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CHARACTER SKETCH:

ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte-an arrogant man, full of attitude, has a big ego and does not think twice before doing something or saying whether in personal and professional life (was a very nice person,always smiling and happy person was best friend of Sameer but after meeting Roshni he changed for worse)<I will tell the past later>

He treats Sameer just as a colleage and chief now but secretly wishes to rekindle his relationship with him but ego problem, Age 26

ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathor-Chief of ETF, very strict just like Arjun, has also attitude problem but very nice to his colleagues (very rarely) unlike Arjun and does not trust people easily like before (after Roshni) <they broke their friendship 6years ago (after Arjun's entry a month ago,he became more strict)Age 26

Riya Mukherjee-age 25, a very nice girl, always smiling lives her life fully +she is a little sensitive, best friends with Shree (since childhood),Chotu,Ayesha and Liza(recently) and lives with Shree and Chotu because she does not have any family in Mumbai <her mom and dad are not alive,she was only 10 when they died in a car accident,no one in the ETF knows except for Shree> a research specialist, knows martial-arts,sometimes goes undercover,trying to learn how to shoot,she has only 2 problems<she can not hear anything bad about her parents and she does not like when people underestimate her


Ayesha Kapoor-Age 25, an undercover agent and ammunition expert,comes from a wealthy family(only child), but she wanted to do something for her nation after her graduation,so she joined the Police force,her dadu and nanu supported her decision but not her dad <he wanted her to help him in the business,but she wanted to be like her dadu(ex commissior of lucknow)and nanu(ex DCP of Delhi) >her mom only wants her happiness.After a showdown with her father she went to Delhi with her nanu and nani to become a police officer and later she was appointed in ETF<after the Nadia episode>Now best friend with Shree,Chotu,Liza and Riya.


Shreekant Sen-Age 24,childhood friend of Riya
best friend with Chotu,Ayesha and Liza (always fighting with each other without any good reason since college) knows everything about Riya and treats her like his elder sister,his family live in Calcutta <how he met Riya and became friends will be told later >he is a technical expert,always busy with gadgets and stuff,he is a very sweet guy cares for his friends, he met Chotu after joining ETF, Riya joined a few months later and became friends with them and later Ayesha and Liza except for the ACP's


Chandrakant Patil- a commando and an encounter specialist,they say looks are deceiving this sentence was made for him that's what Riya and Shree say,because eventough he is very tall and has very big muscles he is very sensitive, sweet and caring, loves Riya,Ayesha and Liza as his sisters
Age 26,loves his 11:30 wali <his dad worked as clerk in a minister office and mom supplied tiffenboxes for schools,while he worked parttime in a pizza store to pay for his studies.After graduation he joined the police force and made his parents proud> his parents live in Delhi,he shares an apartment with Shree and Riya,only weakness FOOD mostly when it is made by Riya or his mom, he is very strict when it comes to criminals. everyone calls him Chotu.

Liza D'Cruz-age 24,forensic expert,best friend with Riya,Ayesha,Chotu and Shree (they have been fighting without any specific reason since college and are still doing it) has friends but not very close ones,her parents are both doctors,live in Dehradun and are very supportive with her choice of profession,she has only one close friend

<When she first met Shree they began to fight with each other because he accidently spilled a chemical potion on her favorite dress.he did not wanted to say sorry because she was the one that was not looking where she was going and so began a Tom-Jerry relationship>When she came in ETF she made real friends because she knew she can trust them with her life even Shree


Roshni Mehta-will tell later(feel free to imagine any actress as Roshni)

Sikander-will tell later

Mr Sameer Mukherjee-father of Riya

Mrs Meenakshi Mukherjee-mother of Riya

11:30wali:later in the story

Commisioner Coelho

And now for the Angel:?

SAKSHI- Riya's sister who is her angel her guardian, she is bubbly, a very nice girl always smiling but has powers which she uses when she wants, she has 4 missions and she is currently working in ETF, her best friend is M who is also an guardian who lives also on earth and her mentorji from heaven helps her from time to time. she works in ETF as a crime reporter, her friends are Riya, Ayesha, Liza, Shree and Chotu, she is the only one who is not afraid of Samjun well second Riya is not afraid of Arjun anymore, age 21

Siddhart Kapoor- Ayesha's cousin and best friend since childhood, he is sweet and kind and a romantic person, he doesnt have a ego but he loves to think he knows everything but he meets his challenge Sakshi who always confuses him, he used to work in the army as a commando recently transferred to ETF for a special mission which involve Riya and Samjun, age 27

More characters will be added as the story continues

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Congrats
Wow second thread so happy
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Chapters 1-24 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4183787&TPN=2

Chapter 25 p 2

Chapter 26 p 3
Chapter 27 p 5

Chapter 28 p 7

Chapter 29 p 9

Chapter 30 p 11

Chapter 31 p 13

Chapter 32 p 15

Chapter 33 p 18

Chapter 34 p 20

Chapter 35 p 23

Chapter 36 p 25

Chapter 37 p 27

Chapter 38 p 29

chapter 39 a p 31

Chapter 39 b p 34

Chapter 39 c p 36





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CHAPTER 25

Ay: I agree with Siddie, there is a restaurant a few blocks away

S: ok fine

A: we have a case to solve and you are thinking about food

R: well sir, most people get hungry unless some people or one person

A: what do you mean miss Mukherjee?

Sa: I didn't say anything

A: not you, I meant Riya

R: oh you mean me, I will explain it to you if the shoe fits

A: Riya, you mean I don't get hungry because I am a robot

R: oh wow you understand

A: Riya (loud voice)

R: what? Because I told the truth

A: what truth? I am a human

R: really? Prove it

A: allright, fine I will go and eat with you all and I will pay for the lunch

R: ok lets go then

Arjun left first to get the Suv while the rest starting laughing

R: he doesn't know what is going to happen to him

Sid: what do you mean?

R: I mean he doesn't know how much Sakshi and Chotu can eat

S: how much Riya?

R: oh sorry sir I didn't mean to offend you

S: no need to worry, let him pay, I will go get the other Suv

R: ok sir

Sameer left while the others were astounded that Sameer didn't say anything about being rude to Arjun

R: what happened to Rathor sir? He is being so cool so suddenly

Sa: because of someone I think

R: who?

Sa: I said I think I don't know who

R: oh Sakshi you are so mean

Sa: no I am not

R: yes you are

Ch: now lets go eat I am hungry you can continue later fighting

Ay: I agree

Sid: well lets go then

They all left where Samjun were waiting for them

Ayesha immediately sat in Sameer's Suv and so did Chotu

Riya didn't knew where to sit, Ayesha and Chotu were waving to come and sit with them but she decided to sit with Arjun because she didn't wanted to him to feel bad

Sakshi grabbed Sid's hand and made him sit in Sameer's Suv

Sid: why are we sitting here? We can sit in Arjun's Suv

Sa: because I want to sit here

Sid: but I want to sit with them

Sa: don't you want to spent time with Ayesha?

Sid: yes

Sa: so here is your chance

Sid: but how will Riya manage to be with Arjun?

Sa: she knows, believe me

Sid: ok

Ay: why is Riya with Arjun sir?

Sa: so he wont feel bad that nobody wants to sit with him

Ch: I think I should go with her

Chotu almost stepped outside but Sameer already started the car and they were already on their way

Ch: oh no ab Riya ka kya hoga? (what will happen to)

Sa: jo bhi hoga acha hoga (what ever will happen will happen for good)

Sid looked at Sakshi suspiciously but she ignored him and started talking with Chotu

Meanwhile Shree was already at the lab where Liza was busy with the autopsy

He knocked on the door

L: who is it?

Sh: me, disaster ki malkin

L: Specky, where is everyone?

Sh: they are still investigating

L: then why are you here?

Sh: I came to take the autopsy report

L: I have almost finished it

Sh: did you eat?

L: no not yet

Sh: I knew it so I brought lunch for you

L: you? brought lunch? And for me?

Sh: don't think so highly of yourself, Sameer sirs orders

L: ok I will be in the break room in a while

Sh: ok

A few minutes later

L: so Specky what did you buy?

Sh: Chinese

L: wow my favorite

Sh: now don't stand on my head sit and lets eat I am hungry

L: yeah yeah

They both sat and began eating without fighting for the first time ever

Meanwhile Arjun and Riya were driving to the restaurant when suddenly the Suv stopped

R: what's wrong sir?

A: the Suv isn't starting

R: so? We can grab a taxi

A: at this hour? Please don't joke

R: but I am hungry

A: there is a dhaba over there

R: no I don't eat unhygienic food

A: then stay hungry

R: fine, then I will stay here

A: ok but think after eating I am going to call a mechanic and it will take a lot of time maybe three to four hours, can you stay hungry for that long?

R: what? but why so long?

A: because I am going to eat and rest for a while

R: what about we have to solve a case and being irresponsible?

A: well somebody told me I am not human so I am going to show that I also get tired

R: since when do you listen to me?

A: since...

He couldn't say anything because he himself didn't know why and looking at Riya didn't help at all

A: if you want to stay here be my guest but I am going to eat

He got down from the Suv with his gun

R: hey wait I am coming too (thinking I should have gone with Rathor sir, I could be eating hygienic food by now)

At the restaurant

They had arrived at the restaurant but only tables for two were avaible

S: I think we should we should go to another restaurant

Ay: but sir at this hour it will take time to get to a restaurant and we have to solve a case

S: then were will we sit?

Ay: well me and Siddie can sit together and Sakshi can sit with Chotu and you can sit alone like always sir

S: ok

Sid: but will Sameer not feel lonely?

Ay: but Siddie, Sameer sir always sit alone and eat

Sid: are you allright with it Sameer?

S: yes, I am already used to it

Sid: let us find seats

They sat on their respective seats and they ordered their meals

Meanwhile at the dhaba

Riya was feeling weird while Arjun was relaxing on the charpai (cot)

R: sir don't you feel weird here everything is so out in the open?

A: no, I am used to it

R: sir, are you familiar with this place?

A: no but me and Sameer and some other friends would go to a dhaba

He stopped talking when he noticed that he called Sameer by his first name, Riya understood that it was a slip of the moment so she decided to let it go and try to divert him

R: sir, are you sure the food is hygienic? I don't want to fall ill

A: sure it is

R: are you sure?

A: yes

R: positive?

A: Riya (loud voice) stop asking questions

The server came with their ordered food

Serv: shaab membshaab aap ka khana (sir, madam your food)

He put the food on the table and Arjun gave him a tip, he thanked him and he left

A: so miss Mukherjee eat

He started eating while Riya looked at the food suspiciously, Arjun looked at Riya and she still wasn't eating

A: miss Mukherjee

R: huh

A: why aren't you eating?

R: are you sure it is hygienic? Because according to statictics 60-70% dhaba's are unhygienic

A: miss Statictics stop with your analyzing and eat

R: but

Arjun stopped eating and took her plate, took a piece of the paratha and pushed it in her mouth

A: now stop talking and start eating

R: but sir (she started chewing and found it very tasty) omg this is so yummy

A: told you so

precap: Samesha and Sidakshi's date, Chotu finally knowing his 11:30wali's name and solving the case

thanks for all the likes and comments for the previous chapter

hope you like this chapter too

sorry for the delay, didnt decide when to update

i am still writing the next chapter

please have a little patience

Edited by VirMan505 - 10 years ago
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Fantastic
What a plan Sakshi
Arjun and riya fighting cutely
Continue soon

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