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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the note dear...and waiting!
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Thanks for the note.
Waiting for 19
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Thanks for an early update note...eagerly waiting for 19th
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Wow what a beautiful update meera..this update brought a small but sweet glimpse of their past..their never ending night phone calls or text exchanges always made me restless to know more abt them..arnav's turmoil after cutting her call abruptly when she didnt reply to his question and khushi silently making herself responsible for his condition..my heart went for arnav..arnav and maya decided to be friends for their son and maya had complications during pregnency, her bestowed motherhood, so many incidents happened in the past in three of their life..i was shocked to see daring khushi in the past..their first meeting and their irresistable attraction to each other, their first kiss uff it was beautiful.. the kiss was first initiated by khushi and afterwards led by arnav. So what happened to that daring khushi? Why did she feel insecure then? This small peak in to their past arouse many questions but i m not asking those to you..i will enjoy their a beautiful week journey the way you reveal to all of us slowly..i m loving the pace too now..this time arnav made her to bring their sweet memories which she was reluctant to open..loved meera questioning abt asr and mohan..she is so adorable..one more sleepless night came to an end..many more such nights on the way for both of them specially for khushi:) and i m also eagerly waiting for these nights:) this update reminded me one song here..chaand chupa baadal mein sharmake meri jaan..gumsum sa hai chup chup sa hai, madhosh hai khamosh hai yeh sama ha sama kuch aur hai..waiting for the next to see who is at the door..though we know it for better but eagerly wait for you do the honour in your beautiful words. Thank you.
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Update please? *puppy dog eyes*
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Arnav's absence pinches my heart. There. I said it. I hated to realize that he wasn't there at the door with his Lego-loving-mini-me-Mohan (LLMMM? Is that a good nickname?). It made my heart fall along with Khushi's, the pinch of oh, I want him here. And damn it, I don't like that pinch, so he better bring himself over quickly. Or I will drag him there myself.


I love how you touched on Khushi's insecurities. It doesn't feel like a plot device, or like you are trying to "bash it into our heads" (heh.). I love these little glimpses into the past, the peek that just draws me into her mind. It's such a natural flow, the way her reticence stems from her feeling that her parents abandoned her, and then Arnav, and then NK. Her discussion with Lavanya was so heart breaking, the acuteness of her feeling of loss (although, soul candy cracked me up). My heart tugs for her- she has been through so much, and I just wish I could pull her into a hug. I hope she takes Lavanya's advice. I want a second chance for her, dammit! Isn't life about the pursuit of happiness? It's written in our constitution, and I can't wait to see her stand up and fight for it. I know I'll have to wait- but I have faith in her.


Maya and Arnav- their friendship makes me feel so... gooey. Maya is a GIF for me, this constantly moving picture, like one of those blurry car driving by ones. I love her, for her love for her gentle giant. Her desire to see Arnav happy is just so... genuine. And I love Arnav's insecurities too, the fear that Maya notes in his eyes. The moment where she repeats his words back to him- I couldn't hold back a smile, Akka, albeit a misty smile :)



Regarding Meera. I have told you this so many times- you have an incredible, incredible talent in writing children. The overdramatic "never ever?!" (Heh. Heh.), the intrinsic curiosity, Meera noting that Mohan doesn't like it when she touches him and that learning moment- ah, I have been on Meera's side of it, and you portrayed the mini lightbulb so well. I just love her.


Also a side note, I love Lavanya as a friend- dost ho, toh aisa. Oh oh and kosher! I giggled.


Broken record hoon, but you brought it this chapter- it was done very well. It satisfies me so much to see this story come to life.


Any chance we can get the next update soon too? 😆



Love always,
Chutki :)
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Damn you are freaking AMAZING... the emotion... damn emotions...👏

Be back with more... but had to say this as I wait for you to update the second part...😃

As promised I am back...

M, my SS, ❤️ your way of story telling is like a drug and I am addicted. From the first word to the last... I take it all in, but at the end I want more despite it being long and complete.

What I love is the pace, the journey that you are taking us through week after week. Because that is what makes this so very special. Both Arnav and Khushi's life is one where things can't be declared and happen quickly as we may want... it takes time. There are so many variables, and I love how you are weaving through them.


You bring out the emotions of every character of this story, that we as readers feel it... and that my yaara is no easy feat. Take a bow 👏 and here's a hug from me 🤗 because this update had me crying and laughing.


There were so many things l loved about this update... the disappointment that Arnav and Mohan weren't at the door, I will admit I was as well. Loved the conversation between Meera and Khushi, that had my emotions all over the place for so many reasons... sigh.

Maya and Arnav, I continue to commend these two for their friendly relationship. But curiosity inside me has awoken... how did they get to where they are today... but I shall wait for you to reveal.

Last but not least... Khushi. It's heartbreaking to read how she feels about being a widow. I do hope she embraces these feelings that are awakening and follows her heart for her second chance. And luckily she has a friend like Lav who called at the perfect time.

Overall a brilliant update by a brilliant author! And anytime you want to sit down and talk about this story, let me know... because I would love to see what your shaatir dimaag is brewing up. 😉



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What was that? It was not arnav at the other end of the door? 😡 i kept my fingers crossed and kept hanging on the rope for that moment to come where arnav join the trip along with mohan to mathura on the road trip. But this update didnt bring that moment at all..you kept me all hanging there only 😭 throught while reading my heart was beating fast for their meeting..but what a splendid update that was..meera asking questions abt mohan's behaviour and khushi giving answers and giving examples in simpler way to make her little one to understand..khushi checking her phone for any messages from him every now and then..and here in hospital i loved arnav and maya's conversation..maya saying him his khushi..for that his proud smile and not yet..uff maya asking was she serious all the time? His reply no to that..and i was wondering abt how does maya came to know abt their kiss under the tree? I m loving their relationship..maya and her husband ready to cover up for him..and the besties talk over the phone..lavanya and khushi..khushi poured all her heart out to lavanya..khushi thinks being a widow she is prohibited of such feelings..lavanya tried to make her understand to move on as everyone wont get second chance in life like her..so khushi waited for arnav even though she let him go..she expected him to come back to her..throught the update i had goosebumps..loved it to the core..thank you meera for this beautiful update..and yeah i m still hanging there waiting for that moment where arnav come and surprise khushi..its in your hand to get me down in the next update soon..
Edited by GuruDeep246 - 10 years ago

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