Sandhir ts- mommy or wify?[completed] last part-page 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Wow new story
After reading the title I was a bit confused
Bt after reading it I m so in love with this story

It was really superb
Sanyu the CEO
She's in love with him madly
Awww parth n shanaya r so sweet n supporting
Rd has a son
Rishab was so cute


I m excited to know rd past
Sanyu loves rd n rishab both

Excited for next
Update soon


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is an amazing & beautiful story...eagerly waiting for the 2nd part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
super excting concept
loved it
rishab is super cute
love his and rd's relation
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Posted: 10 years ago
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THANK U SOO DAMN MUCH GUYS FOR SUPPORTING THIS TS
LOVE U ALL
HERE IS THE NEXT PART

Part 2

At sanyu's home

Shanaya-parth dekho yeh kya keh rahi hai

Parth-kya hua?

Shanaya-woh rd hai na uska ek baccha bhi hai aur ab bhi yeh keh rahi hai ki she loves them

Parth looks at sanyu who was chilling on the sofa shuffling through channels

He goes and sits next to her and signal shanaya to calm down

Parth-sanyu

Sanyu-hmmm

Parth-princess,he has got a child beta

Sanyu-correction bro,not just a child its a cute child[pinches his cheeks] and i

Love him now,awww mela baccha

Hearing that both parth and shanaya's eyes widens in shock

Shanaya-lekin sanyu woh kisi aur ka

Sanyu-to kya hua jab mein rd se shaadi karloongi woh mera beta ho jaega

Parth-lekin...

Sanyu-oh c'mon bhai don't be soo narrow minded,i love him more than i love rd,pls

Shanaya-lekin sanyu tu uss bacche se sirf ek baar mili hai

Sanyu-yep,u know love at first sight[winks]

She gets up from the coach and declares

Sanyu-i love them and if i'll have a married life, it'll be with rd and my dear rishab

She goes to her room

Shanaya looks at parth,with a do-smt look for which parth shrugs his shoulder

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Days passed and sanyukta and rishab's meeting increased

One day rishab and sanyukta were sitting in a park with rishab in sanyukta's lap

Rishab-sanyu

Sanyu-hmmm

Rishab-tomorrow is parents day at school

Sanyu-dad will come na?

Rishab-no,he has got a meeting and he says the same each year

Sanyu-its ok na champ,dad is a busy man

Rishab-thats why i need a mom

Sanyu just caresses his hair

Rishab-sanyu?

Sanyu-hmmm

Rishab-if i'll ask u smt,will be angry with me

Sanyu-can ur sanyu be angry with u,chalo ask

Rishab-can i call u mom

Sanyu was speechless at this innocent question of rishab,on finding no reply from

Sanyu,rishab lowers his face and mutters a sorry

Sanyu-why sorry,listen u can call me mom

Rishab[jumping from sanyu's lap]-really

Sanyu-yes my baby

Rishab-love u mom

Sanyu-love u too my baby,but not in front of ur dad

Rishab-okie

Thats when a girl of rishab's age comes running with an elder woman following her

Girl-hey rishab

Rishab-hi,deepika,how r u?

Deepika- i m fine

Soon the lady also reaches them

Deepika-is she ur mom

Rishab[smiling widely]-yes she is my mom,sanyukta

Deepika's mom-hello,waise apko kabhi dekha nahi meetings mein

Sanyu-woh mein aur rd,oh i mean rishab ke dad bohot busy rehte hai,iss liye

Deepika's mom-oh,app bhi business karti hai

Rishab-mom aggarwal industries ki CEO hai

Deepika-wow,really aunty

Deekpka's mom-arrey wah,bohot accha hai

They had a chit chat and thn the girl and her mom leaves

Sanyu-chalo rishab mein apko ghar chod deti hoon

Rishab-ok mom

Soon they reaches rd's house and a servant comes to take him but before going

Rishab places a kiss on sanyukta's cheeks

Rishab-bye mom

Sanyu-bye beta

The servant standing there looks shocked at rishab calling sanyukta "mom"

Sanyu goes from there and rishab turns to the servant and raises his eyebrow

As if asking "what" for which servant shrugs his shoulder in "nothing"

Rishab-good

Saying so he enters the house

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Soon it was parents day at rishab's school and as rd was busy sanyu and rishab

made a plan that sanyu will come

They were in his school

Sanyu-baby,mujhe darr lag raha hai agar rd ko pata chala to he'll kill me

Rishab-c'mon mom,mein baccha hoon ya app,itna kyu darti ho,chalo ab

Sanyu-hmmm

They go inside and as soon as they disappear a black BMW stops infront of the

School and steps outside the great RSS

Rd-rishab ko surprise doonga ajj

Saying so he also goes inside adjusting his suit

Here sanyu was talking with rishab's teacher

Teacher-Mrs.shekhawat,rishab is a very bright student'lekin bacco ko parents ka saath bhi

To chahiye aur app dono mein se koi bhi kabhi bhi kisi meeting mein nahi aaya

App logo ko bacche par bhi thoda dhyan dena chahiye...

Sanyu tries her best to tell his teacher that she is not his mother but the teacher was

Continuously blabbering,on the other hand rd who has just entered the classroom

Heard the teacher calling sanyukta "Mrs.aggarwal" was boiling with anger

Thats when he feels someone tugging at his pants,he looks below and finds

Rishab looking at him with a scared expression,rd was abt to say smt when the

Teacher who was blabbering till now speaks looking at rishab and rd

Teacher-oh look today both mom and dad r here,hello Mr.shekhawat

Rd-hello mam

Rd comes and sits next to sanyukta and she goes stiff whereas rishab stands next to them

And again teacher stats blabbering the same thing to rd

Soon the meeting gets over and without looking at sanyukta,rd takes rishab outside

On reaching the car sanyukta call him

Sanyu-Mr.shekhawat

Rd-listen Miss.aggarwal,i don't know why u did this but what u did was so irresponsible

Of u

Sanyu-but Mr.shekhawat i was just...

Rd-u were just what acting like my son's mother

Sanyu[raises her voice a bit]-i was not acting Mr.shekhawat,i really want to be rishab's mother

She covers her mouth with her hands and rd looks at her shocked whereas rishab was

Smiling

Sanyu-i...i m sorry...woh mein...

Rishab-go mom go

Rd glares at rishab

Rd-rishab go and sit inside the car

Rishab sits inside the car and rd turns to sanyukta

Sanyu- i m sorry mr.shekhawat,i didn't meant to shout this way

Rd-its ok Miss aggarwal,i just want to say that don't give rishab false hopes

And stay away from him frm now onwards

Rd turns to sit inside the car when sanyu calls from behind

Sanyu-excuse me Mr.shekhawat,but that sorry was not for what i said but it was

For the way i said coz i mean what i said[smiling]

Rd turns to face sanyukta with a shocked expression

Rd-u know nothing aggarwal so its better to stay away

Sanyu-i would like to know shekhawat and one more thing u can't separate me from rishab

She goes from there not giving any chance to rd to speak

Rd sits inside the car and drives home,throughout the drive neither rishab nor rd exchanged

Any words.As soon as they reach home rishab goes straight to his room and rd follows

Him

Rd-rishab?

No reply,instead rishab takes his school bag and starts studying

Rd-rishab look at me i m talking to u

Rishab looks at him and thats when rd finds his eyes were watering and his heart melts

Rd-hey champ,what happened,why r u crying

Rishab[crying]-now mom will not meet me?

Rd don't know what he should say

Rishab[crying]-dad i want sanyu mom dad,pls dad bring her home forever dad,pls

Rd-thats not possible champ and she is not your mom

Rishab-no she is my mom and i want her to be my mom forever,pls dad

Rd-listen champ,we'll talk abt thins tomorrow,go to sleep

Rishab-no,first promise me that u'll bring sanyu mom

Rd-go to sleep rishab and no more talking on this topic

He lays with rishab and makes him sleep thn he steps out of the bed and dials

Someone's number

Rd-i want to have a meeting with u,now at ccd within 10 mins

He cuts the call changes into a white shirt and black pant,takes his car keys

And goes out

He reaches ccd and finds sanyukta sitting on a table near the window,he goes there

And sits front of the person who was sanyukta

There was an awkward silence between them which sanyukta decides to break

Sanyu-how is rishab

Rd- he is fine,sleeping right now

Sanyu-hmmm

Again silence,thats when waiter comes

Rd-i'll have a cappuccino and u?

Sanyu-me too

Rd-so two cappuccino

Waiter-thank u anything else

Rd-no,thank u

Waiter goes from there

Sanyu-so shekhawat tell what i don't know

Rd-why r u doing this to rishab

Sanyu-really?it should be who who must ask u this,why r u denying him his mothers love

Who is she rd atleast just tell him

Rd- i can't

Sanyu-why u can't?don't he deserves to know who his mother is

Rd-i can't tell him

Sanyu-but why rd

Rd-becoz if i'll tell him abt his mother thn i'll have to tell him that he is not my son

Now it was sanyukta's turn to look shocked

Sanyu-what?he is not ur son

Rd-no he is not my son

Sanyu-thn who r his parents rd?

Rd-he is my sister's son,she and her husband were traveling in flight to Malaysia,at that time

Rishab was just 6 moths old but the plane crashed and i lost my sister and brother-in-law

And my rishab lost his parents,at that time i decided that i'll be his mother and father and

Its the only reason i never thought of marriage coz i was afraid that she won't be able

To give him mothers love and i never wanted rishab to know ever that he is not my son

I don't want a girl who will be a wife for me i want someone who will be rishab's

Mother and i know such girls are very difficult to find so i just...

Sanyu-u just decided not to have a married life

All this time rd was looking at the table and when sanyu asks him this he looks at

His front only to find the seat empty and when he looks towards his left

sanyukta was standing there,without saying anything she hugs him

Sanyu-u r really am amazing person rd and i m proud of myself that i fell in

Love with such a person,i love u rd and i don't care if u love me or not

But yeah i promise u that if gven a chance i'll prove to a good mom

To rishab

Rd-but i m afraid

Sanyu-i m not

She breaks the hug

Sanyu-so breaking all the norms of the society,i m asking u would u mind accepting

Me as ur rishab's mom

Rd was abt to say smt when they hear a voice

V-say yes dad pls,i love her

They turn only to find rishab standing there along with shanaya, parth and renuka

Rd-rishab,since how long u were here

Rishab-just now when mom asked u to marry her[excitedly claps his hand]

Rd breaths a sigh of relief

Parth-to shaadi ki taiyariyaan kare

Rd just nods his head and rishab runs to them,both of them kneel down and he

Places a kiss on their cheeks

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1 year later

Rd-what is this rishab,u again touched my car,how many times i've told u

Not to do ur experiments on my car

Rishab again did smt with rd's car engine and was receiving the scolding

Sanyu-offo rd,kyu daat rahe ho mere bacche ko,kya kiya hai usne bas apne papa ki tarah

Banne ki koshis hi to kar raha hai

Saying so she picks him up and asks

Sanyu-hey baby,apne papa se poocha tha car ko touch karne se pehle

Rishab-yes

Rd-mujhse kab poocha rishab apne?

Rishab-jab app newspaper pad rahe the tab meine poocha aur apne koi reply nahi diya

Rd-exactly,thn why did u open my car

Rishab-mom ne kaha tha ki jab dads kuch nahi bolte to it means a yes

Rd slaps his forehead and sanyukta kisses rishab on his cheeks

Sanyu-my prince

Rd-aur mein?

Sanyu-my king

The trio laughs and thn their after a long time rd realized what a happy family is and

Each time he used to thank god for giving him such an understanding wife and a loving

Mom to his son.

The end


SO THIS WAS THE END,HOW WAS IT,I HOPE U GUYS LIKED IT PLS READER DO TELL ME HOW WAS IT,I JUST WAIT EAGERLY FOR UR REVIEWS AND YEAH DON'T FORGET THE"LIKE" BUTTON😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
perfect ending
really amazing concept
so pure and blissful love the trio share
unconditional love
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Aww dat was a beautiful ending
Loved it
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Priyanka.saha

perfect ending

really amazing concept
so pure and blissful love the trio share
unconditional love
loved it

thank u soo much dear
i m glad u loved it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: mika17

Aww dat was a beautiful ending

Loved it
Thnku for the pm

thanx a lot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Awww perfect ending
U really penned it beautifully


Sanyu so selflessly loves rishab
Loved their bonding


I knew it that rishab was not his son
He was his sis son

He took good care of him


Sandhir pefecy together


Write more
Would love to read

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
superb concept yaar... the ending was amazing... lvd it to the core.. keep writing more...😊

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