MG SS : BROKEN RELATIONSHIP teaser pg 49 jun 17 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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such a sad start...but quite interesting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow... What a dhamaka start... With a divorce... Looking forward toured ur new ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very emotional n painful update
Maan wants divorce from geet after 5 years n thinks its better for them n geet cannot take it.He thinks geet does not co-operate n he tried to save the relation but cannot move further.
waiting to know wat happen that Maan took such a drastic decision

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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Congrats for new story
Interesting update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That is awesome yet painful start. Got my attention from the first few lines so I can;t wait to see what is in store for this one. Fab job as always
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratulations on your new SS...
maan is leaving geet..
great start.. nice concept..
will be waiting for more... 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh gosh maan wants to separate 😭 interesting start
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Posted: 10 years ago
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~BROKEN RELATIONSHIP~

Part 2



He left the room, leaving her she was all broken, where did she lacked what was her fault..She still remember the day, they were married... It was an arrange marriage..She had just gotten into a job, they were paying her well and she never wanted to get married at that time.. But things were not according to what she wanted.. Everything was fine when she got to know about maan.. He was working in an MNC with a good salary and her family wanted her to marry him..

She was in a trance when her eyes went to the papers..She somehow took the papers in her hand and saw that he had already signed the papers and wanted her to do the same.. She didn't knew why she was feeling this much low.. This frustration was making her lose everything she in her sheer anger threw all the things that were in the room.. The vase lying in the side table was broken. She was withdrawn geet didn't noticed but she walked on the glass pieces hurting herself in the process..She doesn't know what to do. Suddenly feeling so low and why just coz of the man she LOVED. but does she really ??

Geet crumbled on the floor like a piece of paper.. She wanted to cry, ask him why is he doing so..But she couldn't..They were so perfect..so apt ..he loved her he does everything whatever she like then why he wanted them to separate.. She never thought that everything that she was reminded was of him and his loyalty to their relation.. She never felt if she was also a part of the marital bliss that they had..

Crying, sobbing she fell in deep sleep lying on the cold floor with her blood flowing of her feet.. Trying to find the flaws in her, his eyes, his gestures that she ignored were laced with a certain pain..

NEXT DAY

She was in the parking lot when she saw someone with him.. The girl was hugging him close and she was whispering something in the ears of her husband..geet wanted to kill him right now , her anger surged through her veins and she marched up to them..

Girl: so when are we getting married maan.. You know it's been a year now and I seriously need a commitment in our relationship..

In a flicker of moment she pulled the girl out of his embrace and he was given a tight slap...

Geet : so this was the reason you want me out of your life.. You want this B**** maan.. Fine I will sign the papers and I want you to take all your belongings out of my apartment right now.. I don't want any of your shit with me..

She was going on and on when maan pulled her to his hard frame and gave her a piece of mind..

Maan : you never had anything of me geet.. You were so busy in yourself that you actually never noticed that I am never with you and stop blaming me.. This girl.. He pulled the girl in his embrace and warned her, dare you say anything to her or you will see the MAAN you never encountered till now.. You spoiled our relationship and dare you blame me..

Geet : say it again.. I spoiled it..I AM NOT THE ONE WHO IS HAVING AN EXTRA MARITAL AFFAIR MAAN SINGH KHURANA.. I AM NOT THE ONE WHO IS BEDDING ANOTHER MAN WHEN I AM WITH MY HUSBAND..

GEET!!!! His voice was laced with pain..

Geet : why , felt bad.. But you know what maan , I am glad we are getting this over.. You never understood me and its better we both should part our ways.. Go and enjoy your life with your so called girl friend maan..

She left covering her eyes with the shades that were slight damp with the betrayal she felt right now.. She never thought that maan will cheat her and right now she just wanted some peace she was feeling like drowning in the pain that maan had given her..

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From next part it will be on blog

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Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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intresting story want to read next..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very emotional update... feeling bad for geet, she didn't know the reason why maan wants to separate from her... maan is having an affair with other girl and that;s the reason he wants to separate from geet... he is blaming her when she didn't do any wrong... waiting to know more, but please no sad ending...

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