Swarya FF - 'Different this time around' [Part 2 updated, Pa

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Hello all,

I'm new on Swaragini forum. I do read regularly before going to bed but haven't posted anything in IF for maybe 3-4 years. Just been busy with school that's all.

Anyway, I wanted to get the forum's opinion on starting a new FF surrounding Swarya (I guess you can tell I'm a Swarya fan)!

I have a passion for writing but haven't written anything other than research papers for last 3 years so my writing skills need a little brush up. That being said, what's the general consensus? People interested in reading something, as silly as it may be?

Open to ideas as well so keep 'em coming :)

M
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Table of Contents:

Part 1 [Page 1]: Tere sang chain bhi mukhjo, tere sang bekarari hai

Part 2 [Page 3]: Muskurane ki wajah tum ho
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Part 1: Tere sang chain bhi mukhjo, tere sang bekarari hai

He couldn't go to sleep...not right away at least. Why was he here? Why was he helping Swaragini? Why was he giving this plan his all? Shekhar and Sharmishtha weren't his parents, nor was he going to gain much if their alliance worked out. Of course he had made everyone believe he regretted his father's doings and wanted to correct them. Part of it was true. But he wondered if there was more he had subconsciously blocked out of his own psyche.

He flipped and he flopped, almost awakening Shekhar in the process. I better continue my thoughts on the terrace before Sir interrogates me, he told himself. Tiptoeing towards the veranda, he ensured he even held his breathe, lest he wake up Dadi in the process...Or Ragini for that matter. He immediately wondered why that thought even crossed his mind.

He let the cool breeze brush past his cheeks. It felt good. It felt relieving. For years, he had felt choked but being here only for two days had liberated him. For the first time in life, he breathed for himself, on his own terms. There was no Durgaprasad Maheshwari to implement his conservative thoughts. His train of thought was suddenly interrupted by a familiar voice.

"What are you doing here?" grilled Swara, no pleasantries prior to or following that.

"No hello? No hi? Come on, I was just started to thinking nobody was ruling my life and then you show up" Lakshya replied nonchalantly. He sure loved riling her up. There was something entertaining in Swara being irritated. He just enjoyed pushing her buttons. It brings out the best in her, he told himself, a smirk leaving his lips unknowingly.

"It's two in the morning. What are you doing up?" Swara getting more and more irritated as her inquires weren't being addressed. Why is he like this? Why can't he just make everyone's life easier by answering in simple words? Ughh!

"Couldn't sleep. New place, new bed, you know..." he attempted to brush it off. "The better question is, why are YOU here? Like you so graciously pointed out, it is two in the morning after all" he continued, not allowing her to put him on the spot.

"I like to come up here sometimes when the rest of the world is sleeping" she calmly answered, gazing off towards the sky.

"The rest of the world isn't sleeping, Shona. You know, it's probably midday in North America, dawn in Australia, and evening in UK... just saying, FYI" he smirked, knowing his comment definitely irked her.

"You think you're oh-so-smart, don't you? It was a figure of speech. But how would you know that?" Swara mumbled, adding "loser" under her breath. "And STOP CALLING ME SHONA!" she added in a loud voice.

"Shhh! You're going to wake everyone up" Lakshya automatically proceeded to shush his Shona physically with his hand. It was a jerk reaction, nothing unnatural about it.

To be continued...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice FF...keep up the great work
swarya always!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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great job dear! what is your name btw?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like it. Keep going. I want to know what happens next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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welcome to the forum dear 😊 😊
title of the ff is superb 👏 👏 👏
lovely ff dear soo dreamy and awesome hope we get to see more swarya moments in show nd ofcourse in ur ff 😛 😛 😛
and plzz do continue ur ff dear 😳 😳
will be waitng for ur updates nd swarya cute nokh jhoks 😆 😆 😆
excited for the further story of ur ff 😊 😊 😊







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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc ❤️
do continue ur ff
bdw ur name...???
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It was amazing !!! you should write more often! Please upload soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is such a lovely one ! First if all Congo for the new story 🥳
Welcome to the SwarYa world 😃
The first part was rocking ! Yaar I loved the starting ! 👏And then Lucky saying that no one is here to rule his life 😳 and then Swara ending up with him in the terrace .
Loved how lucky said that he loved to irritate her 😆😆 and then the dialogue which is that most of the people are awake in the rest part of the world was 🤣
Nice beginning . Continue soon .
Love
Sam

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