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Aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Came accross this story and i read your prologue, really beautiful concept and interesting story.

I really would like to read more about. 😃

Pm if you can 😉

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Res.

Unres.

It was lovely darling.

I'm becoming your fan now.

Ittu si hai n u write so well.

Loved both the parts n it was awesome.

Loved Zoya here n also Asad but here I find the hero is Zoya's father,

Until now I have seen mostly Asad's mother to be a cool mom in majority of the stories.

But here her father is super cool.

Asad Najma bonding great.

The narration n pace of story is also great.

I like the story to be from Asad's POV.

LoveLy.

Please continue soon.

N I don't like her ex just like Asad doesn't.

Edited by sweet_tehs - 10 years ago

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: radadolcevida
Came accross this story and i read your prologue, really beautiful concept and interesting story.
I really would like to read more about. 😃

Pm if you can 😉

Thank you Sis!! Glad you are interested...

Will do surely!

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

res
unres
Awesome post...Long too...
Loved AsYa ..too much
The way she said he smelled old...😆
Continue soon...
Why no pms..?

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

When are you writing more..?
Sry for asking for more after such a long update but I cant help it..
it was such a gripping story and such a beautiful one..!
Loved reading it..

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Abi

@-ABI-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Wonderful start Aishwa..
Well I have read the plot of this book...and this story is almost on right track only..
Never seen Dilshaad like this...she is behaving like Shireen here...
Asad being intimidated by the stranger girl ( ZOYA )..i guess...well next part will be their only I guess..
Actually liked Najma's part also here...
Continue soon..