ASYA(KABHI)FF:JUST LIKE A FAIRYTALE

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Hello lovely people.i am titir . I am 15(soon going to be 16) years old and a bengali. Noone knows me here because I became a member of this forum few weeks before and this is my first post here but my connection with this forum is quite old.i am coming here and reading stories on asya from almost 2 years.i stopped watching the show ages ago after KSG left because for me qubool hai meant asya and asya means kabhi. without karan or surbhi kabhi wasn't possible and without kabhi ,asya or qubool hai isn't possible for me.but because of the briliant writers of this forum I can still relive the magic of asya/kabhi and you guys are the people who inspired me to write a story on asya and I am super nervous about posting it.this is the first time I am writing a story and that too on asya.i was actually in a denial mode about posting it but my parents insisted me to give it a try. I know most of you guys will be asleep by now because of my blaber.so without any further delay I present to you the first chapter of my story.HOPE YOU ENJOY.
NOTE: in this story asya is portrayed by kabhi and this story is inspired by Tangled.if you guys think that this story is worth it then please give it a try and leave your precious likes and comments.these mean a lot and if you all think that I should continue only then I will continue it. Thank You.
ASYA FF: JUST LIKE A FAIRYTALE
CHPTER-1
Hey Diary,
What's up? You know I missed you sooo much.Now you must be thinking ke hume akhri baar baat kiye huye thik se 24 hours bhi nahi huye and I am behaving like I am talking to you after ages but what to do?If a person is locked up in a huge mansion for 5 long months and have not a single soul to talk to then you can't blame her for missing her best friend, can you? I know, I know what you must be thinking right now.You are thinking that why am I saying that I am alone when ammi is in here in this house,right? See I know you too well. So to answer your question, ammi is in her room working as always.Ever since she has decided to handle all works of our company from home 5 months before ,it has become all the more stressfull for her. She is always busy in work and never has the time to sit and talk with me for a moment like other mothers.Well it's not like she ever had time for me even in the past but I am not complaining.I never complained in past and I am also not complaining now because I know she is doing all this for me.But I am really worried for her diary.I simply can't understand why she is hell bent on keeping me hidden from the whole world. You know diary,today I asked her again why she brought me here in Shimla from Delhi 5 months before and why she doesn't want me to contact anyone and she gave me the same reply which she is giving me from the past 5 months that it is for my safety.When I again asked her what is the the threat from which she wants to save me , she became silent as usual.But this is not what made me worried diary but the fear which I saw in her eyes before she covered it with a blank look .Cheesay jaisi dikh rahi hai uss se bhi kahi zyada complicated aur mysterious hai.It feels like there are some deep secrets behind all this and strangely I feel like the secrets are somehow related to me.Khair jo bhi ho I really wish aiiah miyan jaldi se meri dua qubool karle aur sab kuch pehle jaisa ho jaye.You know what is the best thing about you diary?Woh yeh hai ke you always make me feel better and light , just like now.Seriously you are a true friend diary because you never leave my side and always listen to all my ramblings patientiy and never complains.But there is also a bad habbit of yours that you never replies.Par isme tumhari bhi koi galti nahi hai.Aise waqt me mai Humehra ko aur bhi zyada miss karti hu.Pata nahi who ab kya kar rahi hogi.Well one thing is for sure that she must be freaking out thinking about my whereabouts and I can't even call he. I really wish Api and Jeeju were here.Toh phir shayad zindagi itni complicated nahi hoti.
...And with that Zoya Farooqui closed her diary sighing sadly and turned the lights off to finally try sleeping.
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So ladies and gentlemen this is Zoya Farooqui ,the princess of this fairytale of modern time.Zoya is just like all the other fairytale princesses about whom we read when we are small and admire all our life but still she is different from them.Like Cindrella,Ariel or Snow white she is also the owner of engelic beauty but her beauty doesn't lie in her petite figure, fair complextion or long black hair but her beauty lies in her simplicity,her doe-shaped chocolate -brown expressive eyes, her innocence ,her bubbly nature and her adorable dimpled smile.Her smile can brighten the dullest of days , her innocence can melt the stoniest of hearts and her love for life can cheer up even a dying soul.But the funniest thing is that she herself has no idea about all this.She always thinks about others before herself and never hesitate to help others but she also has a unique quality to land herself in trouble in this process.But surprisingly these problems can never stop her from helping others.It seems like God has specially sent this angel on earth to spread happiness everywhere she goes.She can be a software engineer but the subject which no one knows better than her is called life.People only seem to notice her smile but not the sorrow which is hidden behind those dimples.She can easily mask her deepest of pains behind that lovely smile.But somewhere deep inside her heart this angel also waits for someone who see behind her fake smiles and recognize her pain and can become the angel of this angel's life.The sunshine who can show the way even in the darkest hours is also waiting to be discovered from the darkness of her own life.Like all other princesses ,this princess is also waiting for her prince...unknowingly.
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THE NEXT DAY:
After waking up Zoya quickly got ready and went downstairs to the dining area.There she saw her mother,Razia,sitting on a chair at the dining table with a cup of coffee in her hand and reading a newspaper.Zoya was quite surprised seeing her there but didn't showed it.She quickly went to her and greeted her good morning and Razia also greeted her back.After exchanging greetings she quietly took her seat and started serving herself.It was really rare for Razia to show up at the dining table because she always has her meals in her room and Zoya has to eat alone.So this sudden appearance of her at the dining table left Zoya wondering what was the matter.Well it looked like God also wanted to end her confusion so Razia finally spoke up.
RAZIA: Zoya I want to talk to you about something.
ZOYA: Jee Ammi,kahiye.
RAZIA: Zoya humari Mumbaiwali factory me kuch problems samne aye hai toh isiliye mujhe 3 hafto ke liye Mumbai jana padega.
ZOYA: TEEN HAFTE!! Ammi ap mujhe pure teen haft eke liye yahan chor ke ja rahi hain!
RAZIYA: Dekho Zoya samajh ne ki koshish karo.Agar yeh mere bas mein hota toh mein kabhi nehi jati lekin wahan ki situation bohot kharab hai aur agar mein wahan pen hi pohonchi toh bohot nuksaan ho jayega.
Zoya quietly nodded and said: I understand Ammi.
Hearing this Razia heaved a sigh of Relief and said: Zoya meri gairmojudgi mein yahan se bahar janeki ya phir kisise contact karne ki koshish mat karna. Dekho mein janti hu ke tumhare man mein bohot sare sawal hai lekin mein tumhe abhi kuch nahi bata sakti. Bas itna yaad rakho ke bahar tumhare liye bohot khatra hain aur mein job hi kar rahi hu woh tumhare bhalai ke liye hi kar rahi hu.You have to trust your ammi Zoya.You trust me na?
Zoya just nodded saying: I trust you Ammi.
A satisfied smile appeared on Razia's face.
RAZIA: Toh phir sab tay hogaya.Mein kal early morning nikal jaungi. Agar tumhe kisi bhi cheze ki zaroorat pari toh Wajid ko bol dena aur mein jane se pehle use tumhare liye khana pakane ko bol dungi, OK?
Zoya just nodded and Razia stood up and made her way towards her room.Zoya sat there for some time nibbling her food and at last got up leaving her breakfast on the table to go to her room to prepare herself for the upcoming three weeks which was going to be the most boring time of her life according to her.Little did zoya knew that these three weeks were going to be a complete roller-coaster ride which would make her life upside down.
Zoya was about to leave the table when she noticed that Razia had left her phone there.She took the phone with her and went towards her mother's room to give back her phone.Zoya reached the door of the room and saw that the door was wide open and Razia was standing near her bed with a old and almost damaged photo in her hand. Zoya was about to knock when she heard Razia saying something which destroyed her whole world in a second and she was left speechless and numb.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome...
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Wat did zoya hear
Plz update soon
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u didnt tell me about this also
awesome as always
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Amazing start
But why cliffy
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Wow a new writer
Nice start
So Zoya is razia daughter
She move her away to shimla and hear her locked up in the house
Not allowed out and it is for her safety
So razia is off to Mumbai leaving Zoya alone
What did Zoya overhear
Continue and pm plz
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Originally posted by: sasir

Welcome...
Interesting
Loved it
Wat did zoya hear
Plz update soon

Thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: NnonaA

I like it .

Waiting...

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Originally posted by: ashlesha2

u didnt tell me about this also

awesome as always
superior than super
duper

Sorry ashlesha, actually I was unsure about continuing it seeing the number of likes and am still unsure about it, so didn't tell you about this. Hope you understand 😊
And thanks a lot for this adorable comment 😃

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