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Awsum Update Heli Di..😊 Loved Haya-Sia's Camaderie! ❤️ Very Cutee! Aww..😳 Noah and Sia are such cuties!! 😆 So Haya was an Introvert, Geek and Loved Books! Well, she is like me in the matter of talking silly! 😃 I too dont lyk to make a fool of myself in front of My Best Frnd's Love and I know how to maintain a distance. Haya gelled well wid Noa too! Tahir is still heartbroken..😔 But what had happened? What did Haya do? Thanxx fr pm! Continue Soon Di..!!

KK meri KK meri KK🤗

This is simply awesome!!...

Broken people, broken relationships, broken hearts... when you've joined the Breaker's league?? always Tod-phor???

Well, this all broken pieces and paining souls are your specially, and you know how much I love these.

Amazing start...and plz do continue...

Keep writing...

loved both the parts.quite engaging.loved the bondings and especially the first meet.waiting to read more of this.

Hello..I had read the chapter long back but commenting now.. Part 1 and part 2:
Part 1: I say it was a Dumdaar start..👍🏼.I loved it.!
Noa and Sia were beautiful..And Tahir's condition was depicted well..
Haya..Now that was interesting..though it brought out some questions which made me curious, but guess we will get the answers gradually..And I'm not in a hurry too..
About Tahir's parents..I feel Whatever they have done, He may forgive them one day but he won't forget..
Anyways on the whole it was 👍🏼

The flashback was nice..It was easy-going and as you said at the end of it..Fun and lively..Loved the fun moments between Haya-Sia..
The name Noa reminds me of Nicholas Sparks..
Brilliantly done..👍🏼
Thanks for pms..cont soon.

Originally posted by: Armagadon

Hey Heli...

Was thinking of not touching IF before April but then socha at least this one I can spare to comment on na...

You toh already know how much I love this story! THe way you spun Haya and Sia's camaraderie, Noa and his relation with Tahir...

And of course... The couple's concern for what's left of Tahir and Haya(?)

Brilliant work out here, continue sooon...

And yeah...

@ RITU... oh wait... why am I being nice to you?

RITHHHUUU : What do you mean by "Shree" You meanie weanie!

awesome KG...

pain and lonely souls always attract me and with this you are putting me into a light depression, not that i wasnt already...😆🤣

loved it...specially the relation you portrayed between Sia and Haya...and Noa intruding between them...

then comes Tahir and the whispering Haya...waiting for the next part

continue soon...

awesomw update di...