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Posted: 10 years ago
wow tht was some update...
so we finally knw a little abt y arnav hates the family... except khushi and ranjan
wat was the first reason...he said that it took him a long time to figure that out... what did he find out... and y did ranjan favor him??
so khushi is not attracted to arnav?? or is this just a fade... and she is staying away coz of this hatred btw akash n arnav??
eagerly waiting to see wat arnav does to make her acknowledge abt his intentions...

Congratulations on the publishing of MKM 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update once again. Really intrigued by the animosity between Arnav and the Vaghelas, guess will get to know more about it in the upcoming chapters. Also the million dollar question as to why Ranjan favored Arnav for all those years.
Coming to Khushi...as Aman questioned himself that if she can remember that Aman liked perfumes than how come she's forgetful about Arnav's non-smoking habits & gets him cigars instead. Is she intentionally trying to piss him off or she just like her brother doesn't likes him. Whatever is the reason I'm sure you'll let us know in its due course. I'm just eagerly waiting as to how Arnav will make Khushi realize his feelings for her.
Lastly what security blunder was the grandfather talking about?? Will be waiting eagerly for the next part.
Thanks for the pm & congratulations for MKM, I've already bought it & am enjoying reading it again and again and again :).
Keep writing because you totally rock at it.

I.f-deepa876
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Posted: 10 years ago
so Arnav wants Khushi to acknoeledge him differently...thats interesting...but what about khushi..???
the relations are very confusing..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very very intriguing plot ..can't wait to see how you mold this further
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally i get a chance to un res this thing, sorry abt the wait i had exams.
i think so far the concept of the story is super interesting, and the plot is shaping up nicely with everyones perspectives. can't wait to see where it goes. so far everything was written fantastically, desperately waiting for more, continue soon.

-Nik
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loving the complex grey setting of this story and equally complex characters. I am finding Akash not very likable already. I found the below part so fascinating. Arnav is very honest and makes no bones about what he thinks of Khushi and her family.
"father was a calculative manipulative old fox, his wife a certified crazy, his son a raging psychopath in making and there was a waif like scardy daughter who spent her majority time looking for corners in the house to hide. A poster example of a dysfunctional family, the Vaghelas. "

Khushi on the other hand seems to live in a world where she tries to shy away from reality of her family and instead views them thru her rose colored glasses. Does she know about the ultimately cruelty of her family to Arnav and what all this has done to him over the years?

Is Khushi trying to disregard Arnav or is that a game she is playing with herself and him...Why bring him cigars if he does not even smoke..and he definitely called her bluff...or is that her strategy to be ignorant of his intentions and interest in her...she is politely telling him in this way that she is not interested?

Khushi's perspective of her Bhaiya and Bhabhi and their relationship is so different that Arnav's perspective. She thinks it's all romantic and he labels it as a circus!!!! He thinks of them S the psycho and sacrificial lamb...lol.

Can't wait to find out more on these people and their lives...
Edited by Anamika100 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Anamika! Thanks for the pm dearie. Sorry I logged in after many days and was so happy to see you had updated. So sorry for late comment.
Absolutely loved the second chapter. Love your characterization of ASR here. Breathtaking...dangerous...alluring...sexy...master of self control...master planner and manipulator...shrewd...hawkishly intelligent...able to see and cut through all the bs people try to hand to him...if they are stupid.
He seems to have more than platonic or foster brotherly ideas about Khushi and he seems to have saved himself from all vices to eventually be with Khushi in a long term manner. The fact that she refuses to acknowledge him as someone more than a family acquaintace to her, drives him all the more determined to prove to her that such pretence won't cut with him anymore.
What remains to be seen is if Arnav's plans for himself and Khushi are geniune from his heart or he is using her and their attraction for each other as a pawn to execute his major masterplan...bring about the downfall of Akash, even if it entails making Khushi fall in love with with him and marry him, and carry out his grand design of taking him down..even out...and become the King of the Underworld or Mafia.
It makes me worry how Khushi would react at how ruthlessly and cold heartedly she has been played at.

Congrats on the publication of MKMII...I was madly in love with that and MKMI and just about anything you write. I tried to download it but nothing worked...but I will forever have sweet memories of anxiously waiting for its updates and greedily reading it and its amazing story and plot and characterizations...Stunning story.
Edited by siamesecat - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very interesting update
Very well written and lovely update
Khushi's meeting with her to be Bhabhi and teasing her bhiya and Bhabhi was really very nice
Arnav had a very bad past and its related to Khushi's family
Arnav is here only because of Khushi's father
What is Khushi's feeling for Arnav and what she trying to hide
Want to know how will Arnav made her accept her feelings
You stopped it on very wrong place
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter two has made me even more curious than normal. ASR is someone who hasn't had a normal childhood, he despises everyone in Khushi's family just as much as they despise him and both parties have their own reaons as well.
All that remains to unfold is Arnav and Khushi's equation, did they share a history somewhere?! were they more than friends and Khushi is only acting indifferent now because of her loyalty towards her brother or perhaps some sort of a misunderstanding about Arnav's intentions towards her?! I am even considering the possibility of her having feelings for him at one stage and Arnav perhaps dismissed her feelings??

Looking forward to unfolding more soon.



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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi anon, sry for late!!
Btw fantastic start of BLP!! This chapter has intrigued us a lot!! Waiting for d under currents!! ;)
Loved arnav...mystry surrounding him n khushi's equation... 1 thng i felt as if m reading a tightly bound highly intriguing script!! Superb!!
Absolutely excited for next chapter!!
Congrts for publication of MKM2!!
Vibha.

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