his surprise.
Coming out of his hold Khushi comes back to room without any fuss to his shock , he was feeling happy that now Khushi will be here, but her next word made him realize what he did.



khushi: (with her back towards him.): You surprise me Mr.Raizada!! One moment you spit fire,
another moment you says sorry but alas you always proves that Arnav Singh Raizada can never change!

Arnav: khushi.. i...


khushi: you don't have to say anything more, Mr. Raizada i'll live here till contract. i'll not break it.


Arnav: khushi listen.. (but Khushi moves from there) taking her blanket she goes to sleep on recliner.
Arnav(shocked) : khushi! what are u doing ? why are you sleeping on recliner??

Khushi: oh Sorry Mr.Raizada i'll move towards poolside.
Arnav(shocked): no Khushi! i mean sleep on bed. you don't have to sleep on recliner.

khushi: oh No Mr.raizada this is your room . I am ok in recliner, thanks for your generosity that you
are even letting me in your room when it so so difficult to you even breathe same air as me(Arnav just close his eyes hearing his own words from her mouth in guilt and pain), in fact it is matter of few days till contract ends , you sleep on your master bed.



Arnav: Khushi !! But Khushi turns her back towards him and sleeps on recliner or pretends to sleep.

Arnav just stood there looking at her figure curse himself and move towards bed to sleep thinking this is not right time to talk with her ( if only he knew how wrong he is, if he would have held her in his arms and tried to soothe her, she have broke down in his arms only, she just needed love and support this time, which he
again failed to give her)



Arnav hears khushi's little sobs and cried himself for all the pain in their life .
(BG: Kyu kKhwaabon pe tere saaye hain,
Dil kyun hai tanha mera,
Kyun Khamoshi hai jubaan meri
Ashkon se keh paaun na
Kyun Dard hai itna tere hi ishq me

Rabba ve
Rabba ve Rabba ve Rabba ve...)

In wee hours both fell asleep tired.



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Edited by arshiforever92 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3

Ok buddies, So in this part firstly I am clearing those points i am taking from show.


After that night night when Arnav woke up Next morning he doesn't found Khushi in room,
he searches her in home, he reach at Anjali's room and asks about Khushi, seeing Anjali face he
realise he asked with wrong person.


He becomes quiet he asks Anjali about her medicines. Nani was also there feeding their glass doll (Anjali, i really think that name is best for her).



He leaves from there. in hall he was searching for Khushi,
when Nani comes and informs him that khushi has gone to Gupta house.


Hearing this Arnav becomes angry and getting ready left for Gupta house.
reaching at Gupta house he shouts at Khushi, instead he comes to know about Khushi's Birthday from Buaji.

He feels bad firstly he didn't knew about her birthday and he hurted her on that day more.


First at night and now he again shouted on her. Arnav do aarti with khushi.

While khushi openly ignores him, all think that she's angry with Arnav that he forgot her birthday,
but Arnav knows well how much she's hurt.




After they did breakfast, buaji makes him lot of puri's (same as show) , Arnav asks
Aman to send a gift for khushi, for which Khushi says him to thank Aman for gift.

Arnav says that its from him. to which khushi asks from where he bought?, did he chosed it etc etc to which Arnav don't have any answer.



Arnav left Gupta house. reaching at Gupta house Arnav informs family about her birthday, to which Nani
admires khushi selfless nature, Mami snorts while Akash who came home for lunch somewhere feels bad about his morning behavior with Payal. She was just making khushi's favorite to wish her birthday and he shouted for having little late in breakfast but soon composes himself thinking about Anjali.



After sometime khushi comes back, Arnav opens door for her (from now everything is same as show, Arnav forcefully makes Khushi cut her cake, Arnav place rose on her pillow on night.


Next day Arnav again tries to recreate their memories, at last challenges that if Khushi comes in his arm,
She'll accept him as husband till Arnav comes back from way to Agra due to
weather reasons and surprises khushi decorating hall with flowers.


khushi hugs him and he says now she accepts him as her husband and was going to kiss her when family comes back from their way to Satsang same reason as Arnav.


But all accuses him for telling lie to spend time with khushi except Nani, NK and Payal.

Anjali also shows her disappointment and move towards her room without giving Arnav a chance to explain.

(Now story will be changed from here , i mentioned how much i am taking from show in short rather then stretching it to 2-3 chapters.)

All moves towards their room , Payal caresses Khushi's cheeks and also move
towars their room while Nk also showing his support to Arnav pats Arnav shoulder
and moves away from there.

Seeing Arnav lost with the behavior of his family and Di, Khushi feels bad for him also.
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To be continued...

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Edited by arshiforever92 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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poor khushi.hope she will stand strong against all the accusations
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Very nice!! I have always hated that scene.. How he took for granted and didn't even apologize for those cruel words

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