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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Fantastic Update

Why is Geet reacting this way to Maan , in fact Maan seems to be more matured even though he is younger than her .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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|| Chapter 3 ||

Geet takes out cloths one by one from her luggage with confusion and wondering whose cloths are these itnne chote chote kapade shayad meri luggage kisi aur ki luggage ke saath exchange hogaya hain...babji abb main kya pehanu? Holding up a spaghetti top.

Maan comes out of bathroom after changing and looks at geet talking to self holding up a negligible black top. Geet looks at maan and hides that top behind her avoiding his questioning eyes.

Maan "Geet what happened?" comes closer to her.

Geet turns around quickly to pick those revealing cloths from bed to shove into the trolley in hurry before sees them but maan was fast and he noticed all those cloths half lying on bed and other half in suitcase. Geet mumbles " wo...main ...meri luggage shayad exchange hogai hain...maine hey kapade pack nahi ki thi...wo main...hey...dress nahi pehansakth q ki bahut tand bhi hain aur ...maine pehale kabhi aise kapde nahi pehani hain..."

Maan checked the tag on both luggage and it says Mr & Mrs. Khurana on both luggage. Maan "Geet I don't think there is some mistake coz the tag says its ours luggage..see" maan shows the tags to geet.

Geet frowns "per hey kapde..kaise.." Before maan says anything, a loud ringing of cell phone caught their attention.

Maan sees the caller name and picks up rolling his eyes "bhabhi...I am sure apko need nahi aayi hogai jab takk app humhari taang na keeche.. hey lo aap geet se baat karlon.." maan passes cell to geet.

Geet looks at the phone and then at maan "hello.." maan goes to dressing table to comb his wet hair.

Aaliya askes with excitement "jetaniji kasi lagi hamari dusri surprise...?"

Geet narrows her eyebrows "surprise??"

Aaliya "haa surprise jo humne aapki luggage main pack kiya hain...naina ne wo sab shopping kit hi..i hope tumhey ho pasand aaya hoga...aur hamare devar ko bhi " she laughes when naina smacks aaliya.

Now geet understood how those cloths came from in her luggage. Geet's face became all over red, babaji innlogon ko kya kya soojti hain...main inkey saamney aise kapade kaise pehansakti hun...mujhe tho inn kapdo ko dekhtey huwe hi sharam aati hain

Geet "ji..bhabhi main hey kapdae nahi pehansakti idar...q ki bahut tand hain yaha...mere saadiyan aur salwar kaha hain?"

Naina hears that and grabs phone from aaliya "chup..tumhey waha honeymoon pe beja hain...theertyatra keliye nahi...agar tand lagi tho hamare devar ko bolodho ..wo sab deklenge...samji.." hai bagwan iss ladkhi ka hum kya kare...

Geet eyes widens "per naina bhahi..hum bhahar aise kapde kaise pehanle"

Aaliya takes phone from naina " maan ko bolo ki tumhey shopping keliye lekey jaye..accha maan ko phone dho zara "

Geet " ji " gives phone to maan.

Maan "hogai tassalli...keechliya tang jitna keechna tha aapko..." Aaliya tells something from other side and maan's face becomes serious all of a sudden. Maan looks at geet and goes out of the room to talk more privately.

Maan "ji bhabhi..kahiye aapko kya kehana tha.."

Aaliya " Maan.. As a doctor I suggest you to take it slow with geet. You know what I mean? Geet's psychological condition is very fragile and easily she can get affected whatever you say or do to her."

Maan was confused why his bhabhi suddenly talking in her professional mode. "I don't understand bhabhi ..why are you telling me this now? And what condition you are talking about?"

Aaliya " After your's and geet marriage, two week later geet's elder sister preet came to meet me at hospital and she said certain things about geet's family and things geet had to endure in her maika. It's really disturbing and inhuman how her family is. You know geet didn't know that she is getting married until a couple of days prior to your marriage. Her family didn't even ask whether she wants to get married or happy with this alliance or they didn't even say that you are two year younger to her." Maan rubbed his temple.

Aaliya continued "does geet know that you were the one who sent papa to her home proposing a marriage and that you were already half way in love with her and also aware of the age difference? And one more important thing is geet was beaten very badly by her family because she refused to marry two year younger groom, i.e, you. Now I know why geet was burning from fever for a week since the marriage day. Geet didn't even let me or mai or naina to help her to change. Aur usne saara dard apne andar hi chupali aur uff tak nahi kiya...I don't know how geet survived in that hell all these years. Mujhe tho soochte hi mere romtey kade utthe hain...jungle janwaron se bhi battar nikle wo log."

Every passing second maan's anger only increased hearing what his geet had to go through and endure the torture. How can her own family treat her like an animal? His blood boiled knowing geet was beaten by her family.

Aaliya "maan I think you need to talk with geet before you both take next step ahead in this marriage. I am telling this as a doctor. She needs to open up with you. And you should tell her everything and about the age difference..I don't know why is that so big deal for her? You have to make her understand with examples that age is not a big factor in marriages if two person love each other... She has this age thing deeply rooted in mind that it's stopping her to see every good thing around her. take me and shiv as a example and take mai's and papa's example do whatever it takes to make her open up to you but subtly."

Maan rubbed his face "I don't know bhabhi..I want to hurt each person of her family but I couldn't because it hurts my geet more than she already is. I know her she never wants to avenge them"

Aaliya "I know..maan ..geet is a selfless, innocent and kind person in nature. She could never hurt anything or anyone knowingly. Her sister preet was so worried for geet. So I discussed about this matter with mai, papa, naina, shiv, dev and we came to conclusion that geet need some alone time with you to understand you and accept this marriage without any hesitation. We didn't tell you anything coz we need you to be strong and level minded to handle geet's state of mind. She is confused, hurt, scared and stressed. Geet is like a cocooned butterfly now and I want you to help geet to break that cocoon. Now everything is up to you maan. Do whatever it takes but bring a new geet home along with when you come back from honeymoon. Call me if you want to talk anything. And all the best devarji.."

Maan "Ok bhabhi...I will do whatever it takes...I mean it whatever" maan heard naina shouting behind before cutting the call geet ko bahut tand lagthi hain usse thoda extra garam rakkhna.

Maan watched outside the snow fall and the dark sky. He wanted to take away her all miseries-pain away and just give her love, love and love.

Geet's voice made maan turn around and saw her standing at the bedroom door in his full neck sweater which is extra large for geet. His sweater covered till her thighs over very short shorts with socks on. She is looking like a snow rabbit, so cute and innocent.

Geet "ji..wo saare tops chote hain..isiliye main aapke sweater pehaliya.. wo bhabhi ne ek bhi saari ya suit nahi chodha hain...sabb ke sabb itte chote-chote kapde hain" said innocently and showed him pinching the space with two fingers for chote chote.

Maan just wanted to kiss her round cheeks; its sin to be this cute yet innocent and seducing.

Maan walks to her "geet you don't need to explain anything to me. Aapka tho haq bantha hain mujhe per aur har ek cheez per jo mera hain"

Geet started at him without blinking. What she will tell him that he surprised her yet again? How can he say like that? Since the day she got married, every second he surprised me with his words, no one ever called her with respect "aap"..No one showed so much of concern and care in her family. He even said..he loves her...aur hey bhi kehdiya unkey har cheez mera hain aur unper mera haq bantha hain?

A shell that has been built around her cold heart cracked bit by bit. It felt so relived to feel light at heart and warmness filling around it.

Geet smiled reluctantly slowly asked him "aapko kya khaana hain?"

Maan thought this is a start at least she smiled. "Hmmm how about I make dinner for us and you sit here and enjoy the hot coffee?"

Geet asked him with wide eyes "ji aap? Aapko khaana banana aata hain?"

Maan saw her surprised face and thought for a second before answering "hmm no but you must help me"

Geet " ji aapko q taqlife.."

Maan takes her hands in his " geet do you trust me?" Geet nodes immediately for a yes which is natural to her.

Maan "let's pretend we are two strangers stuck in this cottage. Forget about everything else..Why are we here? Where do we come from? At this moment I am not ur husband and you are not my wife.. You are only geet and I am just maan here...two strangers lost and stuck in this cottage ...okay? "

Geet again nodes smiling at him . Maan "Let me introduce myself first and then you do the same. Let's start being friends? And I have one condition, you must call me by my name Maan...just maan no ji or aap and same applies to me also..Done?"

Geet tilts her head sideways "ji... I mean aap ...nahi nahi ma-ma-maanji..mera matlab maan"

Maan chuckles and extends his hand for a handshake "Hi..I am maan..mujhse dosti karoge?"

Geet shies but takes his offered hand for a handshake "Hi I am geet...mujhse dosti karoge?"

Maan grins at her the way she parroted him "hell yeahhh"

"Since we became friends, let's make some meeta to celebrate our new friendship"

Geet's eyes twinkled with full of excitement. This is the first time maan saw her shining eyes with amusement. Maan thought well that went fine..it's a start..a Very good start..maan you are long way to go..to win your wife's heart and it's not far as you already have her trust. And I know she definitely deep down feels something for me.

Maan says offering his arm to geet "tho chale ms.stranger.. Kitchen is that way. I am sooo hungry right now..."

Geet hesitated for a second but not for too long. She smiled linking her arms with his. "Ji.."

Maan raised his eyebrow " hmm? Did I hear JI again there?"

Geet blushed " Ji...wo...maan"

Maan pulls her red cheeks "hmm that's better.." making her to blush again

Both goes to kitchen feeling light at heart and anticipating what brings out of this new friendship tomorrow.


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|| Author's Note ||


Hello Readers

Did you guys read my last note in chapter 2? if not please go and read for once. I have posted Chapter 3 now and chapter 4 in another couple of hours. I have to update another story too Mangalyam Tantunanena in another 3 or 4 hours. I will reply each one of your comments in one single post after posting chapter 4. so don't think I have ignored your comment or something. ignore the mistakes and dont forget to hit like and comment. all i ask is just a comment how do you feel about the update and what you would like to read further.

Thank you.

I will be right back with chapter 4 in an hour or 2.


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Jhaanvi

Edited by JaasChowdhray - 10 years ago
taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Chapter 3

Geet's family actually ill treated her , I mean fine be strict but to hit a child and especially a girl child that is just terrible so now I can sort of understand why Geet thinks she been elder to her husband is such a major problem . its all due to her upbringing .
Maan's bhabhi speaks to him about Geet and tell him to bring back a new Geet and Maan also promises that he will do anything for Geet .
Geet sees the amount of respect Maan shows her which she never received in her own family but now she gets from her husband .
Maan telling Geet that both should pretend as if they are strangers and become friends now that was awesome and I think this concept will ease Geet also thinking about Maan as a friend rather than her husband .

Update was just Brilliant
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
It's amazing. Geet was shocked when she had opened her suitcase. It was filled with short dresses. This task was done by her devrani and jethani. Omg maan's bhabhi revealed a truth about geet. They told him that how geet was misbehaved in her own house. She used to be beaten at her house. And she got to know about her alliance o lay before some days. When geet comes to know about age difference then she denied for marriwge. But her family didn't hear out her and forcible made her married. Maan was shocked knowing truth. He wanted to punish those monsters but he stopped himself as it would only bring pain for geet. Maan is trying to make geet comfortable with him and what can be the best option other than friendship. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
geet family members r like monster they beat their own daughter so cruel poor girl suffered so much glad that maan now know about geets problems n now he will help her to come out from her shell lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Nice part...
Both started with friendship...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
great update dear please do update next part waiting for the next part
finally hopefully they open and share their view can't wait
so please dear update thanks update great works please do coitninue
thanks alot 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Awesome way of taking the story yaar. Maan and his sis in laws r so sweet. Not only sweet but naughty too. Loved them all. How geet was treated could make anyone feel angry and here maan loves her so no wonder his blood boiled. Theway he made the situation so nice to start as friends is wonderful. Great going dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Awesome update
Geet bag full of small clothes geet family so cruel
Maan taking small steps
Both became friends
I loved the update so much...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
awesome update...
geet's family is worse than animals...why will they do that...they should suffer for their deeds...
finally maan had taken one step towards their relation...friendship...well best start for any relation...

loved it...

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